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Active 1 year, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Esther replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 2 years, 7 months ago
Yesyesyesss 😆 I love this idea so much.
Now i just have to choose which charrie to put in… 😑
Ok, ok, umm…. I think I’mma go with Ev. Cuz… if he gets hurt it’ll probably be more his fault than yours, if you know what I mean. XD
I’m not sure how much you already know about him cuz you’ve seen him in rps… Should I just give you e…[Read more]
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Smiley replied to the topic Hi! From Eilish! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 7 months ago
Sadly I didn’t, but I hope they do another young acting competition or something like they did for one of their anniversaries
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Smiley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
*Happily goes about my day*
*sees that Freedom wrote a scene*
*runs over and reads it*
*isn’t shocked to see that it’s sad yet it’s about Hans*
*goes back to the sobbing corner for a while*
WHY???!!!
also congratulations on the progress with your writing!!!
but Hans… also Eleanor is quick, she doesn’t waste a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins weird. Sometimes pictures glitch though. This must be one of those days…..
Hey, if you can tell me exactly what you’re stuck on, I might be able to help, although I’ll have to get back to you on it in a day or two because I have to get off in a sec.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 2 years, 7 months ago
I’m just gonna have to pick between them.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 2 years, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper sounds fun!
now, what to do……
I don’t have a lot of my writing down on paper lol. It’s mostly in my head still, so I’m just going to have to type random scenes up here once I narrow down who I want to insert.
Crosshair and Snake seem like the most likely candidates. They’d survive for fairly long, depending on who they’re…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins nope, still glitched, try another way of putting it into the window
hit the insert/edit image and then get it from your computer or phone’s files?
you’re welcome for the idea! I love having a fellow Star Wars fanfic writer to talk to lol. I can’t wait to see it if you end up writing it!
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whaley replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 2 years, 7 months ago
Haha, I accidentally tagged this topic with the line “Got Freedom’s tag wrong” XD that was supposed to be my edit excuse, not a tag! Silly me.
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whaley started the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @rae @esther-c @keilah-h @lydibug @thearcaneaxiom @anyone
I think this is a fun idea if I tone down the violence for sensitive people 😀
I’m not going to beat around the bush. Submit one character, with extra description for combat setting (weapons, strengths and weaknesses, etc). I will run them all…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins ooh, one thing you could do is write a short prequel from Crosshair’s POV, starting off much the same way that episode starts off, but instead of Rampart sending him off with Cody, he’s like “You’re coming with me to investigate this planet.”
It could also give a little detail as to why Cross is tracking Leo, but makes no effort…[Read more]
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-GRCR- posted an update 2 years, 7 months ago
Eat ramen. Sit down at computer. Cry. Think. Plan book. Cry. Write a little. Ramble about book. Cry. Research. Get writer’s block. Cry. Look at BTS memes. Laugh. Think about characters. Remember book. Cry. Procrastinate. Self deprecate. Cry. Watch anime trailers. Eat more ramen. Curl up and sob.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Umm…the drawing’s severely glitched. I can only see loads of text lol
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Esther posted an update 2 years, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009
Since I mentioned it over on the RP…
How are you doing? 😊 How’s writing been?-
@esther-c
Hi!!!! <3
Wellll I may or may not have gotten my heart broken (I hate teenage mood swings…ugh!) …so I've been trying to deal with that. (This guy I have liked on and off for three years asked my nemesis to prom (okay she's not a nemesis…haha!) and it's just been me feeling like I'm not good enough for him and that nobody will ever l…[Read more]-
(Sorry I didn’t reply sooner!! KP was acing funky.)
I can’t say I can relate to what you’re feeling, but from reading books and hearing real people’s stories, I can understand what you’re going through. I’ll be praying for you. <3 But I’m so glad it’s brought you closer to the Lord! It’s amazing how He can use a circumstance that we deem bad as a…[Read more]-
@esther-c
AHHHHH NOOOOOO
why do I do this to myself???
So you know the guy that I liked that I was talking about up there? (his name’s Jack) welllll…..his older brother Kai (he’s like 17 years old) has been super nice to me and we have so much in common and we’re good friends….AND I MAY OR MAY NOT BE GETTING FEELINGS FOR HIM….and I really…[Read more]-
Awww, that’s so sweet!!! 🥰 Ahh!! I love that so much!! XD That’s fantastic. 😊 Although I’ve never been in a relationship, my only advice would be to keep it at friends for now. Because who knows, even if this doesn’t turn into anything serious in the future, you could still be great friends. Anddd… if you really do have feelings for him you could…[Read more]
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Hahaha yeahhh! I know I’m not ready for a relationship now and I do want it to stay just friends for now. After all, I’m only 14!!! Ugh, I feel like I’m going to start getting a crush on him if I want to or not. And it’s awkward because my “friends” tease me about hopping between brothers….because Jack’s my age and Kai’s older….*sobbing*
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Oh yeah, I almost forgot that! XD (I’m 14 too) But that’s good. 😊 Oh! One book you must absolutely read (I recommend it to as many girls as I can) is Praying for Your Future Husband by Robin Jones Gunn and Tricia Goyer. It’s amazing!!! It totally changed my perspective on how to pray for my future husband and relationships in general. If you can g…[Read more]
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@esther-c
Heyyy sorry I haven’t been on in a while!!!
I might have to take Livia out of the RP for now, just because I’ve been sooooo busy!!!! Sorry, I really enjoyed RP’ing Lukas and Livia :/ I’m gonna miss that.
And I may or may not have feelings for the guy I was telling you about…
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You’re totally fine! 😊 I was actually just about to see how you were doing. 😁
Aww, I’m a little disappointed, but I totally understand, so don’t feel too bad about it. 😉 I get life being busy. The school RP has slowed down a bit too.
🤭 I wish I could give you some advice but I really can’t other than pray about it. Journaling or writing out you…[Read more]
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@esther-c
Heyyy…just wondering how far you got in my story? I’m not trying to nag you, I just was wondering 🙂 and I am stuck again…so I could really use the help right now XD-
Don’t worry about nagging me. 😁 But I was literally thinking about your story this morning. I was like, “oh my goodness I haven’t read it in foreverrr!!” 😂 So I’m going to get to that today and hopefully this week too. I’m soooo sorry I haven’t read it in a while!!
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It’s okay! I get it, life happens XD
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Esther replied to the topic My first short story contest entree! Critiques appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 7 months ago
Sometimes you gotta feel it out.
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Esther replied to the topic My first short story contest entree! Critiques appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 7 months ago
Oh and just to clarify, the words that I suggested should be taken out shouldn’t be taken out every time they’re in your prose. It’s just a good rule of thumb to follow, not some law. Just wanted to make that clear. 😊
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I was just about to ask how you were doing when I saw this in my inbox! Glad you’re back!!
Um, I don’t think so. It’s a new day though.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@rae wow…..
getting a little worked up there
However, I don’t blame you for not wanting to add him in if he’s that overpowered. My question is, how exactly do the characters in your story get close enough to beat him, if like you said there’s only one being (besides God) who can do it? Like I can see Alpha going there by himself to fight, but…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
oh, and thanks! I have a lot of really cool dragon ideas.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins ah ok makes sense
so what canon events did happen? Like obviously Crosshair joined the Empire, the rest of the Batch are probably doing mercenary missions right now, etc….
So would you say this story happens in roughly season 1’s, 2’s, or 3’s place on the actual timeline? I’d go for 2 maybe if we absolutely had to quantify it,…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
And girl I’m so sorry 🥺 I know that must be so scary and overwhelming. I’m praying for you ❤ I wish I was better at saying encouraging things…but just know that you are loved and worthy of love no matter what. We love you, Min!! Don’t ever doubt that.
Thanks girl, you too. I love interacting with you here even if you’re…[Read more]
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