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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
Wow. Everyone…I don’t know what to say…Just…just…here *hands out ice cream* Thank you!!!!
@graciegirl Yay! I’m so glad you liked it! *salutes you back* What was your favorite line?
@daeus It is the bestistest place on the internet, after all! 😀 And I love that line too. I tried to incorporate your ice cream and scones and raspberries.…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic Reader Behavior Survey in the forum Publishing & Platform 7 years, 7 months ago
Hey, friends, see if you can help me brainstorm for a bit.
So far, about fifty people have taken the reader behavior survey. That’s pretty awesome. Fifty people can show us some neat things about reader behavior, but we’re going to need a lot more need more if we’re hoping for reliable and detailed data.
So maybe my outlook was too limited.…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
Okay, that has to be the LONGEST post ever. 😛
@daeus @kate-flournoy @kina-lamb @jane-maree @ethryndal @aratrea (this is the frog story) @emma-flournoy @overcomer @audrey-caylin @jess @anyone else looking for entertainment -
DelightInLife started the topic Help with a Story Idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
Greetings, fellow members of the Kingdom!
Thank you all for giving me such a warm welcome! I have really been enjoying reading articles, participating in the forum, and seeing all the ideas that others have to share!
About two years ago an idea for a story started developing in my head after my sister and I acted out a story together. I’ve t…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A #2 in the forum Theme Mastery 7 years, 7 months ago
@Aratrea Arg, I haven’t even been able to think about Theme Mastery for a while because my family’s been in the middle of a really stressful move. Um…okay, I think the 13th or the 14 would work best for me, though I would be able to do the 17th too, if I had to. I have a class on the 17th that’s from 1:30-3, so I probably wouldn’t be able to…[Read more]
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Shaina replied to the topic Homework for Video 12: Foil Characters in the forum Writing Assignments 7 years, 7 months ago
Thank you Josiah for giving me the impetus I need to make these characters less flat. 🙂
Allie: She is the princess that I have mentioned over and over again and never named. She inspires loyalty in everyone except herself. She doesn’t want to be a princess and would rather be anywhere else than here. She becomes to Brigen the reason why he fights…[Read more] -
Shaina replied to the topic ARCHIVED – Homework for Video 11: Scene to Story Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 7 years, 7 months ago
This story is more of a novella, so trying to find a set of scenes that weren’t key scenes was impossible. Oh well, here we go! I also just realized that my reaction sequences are rather small, looks like they will have to be broadened whenever I get around to editing it.
Scene One:
Brigen and his friend complete the first part of their mission,…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A #2 in the forum Theme Mastery 7 years, 7 months ago
@Aratrea I won’t be able to do any of those. :'( It’s the time, unfortunately. That specific period is really busy for our whole family on any normal day, and with a new baby in the house (yes! New little sister; tenth sibling! 😀 ) I would feel really bad about shrugging my work off on the others, even if only for an hour.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Homework for Video 12: Foil Characters in the forum Writing Assignments 7 years, 7 months ago
@Aratrea yay good. 🙂
Yes, my MC sees how ‘in control’ Tain looks about everything and starts leaning toward copying his EiL (and almost does for a chapter or so) before he sees how it ends up. -
Jane Maree replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A #2 in the forum Theme Mastery 7 years, 7 months ago
@aratrea Monday 17th is the best for me. I am around-ish for the other days, but I’m actually at my cousin’s house so I’m not sure how good her connection is to be able to be watching live-streamed videos. I’ll have to check with her, if it ends up being anywhere between the 10th-16th.
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Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A #2 in the forum Theme Mastery 7 years, 7 months ago
@aratrea the 13th is the only one I can make, unfortunately 😛 I have something scheduled during that exact hour on the 14th, and I’ll be in the car with no wi-fi on the 17th. But I’ll manage with whatever is decided 🙂
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A #2 in the forum Theme Mastery 7 years, 7 months ago
@aratrea The 14th works the best for me, but I could probably swing the other dates too, if they are picked.
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Shaina replied to the topic Discussion for Video Eleven: Scene to Story Structure in the forum Discussion Questions 7 years, 7 months ago
*pantpantgasp* I made it! This time the homework was hard.
The book I am using this time is The Golden Lamps by Ed Dunlop. It is part of The Terrestria Chronicles.
The theme of the book is that the Kings business is more important than our own business.
The background of these scenes is that the village is in the middle of building a castle to…[Read more] -
Shaina replied to the topic Discussion for Video Eleven: Scene to Story Structure in the forum Discussion Questions 7 years, 7 months ago
*pantpantgasp* I made it! This time the homework was hard.
The book I am using this time is The Golden Lamps by Ed Dunlop. It is part of The Terrestria Chronicles.
The theme of the book is that the Kings business is more important than our own business.
To give a little background so these scenes, which were taken from the middle of the book,…[Read more] -
Jane Maree replied to the topic Homework for Video 12: Foil Characters in the forum Writing Assignments 7 years, 7 months ago
Alrighty…
Tain: Friend/companion to the Protagonist. EiL: Fight for your freedom. This compares to the protagonist’s original ‘run from anything that threatens your freedom’ (although he begins to switch toward fighting for freedom part way through). Similarities: they’re both outlaws, and both are very stubborn and convinced that their way is al…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Homework for Video 12: Foil Characters in the forum Writing Assignments 7 years, 7 months ago
Alrighty…
Tain: Friend/companion to the Protagonist. EiL: Fight for your freedom. This compares to the protagonist’s original ‘run from anything that threatens your freedom’ (although he begins to switch toward fighting for freedom part way through). Similarities: they’re both outlaws, and both are very stubborn and convinced that their way is…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Reader Behavior Survey in the forum Publishing & Platform 7 years, 7 months ago
KeePers everywhere!
1,000 strong. That’s my goal.
I am thrilled to announce the launch of the new Reader Behavior Survey. If you haven’t already read through this thread, the Reader Behavior Survey is a survey I put together that asks readers detailed questions to probe into how they think and what influences them. “Why?” you ask. Well, these…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Is the "love interest" necessary? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 this is a good question, and @Aratrea has a good answer. I’d just like to add that first, it is possible to write a good romance without experience if you’re looking on it as essentially a really, really deep friendship. Obviously romance is more than that, but it will be easier to let the character’s slip into romance if…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Is the "love interest" necessary? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@Elizabeth-K this is a good question, and @Aratrea has a good answer. I’d just like to add that first, it is possible to write a good romance without experience if you’re looking on it as essentially a really, really deep friendship. Obviously romance is more than that, but it will be easier to let the character’s slip into romance if you’ve…[Read more]
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Cloudy replied to the topic About Me, I Guess? in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 7 months ago
Thanks so much, @aratrea! I will definitely be reading that article. Thanks for taking an interest in my work. 🙂
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