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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
I’m on right now, although I’ll have to get off again and do another math lesson. (Homeschool… XD)
@koshka @freedomwriter76 Leon and Riker wouldwbe awesome to see seven years down the road! Only, I wouldn’t be able to use Viktor, because of spoilers. (Although if I did I could add in Reúven… Or Fritz! That’s a good…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Ah, it depends. I am usually on in the mornings and evenings, but that’s about to change with college classes, so I don’t really know. Maybe 12:30-10:00 central, with plenty of breaks in between? I tend to check my email all day long.
As for weekends I try to stay off from Saturday evening through till whenever I get on…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Hehe…yeah is was. I feel sorry for him too. He did get out early though, if not for happy reasons.
Oh November, your not inferior, and that’s exactly what Mikkel doesn’t want you to think!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Yay!
@elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Mikkel
He helped November up and walked in silence for a bit, at a loss for what to say. At last he began.
“Yes and no. The King’s Mariners are a branch the royal military trained in land, sea, and aerial combat. And, ah, well I’m…”
He sighed and ran a hand through his hair.
“As…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
Viktor
Thank the Lord, Riker and November had been able to talk, and even as Viktor sensed something deeper in some places, he decided not to stir the waters anymore than need be.
And now…
November was embarrassed and frightened. Viktor knew how he felt.
November was also thinking, remembering, a…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic WIP AUs in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Ack! No!!!
*Throws my phone at you*
That’s horrible…ly good?
Okay, it’s awesome and I love the way each of these twists are really possible inside the character, but…
*Retrieves phone with a sigh*
Although, the foreboding hints about Ara are not unnoticed, by the way.
And I hope you aren’t killing her, but if you…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Alrighty!
Mikkel
November’s hands trembled slightly as he held them out, his eyes suddenly staring off into somewhere else.
Mikkel took those hands, careful not to cause more discomfort than was nesesary. He needed to talk, to say something to help pull the lad out of that nightmare.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Who next?
(NOVEMBER… CORVINA! You’re all so precious and wonderful and your author’s being cruel to you right now but it’s all for good in the end!!!!)
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Koshka replied to the topic WIP AUs in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic WIP AUs in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
WHAT?!
I loved it and now this?!
But now I’m very curious, to be honest. XD
I don’t know who my favorite is, because they’re all very imagination sparking and I love them.
I think I like Esther’s picture the best, but once again, I don’t know!! XD
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Koshka replied to the topic WIP AUs in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
*Long sigh of relief as I release my held breath*
THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!!!
Even though they are quite different from what was ‘supposed’ to be, I still love them.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Alright, I’m back after a grocery trip. (Ick)
Mikkel
Oh November…the lad had scraped up his hands and knees, fragments of gravel protruding from the cuts. Although only superficial, they had to hurt.
“Here, sit back please, so I can clean this out.” He smiled and rummaged through…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic WIP AUs in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Corvina is definitely my favorite. And…please do a redemption arc for all of them! Like, you could redeem all but Ara actually in the story, and wrap up with showing Ara start to change for good.
Because…
Because I really don’t want to hear about her being hopeless. Really, I don’t like complete negative arcs.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Oh boy. Here we go!
Ocran
Such unexplainable incompetence! He stalked up the corridor, smelling the mounting fear.
They had a right to fear. A Lord Governor was hardly someone to trifle with.
Much more powerful than a mere shepherd. A mere Under Shepherd at that.
He commanded and a ca…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Ah, thank you! That means a lot. Have fun!
@koshka @freedomwriter76 (I think he’s about to show himself. I hope he doesn’t get in your way, but I’m laughing so hard!) @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
The Fly on the WallÂ
Bucky had fled with the little maid, finally pursuaded by her father, and perhaps his own sense of honor.
The two men…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
I’ll go as soon as I can find my phone charger… I’m at 2%.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Why thank you! (And reading is always so much more important than anything, right? XD)
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Jaybird replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 10 months ago
Also a humorous/interesting thing; this is a comparison of her mother’s hair and her own. Except, Winifrith’s hair is redder than in this pic, and may be a hand’s breadth longer, about hip length.
(Fun fact, Aethel was originally inspired, not by a great theological question or profound event, but by me daydreaming about hair. Specifically long,…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @anyone-else-interested
After talking a little about Aethel, (yes, she’s Aethelthryth again. See how easily that was swayed. XD) I’ve had her on my mind. So, I made her a collage. Here it is!
I had so many quotes that would go with it, but when it came down to adding them, this is what happened. XD

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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Oh but you see, Riker reminds me so much of my own characters, and Leon…
Natan. *Sob*
Those two are just sooooo similar…only completely different at the same time.
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