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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@ariel-ashira I like it! 🙂 that poor boy who got his goat taken away……
what genre is your WIP?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine @jenwriter17 Okay, here’s from one of my stories…
Joshua’s fists clenched. Â The frenzied mob of white-clad bacchantes grabbed the little black goat from the blind boy, who gave a cry and tried to reach his pet. Â His mother pulled them both out of reach of the drunken crowd. Â The screams and cheers of the bacchantes filled the ni…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine *looks at empty wallet* i’m just saving my faves to pinterest 🙂 yup, the modesty struggle is real. I actually found quite a few websites that have modest clothing. let me know if you want the list 😉 i probably thought of you cuz some of your writing prompt collages have vintage-y photos. 😉
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@ariel-ashira Yes, it is 😀
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine I was just looking at a website modcloth.com, and I though “hmm, maybe Rochellaine likes vintage clothing.” Here’s the link if you wanna check it out (not all the clothing is modest, but there are some cute things 🙂 ): https://www.modcloth.com/
i like the snippet 🙂 poor girl….
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine Nice! Â Does Chara go to the hospital???
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@jenwriter17 Thats really cool! Â Is that from your book?
I would like to, but I don’t have access to our computer right now, so I am just using notebooks to work on my plot lines and such while I can’t actually be writing the story.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@ariel-ashira Welcome! we’re sharing WIP snippets if you want to too. 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine Okay, here’s one:
  That laugh. It shook Rin’s core and made her shudder. Her ears tingled and her eyes squeezed shut.
  Enough.
  Rin flung an arm out. Her fist hit Takara full on the cheek.
  Takara stumbled back and the soldiers grabbed Rin’s arms. Takara steadied herself and gingerly felt her face. It was already red. “How d…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine@ jenwriter17 Hi, guys!  I can’t be on long, but maybe for a little if were talking about anything. 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine We can do anything between a couple sentences to a paragraph if you want. 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Need Advice with my Character's Responses in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine Thank you! Â Yeah, his sister was five when he left, and she hardly remembers him. Â Also, because of the traumatizing situation they were in for a while when he was taken away, she has hardly spoken for those two years. Â My poor little character!
I find it tons of fun, but also difficult to write these very emotional scenes. Â I enj…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine haha “course of” that’s cute! 😉
Yup, my dystopian. 🙂
you wanna share snippets of our WIPs? it’s okay if you don’t want to.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine I think I can be on for a while 🙂 Working on your western?
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@alia Well if it’s in God’s will, He’ll definitely make a way somehow. 🙂 I’ll be praying.
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Ariel Ashira started the topic Need Advice with my Character's Responses in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
Okay, so I have this scene I need some help with. Â My MC is an eighteen year old guy who is returning home after not being able to see his family for two years. Â His family has thought him dead for over a year. Â What would these peoples responses be when he shows up one night: his Father, his Mother, his ten year old brother, and the elderly se…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@alia @jenwriter17 @rochellaine I really wish I could be on more, but life won’t allow that yet.  Just thought I’d say it is something to celebrate that poor Uncle Bill has been found! 🙂
Please, though, don’t hesitate to tag me. Â I will be on as often as I can!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@alia Am praying for you!
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@alia @rochellaine And Rochellaine is the winner! 😉
Rochellaine you know you’re not supposed to google while doing a word war! but i know, it’s likely I would’ve done the same thing. 😉
I have to go now. Thanks for the word war! <3 <3
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@alia @rochellaine whoo, that was bad. 218.
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