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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 hours, 22 minutes ago
YAYYYYY
I love it when you give me critiques because you literally always help me, whether telling me things I need to change or what I’m doing well, no matter what it is it always builds me up in the end, I appreciate you so much girl <3
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 hours, 37 minutes ago
@ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @theducktator @whalekeeper @rae @anyone-else
Here’s another unedited scene…
This is like the third chapter I think:
Lilitu, in fact, was not dead.
Though at the moment, he wished he were.
And if he couldn’t bring himself to get off the ground and keep running for his life, he would be.
His f…
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 hours, 41 minutes ago
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day ago
It was so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day ago
Sammmmeeee!!!!
And thank you so much!!!!
I agree with you so much on that hahaha! Like “I’m sorrry this is probably so cringe but I love it!!!”
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 6 hours ago
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 19 hours ago
I’ve looked into joining it before….Idk if you’ve seen this website or not but if not here you go:
https://theyoungwriter.com/crazy-writing-week
It explains a little bit more!!!!
I’m going to do it this year!!! Idk if its my impulsive adhd kicking in or what but yeahhhh hahahaha
anyone wanna try it for the first time with me??…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 19 hours ago
I agree…it did get a little info dumpy lol
Again it isn’t edited…and the details about Andromeda are mostly in the prologue and will be revealed little by little in later chapters (if everything stays according to plan hahaha!)
I know…me too…I feel like when I started it when she was little, it felt…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 6 hours ago
I don’t know how many snowballs I even have…but here’s 161 words:
She didn’t want to wake up.
Closing her eyes, turning her face into her pillow and pulling the blanket over her head, she desperately wanted this to be a dream, wanted to go back to sleep and pretend nothing was wrong.
But Aubrielle persisted, the worry and unease in her voice c…
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 6 hours ago
Okay thank you guys!!! <33
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 8 hours ago
OH and I need some chapter title ideas for this section as well!
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 8 hours ago
(tagging some other peoples too) @ellette-giselle @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else
Okay….
I have come to a decision lol
I’m keeping the prologue the same, but I’m tweaking a few things with the beginning.
Here’s the new first chapter (it opens when Sef is sixteen years old) Don’t worry, I’m going to edit it and…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 20 hours ago
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 20 hours ago
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 20 hours ago
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 1 hour ago
*saves snowballs*
Throws two at @esther-c and @whaley
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 1 hour ago
To everyone who threw snow at me:
I haven’t been on here in a hot second, sorry everyone!!!! Ahhh….
I actually did a TON of editing today, and I’m so obsessed with my writing!
I’m not going to post the part I worked on on KP, just because I feel like it could be too dark for some people (Idk though…) I promise it’s not super dark, but a…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 2 hours ago
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
@esther-c @rae @ellette-giselle
OMCCCC
I’m so sorryyyy I totally forgot about this!
Ahhh
Ruth, you can totally RP first!!
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Sara replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks ago
@the_lost_journal
Hiiiii!
So basically you just compile a bunch of photos and quotes that describe your character. Everyone does it differently and there’s no right or wrong way to do it!
I’d suggest creating a Canva account (go to canva.com and sign up, it’s free!) and you can do really cool things with Canva, though there are other platforms…[Read more]
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