ArcticAnimals

@everyone

Sooooo….

My life suddenly got really busy, and I didn’t really get to read much of the book either…. My family has read it in the past though, but I don’t know how much I really remember to give any thoughts.

I’m still excited/interested in hearing what anyone else thought though!

@ellette-giselle

GIRL! YOU QUOTE!! I loved that part of Freedom’s Fire! That is such a good quote!!

Lol 😄😄 Yeah, I liked the part too.

Thanks!! I’m not feeling too happy with it. I wanted to add the backpack that Min said he carries along with the mail bag… but I wasn’t sure how I was gonna do that lol (and all the colors looked brighte…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Ayla

“My name is Crosshair.” growled the man. “And no, I would rather find a way out of here.”

I sighed. Typical boring adult. “Well, maybe we could find a way out while we go on a quest. Like, a secret passage full of deadly traps under a moat! I doubt you could get out even if you tried. It’s a well known fact that you can’t escape…[Read more]

@theshadow

I’m not great at critiquing, but I did notice one thing.

Eldred Favri, a knight under Lord Damien, was about 21.

Five today… that would make Ninety. Ninety… ninety of his beloved countrymen, women, and even children, dead.

The boy answered, grinning, then, with an air of pride, added, “I’m 7.” “Seven? Well, that certainly is a fine a…

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*….me suddenly realizing that I said I would submit my pic today….*

Okay here is my picture of Jonathan…

@freed_and_redeemed

Ok! I’m Bridget E. on Goodreads.

I’ll send a request.

@ellette-giselle

Nice! He looks like Keefe Sencen.

My submission is almost finished. I shall post it sometime today or tomorrow. 👩‍🎨

@whalekeeper

I wrote five hundred words! 😈😈

@JONAS

YOU’RE ALIVE!!

ALSO,

They come out every Monday at noon (I think), and I think they’re planning on releasing an entire third of the book this way.

WHAT????

@freed_and_redeemed

I’m on Goodreads, if you’d like another friend.

@theducktator

Oh, I just realized I never commented on this! I love it, Howard is super funny lol.

@theducktator

I knowwww, I literally just saw it a little before you posted it!!! 😀

@theshadow

I was actually planning to have Howard get captured and taken to the zoo in a later chapter, lol.

@hybridlore

The only definition of DMV I found was Department of Motor Vehicles, so hopefully that’s right. Linda wants a Ferrari.

@rae

Ooh, a fair! She would get her beak stuck in a caramel apple. XD

@linus-smallprint

Lol I love t…[Read more]