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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Thank you so much <333 It makes me so happy when people compliment my writing, especially when I’ve been really insecure about it and worrying that it’s not good and I should just quit XD
And yeah, I love that scene too 🙂 thanks for reading!!
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Sara replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
We posted the times earlier in this thread if you don’t know what time.
I put it on my calendar so I wouldn’t forget XD
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Sara replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Are you guys excited to break the record tomorrow???
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Or maybe #Albie?
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
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Sara replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Oh my gosh Nae is so cute <333 XD
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Thanks for understanding!! 🙂 and thanks for supporting me <3
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
I know….I think Wyoh’s going too far…
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Okay, I just couldn’t remember if they were courting or not. It’s been a while since I’ve read this XD
I kinda want Chester to change his mind and court Libbie, but it would also really hurt Etta and would cause more drama so I don’t at the same time. lol!
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Wait, so is Etta and Chester dating? I can’t remember XD
And I love it!!! It’s so perfect <333
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Thanks for understanding!! I kind of am still a little worried that nobody will like it the other way XD but I’m happy that I got an answer from God and that makes me feel a lot more confident.
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Idk why but I just feel bad for Etta XD
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Awww poor Etta!
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@acancello @grcr @hybridlore @esther-c
I’ve been praying about this today…and I just got a strong sense that God wants me to keep the beginning like I had it…like the second link.
I just feel a lot better about the way I had it before. I’m not sure why…I just get anxiety every time I think about starting it that way, and feel immediate…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
WHY DO I KEEP SPELLING YOUR TAG WRONG?!?!?!
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@traiblazer
Well hurry up and post/write it so I can read it!!!!!!!! XD NOW I’M CURIOUS!!!!! lol!
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
@esther-c Yeah, Liv has blue eyes. She also has blue skin and hair XD
Livia
She heard Fynn say “Aww”, and it was clear who he was talking about. Liv wanted to smack him upside the head.
“He is so annoying,” she rolled her eyes.
“Tell me about it,” Lukas muttered under his breath.
Liv’s stomach came alive with butterflies as they danced…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
About prologues…I’ve never heard that before! Mine is technically a first chapter, so should I just erase the label of “prologue”?? 😂
you’re good!!! You can just read it over on these links. I posted earlier in this thread, or I can send you the Google docs link so you can comment and edit. I can’t send the docs link now because I’m…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Sorry, I think my last post lagged.
It’s all Wyoh’s fault…..XD
I really like your idea of doing the flashback and then going to Lilitu’s pov, though!
Okay, great! i’ll think and pray about it, but I’m pretty sure that this fits better than how I had it originally.
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