Allison

@theshadow great job!! Can’t wait for more!

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, that would be a cool scene! I’ll have to try to see if I can fit something like that into the story.

@theshadow

Okay, great! 😊

@godlyfantasy12

Ohhh, I’m kind of in a similar position as I’m writing the second draft of a WIP. I’m keeping some scenes, shuffling some around, and adding new ones. It’s been a fun juggling act 🥴😂

I don’t know how much of a plotter you are, but having a big picture idea of your plot is going to be super helpful. You don’t necessarily…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle I agree with @hybridlore ‘s statements! I think that bit about Leon’s reaction might’ve been what I felt was missing from the scene.

@ellette-giselle

Sorry, didn’t get tagged yesterday. I think Linus has a valid concern about the scene with Julian and Dian, but moving the scene where Julian shares the Gospel with him to a day or so later would fix it, in my opinion.

I think it was nice to see Julian argue with God a little bit. It’s slightly a different reaction than you…[Read more]

@theshadow
Thank you! 🥰

@raxforge

Oh cool! Have you ever played a game? How does designing a character work? (If you’ve done that)

@keilah-h

Well, that’s more experience than me. XD

@theducktator

Oh, and did that pudding ever thicken?

NOOO it DIDN’T

The flavor is still good, though. :p

I would appreciate it if you guys could pray for me! My OCD’s been worse lately, and I’ve been feeling depressed some days. Just pray for healing for my OCD and that God would help me lean on Him and grow closer to Him.

@theshadow

Yay! It looks good! 😊 Looking forward to the next one!

so yeah, you can keep it, but only if it works with the story.

@ellette-giselle If it works better for your story to chuck it, then do that, but save the concept for later cause I found it really interesting, and I’m sure others would too.

@theshadow nah, it’s fine.

Actually I am currently doing one! I’ll post it when I’m finished. Usually those drawings take several hours spread over a couple of days to do, since I’m shading them now as well as just coloring them.

@whalekeeper lolll the horse meme got a good laugh out of my brother

@ellette-giselle Weirdly enough, I actually kinda liked Julian’s POV. It was interesting to see someone who was technically monotheistic, but it wasn’t the true God, and how Julian reacted to that. I feel like even if you chuck the story for now, you should save the concept for either later in the book or a different one.

@whalekeeper nope, I’m not a board games/roleplay games person. My friend and I did a warrior cats tabletop game once, but it didn’t last long. I only play roleplay games (mostly warrior cats or dragon-themed) on computer now.

Does anyone have experience playing DnD? We talked about it on the meet-up call today, and I’ve done a bit of research.

(I know this probably isn’t the best place to ask, but I’m also interested to see if most people avoid the game, or whatever.)

@raxforge

Aw, I’m sorry to hear that, I’ll be praying for you.

Thanks man 🙂

@beth-torres

It is the morning of the dance. The party will start in the evening so there’s still plenty of time.

@linus-smallprint

I think it would depend on how traumatized Alan’s instincts are. It makes sense for somebody in panic to fly off into risky situations, but if he has the sense to think about how he’s going to travel and hide, then he might have to put some thought into where he is going.

@ellette-giselle

That’s insane, but yeah, at least the class all knew it was wrong. Thanks for the inspiration!

@mineralizedwritings

Yeah, it’s rough, I feel you. Exactly, it’s just that sometimes the things that feel so big to us don’t matter so much to other people, or they’re too hard to explain.

Okay, sounds good! Hopefully someday we can plan one you’ll be able to make. 😊