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@acancello

Thanks! I like your writing as well. You can see Eddie through the rational and technicality’s he gives to justify his behavior, something we all can related to at times.

I like the writing you gave for Jade as well. You show her character by the attention she immediately gains from a crowd in a train station, something that would be…[Read more]

@acancello

That’s a really good introduction to how Jade looks!! I’m already interested in who she is and her story! 😀

@acancello

Your really good at description! I just love –  Ami melted under the gaze of Ev’s chocolate brown eyes.” “Ev searched her emerald green eyes, trying to understand what she was thinking. Its super sweet!

Aww! Thanks so much!! That’s super encouraging. 🥰🥰🥰

That second one up there ^ is still one I have yet to use in a scene, but I can’…[Read more]

@acancello

Cool topic idea!!

I definitely struggle with description. Mostly because I forget to put it there in the first place. 😂

My uncle introduced me to the word “askance” and I’ve been waiting for the just the write time to use it in one of my books. XD

Also does anyone here know anything about describing people? Do they do it all in one…

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@acancello

Also does anyone here know anything about describing people? Do they do it all in one place or do they spread it all throughout the chapter or whole book? I spread it out usually, but then think its better to read it all in one place…

That really depends on many many factors. Including your writing style, how much is relevant to c…[Read more]

@acancello

Oh, nice topic, thanks! Those are some cool description words you found!

My favorite for description isn’t necessarily words, but I think it still counts?

I like to describe physical things with emotions… it’s pretty hard to find a way to do it, but when in the perfect scene, it’s kinda op imo 🤣

Flopping over onto the covers, she…

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@acancello so I have a whole book on crazy words (that I can’t get to at the moment) but I’ll have to share a few on here!

@acancello

Thanks! Yeah, it’s been a lot of fun to make! Yeah, both hard and soft magic systems have unique pros and cons. I personally enjoy thinking and writing about hard magic systems, but soft magic systems (if done well) are really fun to read. Harry Potter is a good example of soft magic systems, I’ve never got into it, but I know a little…[Read more]

@acancello

Wow!! Those are cool! Yeah, I’ve been trying to get better at describing situations in my book as well. I like to look up ‘descriptive words for –‘ whatever I needed, and just reading them helps me to remember them for future reference. Also, if you copy and paste them into a doc, you can review them when you need it. That’s what I…[Read more]

@acancello

I have read all 8 Anne of Green Gables books, and I think the second one might be my favorite, though that may in part be because in all the movie adaptations I’ve seen they gloss over that part of Anne’s life.

I’ve not read the Little Women books, but I’ve heard a lot about them and they’ve been on my list to read for a while.

@felicity

Jonathan: “Oh about three thousand years in the future, in a different world, my author told her friends about it, and now I’m famous.”

XDXD

Yes, Jonathan. You are famous now. You’re welcome! 😁

@loopylin

Eddie: Oh! My favorite food is jello berries.

Ellie: Those are more like candy…

Eddie: No, they’re fruit. They count.

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@acancello   Barge all you want!! 🙂

Yeah, sweet and savory…you’re right, it’ll probably be good. We’ll see!

@acancello

I, also am a homeschooler with little-to-no drawing talent! And I like dogs, who doesn’t (rhetorical question)!?

1. My favorite book series is unquestionably Anne of Green Gables.
2. I normally like to write once or twice a week.
3. I don’t play any sports, but I like doing crafts! Especially things like origami and carving. I have…

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@acancello

I like what Ami’s answer to the question was, that’s a really good way to describe her!

Ikr? She doesn’t like going out of her comfort zone.

Yet I make her do it all the time in my WIP. Poor girl. XD

@thearcaneaxiom

Nele: Well, so do savors… savories… savori?

Hmm… 🤔

How thought-provoking…

Can “savory” be used as a noun??

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@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @euodia-vision @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity  @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @acancello @whalekeeper @anyone-I-missed

New question for y’all!! (Or rather your charries 😉 )

 
What is your favorite food or meal?
Ami: Anything like a warm, comfort food. Like a bowl of stew or soup.

Ev: I don’t real…[Read more]

@acancello

Whats your favorite book series?

I’m currently reading The Ranger’s Apprentice, and it’s great!

Do you like to do any crafting or sports? (Kinda a random question, but I know some people, like me, don’t play any sports. I just like to run):D

I don’t do sports either really, but as far as crafting goes sometimes I’ll get a new thing I w…[Read more]

@euodia-vision    Riya the masked archer. I love it!

@loopylin   Don’t apologize! I love reading about all your characters! Dennis and Mel seem fun…especially Mel. 😉   Poor Dante. Hopefully he can recognize that just because his family messed up doesn’t mean he has to. Does he?

@acancello   I love how Shauna and Jean choose jobs/car…[Read more]

@acancello

Aw, thanks!

It’s super sweet that Jean wants to be a mom. I remember saying in first grade that I wanted to be a mom.

@acancello @godlyfantasy12 @esther-c @loopylin @euodia-vision @keilah-h @anyone else who wants to answer.

@lightoverdarkness6 (by the way, I know I keep saying this, but Matthew is so sweet!)

@whalekeeper (Hugo and Seb make me laugh. <3 )

Question: What do you want to be when you grow up? Or if you’re already grown up, what did you want to…[Read more]