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Active 1 year, 9 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
@loopylin @anyone
Moth
Warm, rich scents wafted up the grand staircase. Moth, who had chosen to exit his room and speak to people, found himself caught up in the crowd. Luggage was forgotten; groups dispersed and reappeared in different forms. All boys traveled towards the dining hall.
The dining hall’s carved walls reached the ceiling with…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
Lucille
The tower’s door had a warped surface and a handle. Lucy tugged. When that didn’t work, she slipped both her arms through the handle and put her feet on the frame for leverage. She was young, but she was a warden’s daughter, and she would force this if her life depended on it.
Her arms whitened, fit to break from the press…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
Of course! And I understand hating your own writing. I was looking at my old roleplays a bit ago and they hurt my brain.
Also, I really, really love your descriptions.
Thank you! I’ve been trying to describe things thoroughly even though it’s tedious at times. Cuz afterwards I’m glad to have done it.
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
That is perhaps the most iconic side character focused entry I have seen in a roleplay. That was needed. I appreciate your thoughtful addition.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The mailbox! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
From: Flax, 21st Palace avenue Guest unit #5
To: Brea
Hi Brea, I’m most sorry for my late reply, I considered sending this letter and changed my mind many times as I wasn’t sure you wanted one in the first place. Well, I’ve always wanted a penpal so at most maybe this can make your brother pleased. Feel free to let me know if you…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
To my fellow roleplayers, I am sick today and need a break from KP. Will update some threads when I feel better!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Why did you choose to write about your main character? in the forum Topic of the Week 8 months ago
There’s not really anything deep behind why I write about my characters. If I like the charrie, high chances I’m going to draw them too much and write about them. If I have to be slightly deep, I think it’s just me enjoying the characters I have while blocking out the real world around me, using writing as a way to embrace different parts of the…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
Lucille
Lucy did not run without the Protector. She grabbed his arm and yanked him forward, pointing. “No – Th-that way!”
The tower had an opening at the base – a scuffed metal lid. She hadn’t noticed it before and now it was far from them both. But the crows’ shadows grew around them and the Protector surely couldn’t fight them off. He…[Read more]
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whaley started the topic Why did you choose to write about your main character? in the forum Topic of the Week 8 months ago
Why did you choose to write about your main character?
This is as complicated as it sounds! Characters are multi-faceted and ever-changing, so when faced with this question, it might be hard to answer. Do you write about them because you relate to them, carry a message through them, or simply enjoy their unique existence? It’s different for…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Topic of the Week…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
I have never felt so called out
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
It’s painful to read, but thanks I guess.
It’s not painful to read. You describe things clearly, there are varied sentence lengths, and you suggest emotion at sprinkled points through the sections. You also don’t harp on descriptions, which is something I struggle with.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
Aw man… If it’s any consolation to you, I enjoy reading your rps! You’re doing a great job and if you’re frustrated with something, whatever it is, usually that means you’re getting better.
Lucille
Lucy tumbled over the crow’s back and landed on the ground. The crow’s focus shifted and it instantly chose to stride toward her.
There w…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
@koshka Yeah, that’s true.
I take the revived headcanon too because I like that ending a lot better, but I could see why one might not share that view.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
Huntress/Sniper/Soldier
“Yes. Good idea. He was at the entrance of the labyrinth. I think he might be the one who brought us here. As for where he is…” Felicity thought for a second before speaking up again. “Do you know how to trap rabbits?”
“I’ve never done it before, but it shouldn’t be too hard to figure out.” I said.
“C…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
I personally think it’s kinda confusing. His death being undone kinda messes with the fact that the last thing he did was protect his brother, and will it do anything to the Anneiran ex-fangs? But at the same time, how will Kalmar ever be able to get into the Fane of Fire without his Throne Warden? (Artham could help I guess, but I don’t know if…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
ok I didn’t wanna make a new topic for this but I probably should have.
For those of you who are watching and following the Wingfeather Saga show:
How do you think they are going to do the end?
(Spoilers incoming for those who haven’t read the books, SCROLL DOWN QUICKLY!)
(are they gone yet? ok here we go.)
All right, so we have…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 8 months ago
I’m so sorry, Sara, but I’m so glad that Jesus has been comforting you during this time! It is truly amazing to hear of how the Lord is taking care of you right now. You’re in our prayers *hugs*
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 8 months ago
@whalekeeper you said it better than me, I echo your sentiment.
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whaley replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 8 months ago
It’s beautiful to hear how you’ve found joy, Sara. I’m thankful you’ve found peace in this.
Jesus has really felt everything your family is going through. It’s not just that he understands it, he went through it – he cried and suffered and wished for the pain to disappear.
And now, in heaven, Jesus knows the best remedy to…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 I am so, so sorry you had to go through this. But at the same time, I’m extremely glad that it strengthened your faith like that. You’re right–there is no cancer in heaven, and she is perfectly healed! That’s something to be happy about!
I will continue to pray for your family.
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