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@hybridlore

Thanks!

No, this one spawned an entirely new setting. I just can’t help it!

@jonas

Wow. I love this idea. This sounds super interesting. Is it connected to your current series?

@highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @theducktator @loopylin @grcr

Thanks for the feedback! So far, it looks like the popularity ranking is:

1. Chromancy
2. Spectrachromy
3. Prismathurgy
4. Spectrathurgy
5. Spectralurgy

With the other three having no votes. I’ll take this into consideration.

As some have guessed, this is a color-based magic system.…[Read more]

@jonas

I like Spectrachromy… and Chromancy…

Prismathurgy is alright… but I’m not head over heels about it…

I don’t really like the other five… 😁

@ellette-giselle

Aw, that’s okay! If you know of a different way to get it through, I’m open to trying other things, but I understand if it’s too difficult for you to do right now.

Some things I’d really like to hear from y’all are scene ideas. I’m planning to go back and extend a lot of the earlier chapters (at least 1-6) because I didn’t have the same word count goal for them as I do now. So if you have any ideas for scenes that would fit into those (or future scenes) I would love to hear them. So far I have a chapter…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle (I know you’re away, so don’t feel obligated to respond to this until you get back) @theshadow @whalekeeper @koshka @raxforge

Sorry these are late, it slipped my mind until last night. Without further ado, here are chapters seven and eight (also known as the underground church cha…[Read more]

@jonas

My favorite is Chromancy, but I also like Chromamancy, Prismathurgy, and Spectrathurgy. For some reason the sole “t” and “l” sounds bother me when placed in front of “urgy”.

@jonas

I think I like Spectrachromy/lurgy the best. I also like Chromamancy.

@the_lost-journal Nope! Just curious, no debt nor blackmail I know of. The only emperor I know cares nothing for potatoes, nor is his name Shadow.

@the_lost-journal

Sorry I’m late in getting back to you.

Yeah, that was a creepy story. I don’t have too much to say about it—I agree with Linus about the pacing. I, too, like your use of repetition here. 😊

in my reached up to my ears, to feel them blood… leaking out of them…

I think I get what you’re saying here, but I had a bit of a hard time…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal Don’t worry, I’m not working for an evil overlord lol

nope, just wanted to know. But I’m ok if it’s a secret.

@evelyn-collins how did i mess up your tag bruhhhh

@eveyn-collins heyyyyy! Was just thinking about you yesterday. I’ve gotten to the point where Leo learns she’s gonna be with the Empire in the edited version, and it’s great so far!!

I would love to see more illustrations! I might draw Leo and Crosshair again, too.

I’ve been doing well! I finished one of my own fanfics during the new year and…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal where you got the potato pictures.

@rae I like it! What happened to Baron? He sounds like he got really messed up. Poor guy.

@theshadow thank you!

Ooh, I really love the idea of Old Hunter looking kinda like Sniper but obviously older and with scars or something. Maybe I’ll add a part about how Huntress feels whenever she looks at him, how it stings that they look so much alike yet the one who loves her is dead, and the other remains alive to torment her.

(why do I w…[Read more]