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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 5 days ago
If anyone is interested in what my Marcellus looks like… from the RP…
IGNORE his weird hand. I don’t know what’s up with the scissor fingers.
Huh…his hair isn’t as dark as I remember…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Rina —— Elderstrand (river)
The group came to a halt at the edge of a flowing body of water. It was a few hundred feet to the buildings on the opposite side. “This way!” Fleet shouted, running along the river to the right. “The dock is this way!”
They continued to run. Rina could no longer hear the Ironwalkers, but the…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Anyone Else have Book Playlists? 😉 in the forum Music 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@keilah-h Whatever you want! Lyrical, instrumental, whatever! ✨
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hybridlore posted an update 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@whalekeeper I moved us here so we didn’t spam the topic anymore like you said 😂
That’s okay! I think I understand what you’re saying—I know exactly what you mean by the bright light leaving a splotch in your vision thing. So for the most part, it seems like you have association, but it slightly affects the way you actually see some charact…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 5 days ago
If you want to talk about this more, we should move the conversation so it isn’t spamming this topic. 😅
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whaley replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Do words really change color for you when you read them, or do you read it in black ink but see it in your head as colored?
Acchhh this is extremely difficult. I believe my grapheme-color is somewhere in between association and projection. I was never confused as a child about how the letters were made with multiple colors, I knew they…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@rae @raxforge @ellette-giselle
Our characters are right next to yours, see below.
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara)
The four travellers tried to look inconspicuous in the dark. Their soaked clothes mostly blended in with the background. Marcel noticed Felicity’s bright hair, and motioned for her to shove…[Read more]
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-GRCR- changed their profile picture 2 weeks, 5 days ago
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 weeks, 5 days ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Sounds good to me.
I don’t have anything right now, I might later, but nobody has to wait for me to go.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@highscribeofaetherium @beth-torres
Ilahna —— Elderstrand (w/ Klethen and Everett)
Ilahna ran blindly, following Klethen’s form in the dark ahead. She couldn’t manage a song while running, so she had no way to sense if anyone was nearby.
She could tell by sound, however, that the armored creatures were still behind…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
(I wasn’t sure if your characters ended up following or not, so I just avoided mentioning it either way.)
Rina —— Elderstrand
“Where…are we going?” Rina panted as the group ran on.
“The city is being locked down,” Fleet responded. “We won’t be able to get through any of the gates. So, we’re heading for the river. We…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @hybridlore
Ellis —— Elderstrand (w/ Marcel, Felicity, Sara)
Ellis nodded. “Let’s go. Quick!”
The group slipped into the alley and waited in silence as the soldiers neared the street.
“Spread out!” someone shouted. “They must be here somewhere.”
Ellis gripped his sword tight, prepared to silence the first person who…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@linus-smallprint ooof Ender’s Game.
Good example for a dystopian writer, horribly graphic writing (and also the occasional curse words? I remember there being Marvel-level cursing but not much worse).
Luckily I’m not the kind who’s perturbed by violence in writing. Watching it would be a different story, but reading that kind of thing really…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
You’re not wantonly throwing bloody battle scenes in. You’re writing a realistic impression of a story.
Remember the missionaries to that one South American tribe that were brutally murdered, but the survivors came back to that tribe to continue the mission? Stories like that are what your writing reminds me of. This sounds really weird, but…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Anyone Else have Book Playlists? 😉 in the forum Music 2 weeks, 5 days ago
do the songs have to be lyrical or can some of them be instrumentals?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@ellette-giselle Believe me, these stories are marketed for 8-year-olds:
- Wings of Fire (dragon series I read once with a good deal of violence. One character’s death is so graphic the writer didn’t even describe it, although that was in a side story that I didn’t read though cause it didn’t grab me.)
- Warrior cats series (LOTS of war and…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Anyone Else have Book Playlists? 😉 in the forum Music 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@freed_and_redeemed yessss I will totally do that!!
now to find some songs.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 5 days ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
You’re good. It wasn’t that long.
I’ll let you go next unless you don’t want to, I’m not sure what I’d do rn. But if you want me to I could probably do something.
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Okay yay 😂
Yep, I think so.
I don’t use them for inspiration, but while choosing names for characters, I need the right personality to hit. It is a great feeling to find the right name for somebody. Does it affect math? …Memorization is much easier. In that regard it doesn’t get in the way.
Yeah, it’s just the placement on the keyboard. It’s pr…[Read more]
Right, I gotcha. How did you pick some of your characters’ names? What made you realize, oh, that’s the right one?
Awesome! Yeah, that’s really interesting.
Rightt, I’m still trying to figure it out. It has to be in the POV enough, but also not in there too often… it’s a weird balance. I’ll probably stick to unusual words, some sound-to-color,…[Read more]
I go through baby name lists as usual. I have a few letters in mind and/or a length, and swipe through until I find something. This search is very similar to how everyone else does it, there are just a few more criteria for the name to pass.
One of my favorite names ever ever ever is Marcel. The first syllable sounds solid, and the second has a…[Read more]
Honestly I do that with character names too. I try not to name characters even with placeholders until the last minute, because then the placeholder will get stuck as their actual name. Or they’ll still have remnants of that name affecting them or something.
Marcel is a much more unique name than Richard or Howard tbh, I like it way better.
@whalekeepr That is so cool! Yeah, I can’t imagine him being a Richard or Howard. 😅
Thank you so much for all your input! It’s been super helpful!!
@whalekeeper
Yeah Marcel is ten times better, at the time I wasn’t very experienced in name-searching.
@keilah-h Here ya go! 😁
thank you!!!
I hope this interrogation satisfies you 😄
haha I hope so too.