Aranel

@freedomwriter76

The protection squad…

this made me laugh XD

though you might need to call in the squad lol

@esther-c

Livia

“I’ve never heard of Alethia,” she mused. “But I suppose you haven’t heard of Andromeda either, so we’re even.”  she paused. “Wait, did you just say you’re being chased by the government?” she raised an eyebrow.

@esther-c

haha! I think that’s the saddest thing I’ve EVER written!!!

@freedomwriter76

Ofc! (:

I posted something…um…sad…in the “A place to share whatever we’re working on” if you want to read something as equally sad as what you posted, lol

Esther can vouch for the fact that it is sad…

@esther-c

This link works for me! Unless you want all our comments to be separate. I’ll try to start reading it next week once our schedule’s back to normal after Christmas break and all that. 🙃

Okay!! It doesn’t really matter to me XD It’s up to you!

@scoutfinch180

Yeah, Marcurious is an…interesting character XD

@esther-c

KP Con anyone…? 👀

YES YES YES!!!! xD

@rae

Oh no!!! I’ll be praying!!! <333

I am actually concerned for my mental health now…LIKE WHAT 14 YEAR OLD GIRL WRITES THAT?!?!?

@esther-c

Girl whyyy?? 😭

Um….

Sorry…

XD

Don’t say I didn’t warn you! lol

@rae

I could add Rylee! She’s a character from another WIP that is going nowhere XD (how old is Junior again? 18, right?)

@esther-c

Liv

“Yeah, I do,” she pursed her lips. “It’s just me, my mani and pani,” she smiled. “And Xandro. I consider him family, too.  Where are you from?”

@jonas

Oops! I didn’t even notice that XD I will fix that!!

@grcr

Marcurious is between 16 and 18. I haven’t really figured that out yet haha!

@scoutfinch180

It’s completely fine, no rush on how fast you give me feedback! (: I understand we all have lives outside of writing and KP xD

I can get started on giving you my opinion on the excerpt I saw introducing Marcurious tomorrow perhaps.

Actually, I would prefer if you gave your opinion on the first few chapters of my WIP and kind of go…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Also I forgot to mention…I don’t have all the exerpts from my WIP here on this forum. I will post them for you on here if you agree to help me. (because I didn’t want to take up a bunch of pages on here for no reason haha)

WHY IS THIS NOT WORKING?!?!

@scoutfinch180

@scoutfinch18o

Heyyy, I don’t think we’ve really met! I’m Sara (which you probably already knew haha!)

I have been stalking the topic where you’ve been critiquing RAE’s WIP…and I really like your critiquing style!

I was wondering…if you could maybe….critique mine too….?

I understand if you don’t have the time to help two people…I…[Read more]

@esther-c @acancello @grcr @vinagirl @hybridlore

Introducing….Marcurious!!!

Here’s the newest chapter I wrote in my WIP:

Marcurious deftly snatched a ripe apple from the market stall, and sauntered away, holding his head high as if without a care in the world.

He pasted a look of innocence on his face.

I didn’t steal this apple. Nope. I p…

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@esther-c

I love those characters SOOO much!!!!!! And their character arcs are amazing!

@anyone-who-needs-a-good-cry

I just wrote something very depressing and sad….so if anyone wants to read it…well…

A dull throbbing sensation at the back of her neck.

Anger burning hot in her veins.

Screams echoing around her, both her own, and the screams of innocent souls.

The smell of alcohol, of chloroform, of pain, of fear.

The smell…

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