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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Oops. Tags. Right.
@hope @emma-flournoy @ethryndal @bethanysinkyroses @daeus @dragon-snapper @aratrea -
Ethryndal replied to the topic ARCHIVED – Homework for Video 11: Scene to Story Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 7 years, 6 months ago
@aratrea I’m really sorry this is taking me so long.
Scene One: On her journey, Liriel stops at a human town to spend the night. It’s her first excursion into the world of mortals, and because a good friend of hers always spoke highly of them, and she secretly hopes to see the extraordinary side of them that he does.
Scene Two: She finds an inn…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic ARCHIVED – Homework for Video 11: Scene to Story Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 7 years, 6 months ago
@aratrea I’m really sorry this is taking so long.
Scene One: On her journey, Liriel stops at a human town to spend the night. It’s her first excursion into the world of mortals, and because a good friend of hers always spoke highly of them, and she secretly hopes to see the extraordinary side of them that he does.
Scene Two: She finds an inn to…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Hm. Yes. Okay. *writes this down*
I’m concerned about my theme. When I started the story, Intelligence vs. Ignorance sounded like a good idea, but now that I’ve planned out the characters a bit more, and now that I know them better… I’m not sure the theme would work. These characters–especially Matthias and Kara–are going to struggle with a…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Greetings, fellow scribblers! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 6 months ago
@Aratrea lol
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Greetings, fellow scribblers! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 6 months ago
@BethanySinkyRoses welcome aboard, new KeePer! 😀 Look forward to seeing you around.
(@aratrea I hope you know that profile picture makes you impossible to take seriously. XD)
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Anne of Lothlorien started the topic The Wonderland Story in the forum 7 years, 6 months ago
So, remember a few KP newsletter contest back, when it was the girl holding up the Wonderland hitchhiking sign? Well, I wrote an entry for that, but unfortunately didn’t turn it in in time. But I have been thinking about turning it into a short story. Problem is, I really like what I’ve written, I just can’t think of a beginning, a background for…[Read more]
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @aratrea Actualy, I am a Weird ‘E’. I am very outgoing with people I know, like you guys, but strangers freak me out and I clam up. And then there’s the really awkkward period where I kindd of know you so am talking to you but am still very quiet and reserved. I also like being by myself, and could probaby go for awhile like…[Read more]
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@daeus @winter-rose @kate-flournoy @gracie-girl @ethryndal @aratrea
Hello!
One of my homework projects for our homeschool co-op is to write a short story that follows the Hero’s Journey pattern. (Is anyone familiar with the Hero’s Journey?)
Anyway, I would love to have someone beta read it and get some feedback. The assignment is due next…[Read more]
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Shaina replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@ethryndal @aratrea Hahahahaha!!!!!! I was laughing so hard I’m surprised my family didn’t come to see if I was ok! That picture is so perfect! I love it!
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
I’m always uncharacteristically talkative on the internet. Rather quiet as an actual–Introverted-person, though.
@aratrea I think my favorite part of @ethryndal‘s drawing is the frog on your head. Honestly.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
I’m always uncharacteristically talkative on the internet. Rather quiet as an actual person, though.
@aratrea I think my favorite part of @ethryndal‘s drawing is the frog on your head. Honestly.
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@aratrea I was surprised when Hope told me you put it on facebook and that you were an ‘I’. I’m an ‘E’ and I’d never had the courage to post a picture like that that someone did of me for the public to see.
‘Kay, so now who wants to draw King Daeus with his raspberry ice cream? @ethryndal?
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@aratrea May I also say I am soooooo glad you made it your profile 😉 😀
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@ethryndel YOU DID IT! 😀 I hoped someone would, I knew I couldn’t have pulled it off so amazingly awesomely epic! 😀 😀 It does look like @aratrea but like he said, it also looks Russian author! And I love the frog 😀
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Lady_Erin replied to the topic *waves hand wildly * Sup Keepers!! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 6 months ago
@delightinlife, thank you! I just LOVE Peter Pan and his story <3 <3, hope you have fun and do well!!
@aratrea, same here;)
@anne-of-lothlorien, thank you very much!! As I can see you are a LOTR fan just like me;) My friends say I’m a Hobbit cuz I’m so short 😛 -
Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@aratrea I CAN’T BELIEVE YOU ACTUALLY DID IT EITHER!!!!! I feel famous for being the inspiration behind her masterpiece.
@ethryndal Maybe I will try and put it up just to see how it compares. I’ve always been horrible at drawing guys though, I’m much better with girls.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@Anne-of-lothlorien Aw, come on. You’d do great. You cannot tell me that mine doesn’t partly look like a warped Radagast.
@Aratrea I CAN’T BELIEVE YOU ACTUALLY DID IT. Whoa. I feel…famous.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@Anne-of-lothlorien I’m so glad you entreated us artists to draw that—it was the most fun I’ve had in a loooong time. @aratrea, I’m sorry I had so much gleefully villainous pleasure at your expense. XD
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@Ethryndal… Oh. My. Goodness.
THAT IS SO PERFECT! HIS BEARD, HIS FACE, (it’s so recognizable) THE FROG… YOU EVEN GOT IT TO GRIN EVILLY!!!! This just made my day. Totally. @aratrea, you should put that as your avatar.@daeus I think I’ll plan the first launch of your take-over; I’m thinking multi-colored balloons popping out of boxes and…[Read more]
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