Josiah DeGraaf

@kaya-young I will add you to. Just because I like the idea of purple giraffe’s that hula hoop.  🙂

And @that_writer_girl-99 and @gh24682468999 just so you dont feel left out.

Okay, I’m quiting.

@dekreel this is totally awesome-sauce! I can’t wait until the next paaaaaaart! 😀

Okay, so several people have asked about my personality type.  So I took the test.  Or whatever you call it.  🙂

*drumroll*  tada! I am a ENFJ-A.

“With vision and determination, nothing is impossible”. I like that.

Although I think on other parts they make me sound a little to overbearing and judgmental.  I like following, not leading, but only…[Read more]

@warrenluther04 @jane-maree @rochellaine @skredder @seekjustice @anyone I forgot

Thank you all so very much for reading the first chapter of my WIP! I admit, I was really nervous about other people reading it, but you all were so honest and I will keep all of your advice in mind.

Considering how much I needed to work on with my first chapter, I…[Read more]

@warrenluther04. Oh, I bet!  Cant wait for the next part!

That’s my problem.  I have no choice but to wait.  🙁

@warrenluther04 yeah, I’d love it if you would! 🙂 warning though; this is a really rough first draft

@warrenluther04. I love it!  Nice job.  And thanks for tagging me. 🙂

@dekreel. Can you help us out?  Or somebody?

@dekreel. OhmygoodnessohmygoodnesswowthisisSOAMAZING!!!  I just read back through all your stories on this topic!  *rolls on floor with laughter*  How could I have missed this?!  I love it!  I nearly died of laughter reading the part about the Wiser and his brother!  Oh, my!  You really make the characters come to life.  This is so awesome…[Read more]

@Dekreel awwww I recognised that direct quote. *blushes*

This was the best, Dekreel. xD

@jane-maree probably general overall chapter, but also stuff like inconsistencies (which some readers have already pointed out), and yes showing/telling stuff. Thank you!!!

@jane-maree you’re welcome, ’twas my pleasure 😉

@Jenwriter17 okay so I don’t want to go into full editor mode and scare you (been there, done that, it was bad xD) so what exactly are you looking for critique on? The general overall chapter? Or some more details like showing vs telling, etc.?

@dekreel. I love, love, LOVE it!!!  Thanks for tagging me!  I am not familiar with this topic.  Have you been posting all your stories here?

@Jenwriter17 thank you so so much for organising this and it was a heap of fun to do it. *throws confetti* Thanks again. 😀

@seekjustice okay, i think i let you have access. lemme know if it didn’t work.

@filewriterbase13x Thanks!  I thought that is what it meant, but wasn’t sure.

@warrenluther04

@warrenluthet04 Maybe just dont put me in with any fairies or elves.  I have been thinking about it, and I dont think its a good idea for me.  Thank you for understanding!

@filewriterbase13x Your WIP sounds cool.  Do you write poems?

@rochellaine You have eight adopted siblings?!!  Wow.  That is so awesome!  How many siblings do you have in all?  I have an older sister, and two younger sisters, and none of us were adopted.  I wish I had more siblings!

And can I ask a super dumb question?  What is sci-fi?