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Koshka replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
Oh dear…to be honest I don’t understand some of those, but that last one is great. XD
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @emilysf
So, here’s attempt number one for Alyona!
..and I hope it’s not out of order.
Alyona
Alyona tossed a handful of water into the dough and began to knead. It was awkward for her, bending over a raised trough like this instead of working on a board on the ground, but she tried not to show it.
If that guard…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Oh that’s fine! He’s always doing stuff like that whenever he isn’t serious…if he is ever serious.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
I think it’ll be Alyona. 😉
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Winifrith is fairly sensitive, with a heart for the hurting (she’d be finding something to treat Sofia’s scrapes on sight.). She struggles with communication though, and often feels alone. Oh, and loads of fear and uncertainty. However, she is a lot stronger than she thinks she is, especially when she learns to rely on The One Who Never Fails.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Ok, I will.
*Mischievous cackling*
I do kinda want it to be Alyona, I just can’t make up my mind.
They are on good terms. Alyona is a bit of the “take me with you wherever you go, I’m with you to the end” sister, and fiercely loyal to her brother in a quiet and often unnoticed way.
Oh, and she might be a tiny bit competitive…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Vulkasin and Zlatan
He couldn’t help it anymore. Oh he tried, but November just kept adding to his mirth.
He finally got himself under control again, as Zlatan was giving him the Elder Brother look.
And then November nearly burst his reserve again. “Oooh…I just thought since food was involved, ya know, butter….” He glanc…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @koshka
Ok, this is hilarious!
What does everyone think of my adding another character? (I know, that might make our already jumbled narratives even harder.)
She would be in the Buteries kneading bread, and she’d either be a 15 year old lass named Winifrith(from my other series), or Viktor’s 12(about) year old sister A…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
That made me laugh so hard!!! XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Ok, I did! =)
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Alrighty!
Zlatan and Vulkasin
He’d done it again, gone off singing aloud with other people around. He sighed.
“That….that was beautiful.” Ara said softly. “What was that song?”
Zlatan shifted his shield, but kept his eyes out the window. “Forgive me, it vas, ah, song of ze seasons.”
“He just made it up and doesn’t v’…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Is Sofia next?
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Koshka replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 4 months ago
Hello, I believe we haven’t officially met though we have technically, so, uh…
Hi! I’m called Koshka around here, and I didn’t read through this whole thread so I most likely
Definitelydon’t know as much about you as I could.That sounded weird.
Anyway, I have read Lord of the Rings, and enjoyed it, but I’m not obsessed by the s…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zlatan and Vulkasin
Ara knelt and began to tear a strip from the hem of her dress. Vulkasin started at the sound, “Vat are you doing?”
Zlatan understood his brother’s confusion; no Vulkish soldier would even think to bandage scraped knuckles.
No, not a vulk. Images flashed before him, for a moment taking place of the…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
By the way, Viktor’s hair color is dark brown, soon to be black.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Okay, let’s see how this goes…
Oh, and which one of the brothers is Sofia’s hight? Zlatan=nearly 5’8″, Vulkasin=over 6’7″
Vulkasin and Zlatan
Lyn was the bravest person he’d seen in a long time. Well, besides his brother, but Zlatan was a different kind of brave, a person who followed through no matter the cost.
But…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Oh, and you happened to ask about almost the first thing I came up with when I had the idea for this story. XD
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
It sounds a lot more in-depth than it probably is. 😏 I have lot more to go.
My ways?
A lot of mindless wonderings. And wanderings.
And spending a bit too much time in random history. I like gathering bits and pieces of real cultures and smashing them together. (And stealing ideas from other books.)
And talking it out to…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Oh! Sorry, you haven’t been there. 😉
I’ll try to explain.
There are three nations. No, make that four…
Let’s start at the beginning, shall we?
*Opens ancient scroll*
No, not that far back.
*Picks up a different one instead*
Wait, you just wanted to know what a Yartassite was, not the whole history of the Brother-Nations.…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Great idea! Yes, he is a high commander in the, ahem, “Eirtanian” army. *Eye roll*
It’s mostly Dorwainian. Of course. No Eirtanian loyal to the Brother-Nations would be at all willing to be in his army.
Which is actually even better, taking Viktor into the situation.
Viktor doesn’t like Dorwainian soldiers, and for good…[Read more]
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