@acancello
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Esther started the topic He is Risen!!!!! ⭐️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Happy Easter, everyone!!! 🐰🐣✝️🌷
Praise the Lord our Savior is alive!!! 🥳 He rose from the grave, for death could not hold Him down. Hallelujah!! ✨
Hope you all have a blessed Easter! 🥰🥰
“And he said to them, “Do not be alarmed. You seek Jesus of Nazareth, who was crucified. He has risen; he is not here. See the place where they laid him…[Read more]
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LandriC started the topic Civil War Short Story Critque in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years ago
@esther-c @kyronthearcanin @freedomwriter76 @acancello @gwyndalf-the-wise @anyone
Hi guys!
This is a really old short story of mine. I’ve decided not to turn it into a novel, but I’d still like to hone it and fix it up. Edits/opinions/ideas are appreciated!!The ballroom was a sea of bobbing and floating colors. Even the oppressive Alabama hea…[Read more]
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@acancello @kyronthearcanin @godlyfantasy12 @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @janellebelovedpig
…so I’m hoping it’s okay for me to jump in, but if not feel free to ignore this…
also please excuse my terrible usage of telling too much and the poor formatting and horrible transitions XDFor a while she was silent. Then with a huff…
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
That’s what I was thinking, but we can wait and see if there are more ideas.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Alright! Hmm… Let’s see. I’ll just try to think of a few random ideas.
The Secret Door
The Forbidden Portal
In Too Deep
Far from Home
These are pretty vague, but I didn’t really have enough info to think of something better. 😅🤣
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12
Heheh I think I gave a rough cliffhanger there. 😅🤣
Any ideas for the next part of the story?
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Esther replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @kyrontheracanin
Oooh, so I don’t have any ideas for the next part of the story, but I think the boy should be named Griffin or Silas. I can’t choose which. 😛
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Euodia posted an update 3 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @esther-c @acancello @whalekeeper @awsumfaith @gwyndalf-the-wise @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity
Hello everyone!
Sorry, I haven’t been on much, we lost power for 4 days and now have family in town. I just wanted to let y’all know that I’ll be on again in a few days and will catch up on things…[Read more] -
Starshiness replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years ago
@elanor Thank you!! Your poem is beautiful as well; what a joy to be inspired by the attributes of our God and create poetry from it in our meditations!
@janellebelovedpig Thanks! 😊 Well kinda! I’ve never had to lose someone close to me or have a friend who had to “fight to live” in that sense, but the prompt this grew from was “give someone a…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @esther-c
Idk how often we’re circling back, but here:
The girl’s hands flew to her hips and she skewered me with her glare. “Why do you, a complete stranger, need to know my business? Isn’t that kind of nosy?”
I shrugged. “Maybe. Let’s just start with your name, t…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years ago
@acancello I do!! Poetry is such a fun genre to explore, not to mention it’s satisfying to write something short you can actually finish… unlike my novel WIP… 😂 Here’s one of my really short poems where I experimented with spacing and condensation of thought through metaphor.
Dandelions
Embodiment of
Dreams
S c a t t e r e d
With…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig started the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years ago
@acancello @esther-c @felicity @any other poets or poetesses.
I can’t figure out how to punctuate throughout and also at the end of the lines. Thoughts?
The fear of the Lord is clean, enduring forever
Desirable far beyond refined gold
Thy judgments are true, righteous altogether
Sweeter than the sweetest honeycomb
Turning simple to…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years ago
Ok! Here it is! Feel free to critique it as needed. This was written very hurriedly because I was supposed to be making lunch…but I knew if I didn’t write it down I’d loose it. 🙂
To the Friend I Once Knew
Years have passed since we’ve been in touch
The friendship we shared has faded,
Drifting into memories I envy so much,
Our…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 1 month ago
I do write poetry occasionally. Usually ideas come to me at the most random times. The most recent one I wrote was about lost friendship. I can share it if you want!
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 1 month ago
Sometimes I write prayers as poems/songs:
Thank You Lord that I’m no longer
lost as to my future
or hopeless as to my past.
the pain, terrors, fears and failures I thought would last
instead have melted away
in the light of the rays
of Your wondrous grace
and mercies new with the dawn.
Or little devotional thoughts:
When in the…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@acancello @kyronthearcanin @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings OOH I wanna go!!
I glance at my watch; How is it already so late? It might be best to go home. I have no clue where I’m going, and the girl is nowhere to be seen.
I turn to walk out the tree I came out of, to find the opening is gone. My heart beats quickly. It was just her…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings
I’m a little late, but here…
With a stunning light, I am somewhere else. Where, I don’t know, but I know it is far, far away from the place I knew. Yellowed grass spreads out in a wide circle around the tree I’m in, and from there it gets greener until there are hills, and trees beyond them.…[Read more]
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Esther started the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @euodia-vision @lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @awsumfaith @light-warrior-pen @joy-calle @acancello @felicity @kyronthearcanin @anyone-I-missed
Ok, ok, ok…
I have an idea.
So, I know we already have multiple RPs, but what if we did another character castle…
This time we don’t add in any good…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Oooh! Fun!!
@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings
I cock my head as she disappears into the portal. I go up to the tree and try to open the door. It opens much easier than I expected. The light shines out, blinding me. With a smile and my curiosity getting the better of me, I walk through…
(Don’t know why that was in pre…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 1 month ago
I write poems occasionally! 😀 My more recent poems are better than some of the ones I wrote like two years ago. XD
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I’m glad you’ve gotten power back. That must’ve not been fun. 😬 We’ve been having lots of rain/storms in our area, and today we have a tornado watch, sooo yep. Some bad weather.
Anyway… XD
Ok! Talk to ya later!! 😄
Me toooooo! It was horrible. XD We were watching a foster boy with a lot of energy during the power outage and then 4 little cousins all 8 and under were hear as well so it was chaos! But yes, the weather has been crazyyyyyyyy
Lol, XD. I TOTALLY understand. Almost all of my cousins on my Dad’s side of the family are younger than me; and we had all of my Dad’s side over at my grandparents house for Christmas last year. That’s like 30-something people… so… yeah, I can understand the chaos. 😬🤣
Ooof yeah, on my mom’s side, I have four older cousins and two ones that are barely younger but then my dad’s side is all VERY younger. 😅
Thanks Freedom! Amen to that, the weather has been so crazy!
Where in the US do you live? Cuz where I’m at it’s gonna be 80!!!!!!!
AGREED! Goodness, yes, it’s weird because they’re family and you want to be with them but then they’re also crazy and tiring. 😅😂