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@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, like, I have a playlist for my WIP or at least the MCs, but I’ve never done specific songs like this before! It’s a really cool idea!!

Totally!!

Okay!

@savannah_grace2009

Oooh, I love it!! It looks awesome!!

I am totally going to do this for my WIP now 😎 Thanks for the idea 🤪

Anyone interested in reviving this topic?? I can put together a list of prompts for August if anyone else is interested… 👀

@whalekeeper

Wow, that’s a hard question. Ermm…

I think I’d immediately start thinking of a way to keep them here longer. Is there a way that they don’t have to die? It might take me a little bit to come to terms with the fact that there’s not. Honestly, at that point, I think I’d start trying to spend as much time with them as I can and make as…[Read more]

@theducktator

I feel like I should have some long drawn out post since one of my first for real novels was dystopian, but it seriously needs a lot of work, so I only have one short piece of advice for you. 😉

Don’t limit your scope. A lot of times dystopia takes place in a world/country similar to America, right? Don’t tie yourself down to tha…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle
Yep! Sorry, my post was a little late, lol

@ellette-giselle

Oooh, he looks so cool!!

@theducktator

Thanks for reminding me! I’ll have it out this week!

@grcr @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009

Praying for all of you ladies!! ❤️

@freed_and_redeemed

Eee!! Makes me so excited!!

@freed_and_redeemed

Girlllll… It looks so gooddd!!!! 🤩 Did you design this yourself??

@freed_and_redeemed

Ohhh, it looks so good!!!

@stephie

I was looking forward to reading this book, but our library doesn’t have it!! Hopefully I can participate in the next book we read together!

@freed_and_redeemed

Finnnnn!!! 😭❤️

And Hansss!! 👀😭

@savannah_grace2009

I think either of us can RP because Calyhuge did write a RP introducing the characters that are about to come interrupt ours. Do you want to? Or should I?

@freed_and_redeemed

I’m so glad that all of here have been able to support and encourage you on your writing journey!! 🤗

@grcr

Yesss, another vote for Fin!

@freed_and_redeemed

*squeals* I’m so excited!!! I’ve had a job this summer, so I am buying your book as soon as I can!!!!

Ahhh!! They look so good!!

Ooh, do Fin next!

@rae

Aww, I loved it!!

The only thing I’d recommend is to really deepen Chase’s pov, especially after he gives up his sight. Because it still felt like he could see with the way things were described. I think if you describe it in the way in which Chase was experiencing it, then it will have a much bigger impact.

Other than that it was good! (: