Allison

@ellette-giselle

Congratulations and good job!! 😄

I don’t think anyone called next, so I think you’re welcome to go ahead!

@grcr @linus-smallprint @rae @ellette-giselle ok! I still don’t have my own drawing of the character, but my brother and I will judge each of your drawings on how close they were to our imagining of Feather!

They were all really good and really close to my thoughts. You all got the scar in the right place, too!

• I like the way you did the…

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@elishavet-pidyon ok, that’s fine!

@linus-smallprint I don’t know. It’s just that you only talk about Alan and Tyn having a redemptive journey (although I suppose that’s only because they’re the main characters), and Alan literally just arrested a Christian couple for existing, so I thought if Alan becomes a Christian somewhere down the line, how accepting will Oliver be of that,…[Read more]

@theshadow

You tagged me, but this never came up in my email, so sorry for the late response😕

I’m pretty much on the same vain as Whale. Rivals is a pretty general term, but usually you’ll see some parallels between them.

There can be the kind of rival where they are simply trying to one up each other, simply prove that they are superior in…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle ooooh it’s getting intense!!

@rae Yeah, personally I think it should switch between the two characters, unless the whole book is solidly from one character’s POV, in which case stick with him.

@rae ok cool!

@everyone else I’ll review your drawings tomorrow! I have to get my brother on this because I share the character with him.

@theducktator @grcr lolllll

too funny

@stephie yeah the formatting fixed itself a little while after I posted

@loopylin cute!! I have a stuffed apatosaurus too. His name is Twix.

@freed_and_redeemed @smiley @theshadow

Oh yeah I forgot to put the thing introducing the species in the beginning. Ugh. That’s in the same chat as the drawings

I also have art of most of the characters, they’re in the latest two or three pages of the non-human sentients chat

@smiley @freed_and_redeemed you’re not gonna know the fandom this is for but just know that it’s based off a video game series I don’t really suggest getting into but I enjoyed., and I like turned it into a sci-fi thing so now all the characters are different creatures and there’s space travel and stuff.

@theshadow you’ll probably like this…[Read more]

@rae

I second @ellette-giselle, but I would probably make the larger portion of it Mandin’s, and then a shorter scene/s from Nahim’s point of view. Being inside the mind of a character who’s depressed and delirious can be disorienting (wow, alliteration there lol.) Except if the rest of the book is from Nahim’s POV–then, it might be better just…[Read more]

also, is the formatting weird for anyone else?