Allison

@liberty and @everyone

Is there anything specific you want us looking for?

I’m not sure….

I’m just wanting to know if the plot makes sense at all, or if it’s all over the place.

In other drafts, I used to just throw the characters at you, but now I’m trying to establish them more distinctly.

So basically…I just want to know if all the…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Aw thank you so much girl <3 that means a lot!!!!!!!!!!!

And don’t worry about it!!!!! If you can, yeah, just let me know!

@savannah_grace2009

I might be able to read it, but I’ll try to get back to you if/when I start.

Don’t let yourself think that you or your writing isn’t valuable, even if no one is reading it at the moment. You’re an amazing writer, and if God wants you to use that talent right now, He’ll help you to write what he wants you to.

I had to share this message I got from my grandma this evening.

…Their house is down the street from us. 🤣🤣 My grandmother lives for socializing.

@keilah-h

Okay!!!

Sounds good!!!!!!

Btw did you see I added chapter titles?

@savannah_grace2009 All righty! I’ll have to write some part of it for you to read.

and yeah I read fast lol

I’ll have to critique it fully tomorrow cause I don’t have time to type out a whole thing but I will get you that feedback!

@rae oh yeah and Alpha and Silvanis arguing sounds crazy.

why can I see a pair of angry Night Furies roaring at each other as the image of how that debate would go?

@rae thank you!! Glad you liked it, and yes I can agree the ending was amazing; when I read the original I was like “oh I gotta have this, it’s great”

I actually added the comic artist’s appearance; in the original, it simply shows them all talking and then the doorbell rings, then it switches to a panel of a door, then Scout opening the door an…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I actually love that Liv is younger but thought to herself that Aubrielle needs the resources more. It’s only a little contrast (to the ‘save the resources for the youngest’ trope) but does a lot to show her personality.

Aww thanks!!! That means a lot <3

Yeah Liv’s pretty sweet!!!! I love her so muchhhh

@keilah-h

Yes I’d read it!!!!!!!

@keilah-h

Wow you do read fast!!!!!!!!!!

XDXD

What did you think???

@theducktator

Sounds good!

@whalekeeper

Aughhh! Now it’s glitter pudding! *licks some off the spoon* Oh wait… tastes like strawberry!

@hybridlore

😊 *Chucks the whole bag of glitter into your cup, spilling it everywhere*

@whalekeeper

Ahh… okay then, I’ll accept it. ☺️

@hybridlore

Glitter in our tea?! Bleh! 😝

It’s okay, it’s edible glitter!! ✨ (Such things exist)

@whalekeeper you’re welcome!!!

@liberty

Yeah. I probably would not know a lot about the Holocaust if I didn’t love to read–I feel like most of my knowledge about it has come from historical fiction. It makes sense that other people who don’t read wouldn’t know a ton about it.

@whalekeeper

You’re welcome!

Glitter in our tea?! Bleh! 😝

@hybridlore @keilah-h @linus-smallprint

Thank you all for trying to help with my project! When I asked the question, I was still trying to verbalize what kind of ‘in-between genre’ this is, and I think I know what to aim for now. All the appreciation to you! *Throws confetti in your faces* *Throws glitter into your tea*