Aranel

Ottoline

She had to work with Ellis?

I’m dead. So dead. She wiped her sweaty palms on her pants. Why couldn’t he have paired me with someone who won’t murder me the first chance we’re alone? (I know he wouldn’t actually, but she just is scared of everything, XD)

She was terrified. Terrified of the dragons, of everyone carrying a sword, of El…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

I started laughing while writing this XD

@jonas

Well…that was intense.

Good job!

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @rae

Fracture

He heard distant footsteps, but didn’t think much of them. He was too engrossed in his mourning ceremony to give them much thought.

That is, until someone nearly kicked him in the head.

“AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” He screamed, his voice cracking horribly halfway through his scream. He jumped to his feet,…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom @jonas

This is indeed a big change. You may be changing a bit too much, while change is good, you can halt your progress completely by making to many revisions (*says as if I wasn’t the most guilty of this exact thing). However, first person can help more with experiential writing, which I think is more your style anyways. I t…

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@jonas

 I’ve never read a first person novel with multiple POVs, but that’s not to say they don’t exist.

Oh, that’s funny! I’ve read WAY more first person novels with multiple POV’s. i’ve read more of those than third person POV’s.

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium

So with my revision of my WIP, I’m changing things a little. I’m thinking of writing it in first person now. I started writing yesterday, but now I’m stuck! How should I continue?

Also, is there anything I could improve on?

(Am I changing things too much?)

Chapter 1

The world is a dark…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Just fight him or something. The Sword chirped, That always seems to help.

Lol

Ottoline

She opened her eyes and sat up. Rays of light seeped in through the windows. She turned over in her bed. They were all exhausted.

“Do we have to go downstairs to eat breakfast? I mean have to?” Hedieh was saying from the bunk directly above Ottoline’s. “Because I don’t want to get murdered by a guy with anger issues.”

“I don’t want to…[Read more]

@esther-c

Great job! Yesterday I wrote 1,167.

@rae

lol

Who’s going to write the next RP?

@jonas

Somehow, I am going to force Ellis and Ottoline to get along. hehe. 😈😈😈

@jonas

Yeah I was just joking XD

@trailblazer @highscribeofaetherium

Yeah, i don’t think so either.

@highscribeofaetherium

ALL of it is hyperbole XD

Yep.

You know what would be fun? Once everyone calms down, the boys and girls play truth or dare together, lol

@thearcaneaxiom

good question.

Ellis, chill, it’s a pillow fight XD

@jonas

Well, why not? thought Ellis. He punched Zahlin in the face.

Oh my gosh!! I literally started laughing lol