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@keilah-h

Oh, that’s such a smart idea! 🙂 I’ve heard of Tron before but have yet to actually watch it!

Everett

Their worlds? Different worlds? Several worlds? Different universe? Worlds converging? 

Everett tried to keep up his smirk, but with every word this girl–Feather–said, he felt the corners of his mouth drooping more and more. H…[Read more]

@emilysf

Hmmmm…. I like this topic, first off, because I also have some underdeveloped side characters, so I can relate.

Because of that, however, I may not be the most helpful, but I will try to offer some advice. I also think I remember you referring to this story about the mentor. But I don’t know much more that that so just keep that in…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Oh! So you write fanfics???? Cool! I’ve never really dabbled in it myself but enjoy reading them! The one about Feather and her sisters sounds really interesting! I thought you had mentioned Rinzler was from Voltron at first instead of Tron and I was like, I’ve never heard of him XD

@emilysf

Yes!!!!!!! I love that series so much! The characters are great and that’s probably the main thing I look for in good stories! And the world is really cool too! I’m so excited/nervous for the next book because all the secrets are going to be revealed and we’ve been waiting for them for a while! Um… I think I’ve been into it since…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

That actually sounds really fun! And as for the age gap, that isn’t a problem. My Grandmother is older than my Grandfather, and there’s a nine year gap between my parents, but seriously, age gaps aren’t a real problem (obviously if God intended), some people simply need someone older/younger than them.

And I love the idea of an…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thanks! Ooooh! So they are like from some kind of sci-fi world it sounds like???

Yes! I love Star Wars! Feather sounds awesome! I’m so interested in your characters and their story now!!!

Everett

He scowled at the girl blocking his path. Why was she so persistent? If Everett had to guess, her and her comrades were trying to get…[Read more]

@augustinaii

Ah, forgiveness and trust together can be quite powerful. Have you ever read the Promise of Zion series by Robert Elmer? It’s centered around the creation of the Israeli State, and those are a couple of the themes.

The map style is based off folklore, each object made up of others (example: a mountain is, if one looks close enough,…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Quick question! Could you give me a brief description of your characters appearances?? I’d love to know more about them. You probably said something some time back but I’m not sure if I can find it…

Also, is Feather a girl or boy? I wasn’t sure so I didn’t really talk too much about them. 🙂

@augustinaii

Ahhhhhh!!!! Yes! It seems you understand it so well, even though I didn’t explain my WIP very well (at least in my opinion XD). Daren feels very insecure about only having one hand and it affects her relationships greatly. Thank you for your kind words!

And your lack of commas is an interesting, and rather admiring, style! I like…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Ooooh! Your characters sound super cool! Okay! I’ll try, but bare with me cuz I have no idea what I’m doing! I have next to zero role-playing experience!

Also, I apologized before-hand for my character’s attitude. He’s kind of rude sometimes…

Everett

He stumbled back, both because he lost his footing dropping to the ground, and…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Alright, thanks! I’m going to be completely honest that I haven’t been following the story the entire time (I mean, it is over 400 pages…) so I’m not sure if  I’ll be doing this right or not, but please let me know so I can fix anything! I’m not really sure how to do this, but I guess I’ll try… 🙂

My character’s name is…[Read more]

@hallie-jean

You’re welcome to hop on! I think there’s just eight.

denali-christianson

godly-fantasy12

koshka

emilysf

elishavet-pidyon

Power

Keliah H

SomeoneElse(I can’t remember right now)

There may be some other person(people) but I think that’s it.

@augustinaii

Hello! My names Hallie! You sound like such a lovely person and your stories sound amazing! I’d love to hear more about them!

First, I have a question! What is your favorite punctuation????

Also…THOSE MAPS!!!!!!!! They are stunning! I’ve been really wanting to create one for my WIP but don’t really know where to start! Do you…[Read more]

@denali-christianson @godly-fantasy12 @koshka @emilysf @elishavet-pidyon

Wow, I’m late to this! XD

But I was just wondering, from the rules stated at the beginning of the forum, if there are already ten characters in the castle and if there is not, could I add one??

I totally understand if not! Just curious! 🙂

@emilysf

First off! Cool pen name!

Second of all! DID I HEAR YOU ARE A KOTLC FAN????

(pls say so. It would be a tad embarrassing if I was just hallucinating…)

Anyways, hello! My names Hallie! How do you do?? I have been absent from the forum for quite a while but am excited to be back!!!

You’ve probably already answered this, but what genre…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

I just recently wrote a short story with a rather bittersweet ending, but no, not a tragic one… *sigh*

As bad as it sounds, I’d like to try a tragic ending sometime. I think the problem is I get to attached to the characters to want to ruin their lives in the end. Also, it’s like some kind of puzzle for me at the end of a story.…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

I’m sorry this has been so late, but I’ve been preparing for a Bible Quiz Tournament tomorrow, which actually means I probably won’t be back on here much till after the weekend.

Zlatan

Guards.

The footsteps had grown loud enough for Zlatan to hear. Not to many of them. If they came through the door as would…[Read more]

@augustinaii

Ah, now your books are sounding even more intriguing. The very idea of having different countries based on the different eras of Rome is amazing. And then you have the tribes of Europe and Britton, and…. I want to read it, like, now. 😉

Your books sound so interesting! I look forward to hearing more about them.

Thank you! I’m…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

Well, I thought it was.

The lead up to the civil war and through till after the reconstruction, but it was less focused on the war and more how it affected the Jewish, Celtic, and Native American populations of the area. It wasn’t a pro north or south book, but simply a story of two families and a war.