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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Help about Testing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 10 months ago
What if there were things in the mist— illusions— that tried to get them off the path? Like the voice of a child crying for help, or the screams of a woman in distress, or a weeping baby? Things that would appeal to their heart and make them jump out to save something without thinking, but in the end are not really there.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Help about Testing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 10 months ago
The problem with that is that I have another book where two characters have to pass though a swamp and fight a swamp serpent, and I want to make both testings different. I suppose one way would be to take out the swamp completely and replace it with forest, mountains, or something else, though I still am not sure what sort of test I’d do then…
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Hope Ann started the topic Help about Testing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 10 months ago
In a book I’m currently correcting, I have two characters who have to go on a journey to find some armor. There are some tests along the way…don’t leave the path, that sort of thing. But at one point they have to pass though a swamp. Right now I just have them both struck with a irrational fear and they have to resist leaving the path, but I’ve…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Sign of the Prancing Poodle in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 10 months ago
The Green Dragon 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Sign of the Prancing Poodle in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 10 months ago
You probably don’t want to know. 😛
The Wailing Wombat.
The Dangling Snake.
The Boat and Bulrush. (I’ve used that one already).
The Fish and Lilypad.
The Lobster and Limpet.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Sign of the Prancing Poodle in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 10 months ago
Traitors’ Rest
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Sign of the Prancing Poodle in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 10 months ago
Ooh… I like that one. Makes me wonder where it got its name. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Sign of the Prancing Poodle in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 10 months ago
Ha! The Howling Frog! Love it. So fun. 😀
I like The Screaming Falcon, too, @Hope. Nice and dramatic. I like both the funny and the sophisticated ones. Once I used ‘The Leaf and Thorn’ when I didn’t want to go for the humorous twist.
Great job, both of you. All of those would definitely qualify as inn names.
The Dog and Partridge (didn’t make…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Sign of the Prancing Poodle in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 10 months ago
Ooo, fun. I’ve never thought of inn names before:
The Screaming Falcon
Sign of the Rolling Heads
The Ax and Rose
The Black Griffin
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Kate Flournoy started the topic The Sign of the Prancing Poodle in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 10 months ago
You may have guessed by the name of the topic that this has to do with inns.
Then again, you may not have. Now you know.
One of my favorite phraseology exercises is to just sit back and think of all the different word combinations that evoke different feelings, images, and moods— and one of my favorite ways to do that is to make up inn names.…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 10 months ago
So, for those of you who like Studio C and Star Wars…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 10 months ago
Ugh… lucky you.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 10 months ago
@Daeus It’s not a problem of people wanting to read the book…it’s the problem of getting a book with a huge word count published because the publishers can have limits. 😉
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Hope Ann replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 10 months ago
@Daeus It’s not a problem of people wanting to read the book…it’s the problem of getting a book with a huge word count published because the publishers sometimes have limits. 😉
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Greta replied to the topic A Day in the Country Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 10 months ago
Thank you so much for taking the time to critique my poem, Daeus! I really like your suggestions. 🙂
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Greta started the topic A Day in the Country Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 10 months ago
Hey, everyone! I would love critiquing on this poem. Thanks!
A Day in the Country
By: Greta Dornbirer
Oh, where are you going,
On this sunny day?
To the country I’m a-going!
Why to the country?
The city you should try!
Oh no! The city is not for me!
For I prefer the country,
Where all is bright and gay!
The night is dark and s…[Read more]
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Greta replied to the topic Those Tear-jerkers :'( in the forum Book Discussions 10 years, 10 months ago
@Hope Yes! The end of Mockingjay was very sad…and depressing.
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Greta replied to the topic Those Tear-jerkers :'( in the forum Book Discussions 10 years, 10 months ago
@kate-flournoy I know right! It’s so sad… 🙁
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Greta replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 10 months ago
I like that, Hope! 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 10 months ago
Criticize it!? It’s perfect!
All the more so because… I can do that. 😛
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