Allison

@savannah_grace2009

Lol you’re good XD

I blame all of you for the lack of sleep last night XD

I’m sorry!! I just want to take your writing seriously. My own writing only improves when I have potential critiques on the horizon 😅 I hope this doesn’t discourage you. If I ever post something, you are free to critique it as revenge, lol.

And hey we all get confused over our projects…[Read more]

Chapter 13

Decay

“Sssef! I’m not paying you to ssstand there doing nothing,” the Pythonos’s voice carried, snapping her back to attention.

“Yes sir,” she lowered her head, her cheeks flushing with embarrassment as her fellow workers all looked up from their work.

Shaking her head to clear her thoughts, she turned back to the pile of trash. I…[Read more]

@rae

I don’t think anyone was saying that you need to change Chase. Like Loopy and Whaley said, it’s not bad that he has that flaw, because he’s a flawed character that grows and changes in your story. We were just concerned that you were portraying him as more of a hero and that flaw was celebrated.

@whalekeeper @loopylin correct me if I’m wrong…XD

@ellette-giselle

What was he thinking? Hmm, maybe he WASN’T thinking. He often tries to do what’s right……. but sometimes he would do with a good long moment of thought process.

*sighs*

Now, because he didn’t think, he’s gonna die. So cold, so sad, bye-bye now. (Moral of the story; always think before you act kids)

lol 😂😂

Anyone want to read what h…

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@whalekeeper

Hahaha 🤣🤣🤣

@savannah_grace2009

Aw now my cheeks hurt from grinning like a cat 😊🤣

Maybe the heat changed me in more ways than one 👀

@loopylin

It’s complicated 🥲 I moved from the Midwest to the South four years ago.
I start talking in a southern accent whenever I’m being playful (I already knew how since I was a huge fan of Mark Twain) or romantic? And I shift without noticing. Like I call my mom “momma” now, and I call my dad “dadder” with a twang. None of the rest of my…[Read more]

@loopylin

I was at camp all last week so yeah, it’s hard writing after social stuff.

Also I’ve been binge watching doctor who so that’s probably what’s filling up the story portion of my brain

Have fun! I’ve only watched the first season of Doctor Who, but I have Doctor Who pajamas. And a Doctor Who shirt. Both of which I got from a neighbor g…[Read more]

@loopylin

😡 Are you trying to test our friendship or somethin?!?

@loopylin

Nope!

@everyone I will get back to this after I finish an over-thought-out expression sketch for one of my characters.

@whalekeeper

Thanks girl, that makes me feel a lot better 💗💗💗

You’re the best Whaley!!! <3

You literally ALWAYS know what to say!!! (:

@theducktator

Yep. If you ask for an interviewer (if no one else will, than I will).

Sorry @loopylin and @calyhuge for not continuing; I’m in more of an artistic mood this month and the words are. Not. Flowing.

I know you guys are here so I’ll come back to this soon.

@loopylin

I saw what you wrote and I agree with that too 😛

@theshadow

Thanks for the support XD

@savannah_grace2009

Girlll for a second I was scared you were gonna talk about my story and I was scared XD

Look girl, you stay confident and keep writing, okay? 😊 Once upon a time, each of us probably had a dark phase, and may still be going through it. Maybe your story started that way, but now, you seem…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22 @rae @theshadow @theducktator @if-there’s-anyone-else-haha

*awkward cough*

I know this has been going for a bit, but would it be possible to join? If it’s too much to remember, totally fine lol, but I have just one couple. I think @keilah-h is the only one who would know these two (and hybridlore, but I don’t think she’s in…[Read more]

Okay but actually….any of you guys that have read my book…

is it too dark??

I’m being legit…cuz now I’m scared…

not to take the focus off Whaley but all these concerns about stories being dark has got me paranoid