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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Sorry, I’m trying to write around work so, I will be a minute. You don’t have to wait on me!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@emilysf @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan and Vulkasin
They started off down the hall, Zlatan feeling as if he was back in his second year training with twenty-four first year students all unintentionally pushing their Student Officer, Zlatan, near insanity.
I always used to wonder why Commanders were grey headed.
He had survived that,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Ah, poor November. (Marching ration may or may not be based of MREs)
AWESOME!
*Hands you a balloon which explodes sending more confetti everywhere*
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Definitely. XD ah, November.
*Pauses and checks*
Congratulations!!!
*Tosses some more confetti*
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zlatan and Vulkasin
“Like valking.” Zlatan’s eyebrow rose, “Ever heard of it?”He swiveled to the others before his brother could respond.
He decided to treat this as a counsel among officers, not a muster of troops.
Start with the object.
“So, ve need to pick von of zees passages and try to find a vay down.”
Next state…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
XD poor girl. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
Oh dear…to be honest I don’t understand some of those, but that last one is great. XD
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @emilysf
So, here’s attempt number one for Alyona!
..and I hope it’s not out of order.
Alyona
Alyona tossed a handful of water into the dough and began to knead. It was awkward for her, bending over a raised trough like this instead of working on a board on the ground, but she tried not to show it.
If that guard…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Oh that’s fine! He’s always doing stuff like that whenever he isn’t serious…if he is ever serious.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
I think it’ll be Alyona. 😉
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Winifrith is fairly sensitive, with a heart for the hurting (she’d be finding something to treat Sofia’s scrapes on sight.). She struggles with communication though, and often feels alone. Oh, and loads of fear and uncertainty. However, she is a lot stronger than she thinks she is, especially when she learns to rely on The One Who Never Fails.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Ok, I will.
*Mischievous cackling*
I do kinda want it to be Alyona, I just can’t make up my mind.
They are on good terms. Alyona is a bit of the “take me with you wherever you go, I’m with you to the end” sister, and fiercely loyal to her brother in a quiet and often unnoticed way.
Oh, and she might be a tiny bit competitive…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Vulkasin and Zlatan
He couldn’t help it anymore. Oh he tried, but November just kept adding to his mirth.
He finally got himself under control again, as Zlatan was giving him the Elder Brother look.
And then November nearly burst his reserve again. “Oooh…I just thought since food was involved, ya know, butter….” He glanc…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @koshka
Ok, this is hilarious!
What does everyone think of my adding another character? (I know, that might make our already jumbled narratives even harder.)
She would be in the Buteries kneading bread, and she’d either be a 15 year old lass named Winifrith(from my other series), or Viktor’s 12(about) year old sister A…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
That made me laugh so hard!!! XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Ok, I did! =)
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Alrighty!
Zlatan and Vulkasin
He’d done it again, gone off singing aloud with other people around. He sighed.
“That….that was beautiful.” Ara said softly. “What was that song?”
Zlatan shifted his shield, but kept his eyes out the window. “Forgive me, it vas, ah, song of ze seasons.”
“He just made it up and doesn’t v’…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Is Sofia next?
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Koshka replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 4 months ago
Hello, I believe we haven’t officially met though we have technically, so, uh…
Hi! I’m called Koshka around here, and I didn’t read through this whole thread so I most likely
Definitelydon’t know as much about you as I could.That sounded weird.
Anyway, I have read Lord of the Rings, and enjoyed it, but I’m not obsessed by the s…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zlatan and Vulkasin
Ara knelt and began to tear a strip from the hem of her dress. Vulkasin started at the sound, “Vat are you doing?”
Zlatan understood his brother’s confusion; no Vulkish soldier would even think to bandage scraped knuckles.
No, not a vulk. Images flashed before him, for a moment taking place of the…[Read more]
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