@acancello
Active 1 year, 7 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle those are great quotes!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
So does everyone else at the base know… you know.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
I love Michael. His explanation was believable and so sweet. 😢
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow
Chapter 24
Hallie walked into school, gripping onto the straps of her backpack. Because of all that had gone on recently, she hadn’t gone to school for the past few days. But by Thursday, Mom declared it time to get back into the normal rhythm of life.
How can anything go b…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going.
Thank you so much!!
A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so…
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
I have read them. 🙂 I’ve just been gone at a friend’s for the past couple days and haven’t given myself time to respond.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Rant away! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
I want to rant about theremins. >:3
A theremin is an electric instrument invented accidentally in the 1920s. It is played without any physical contact by the performer. Two antennas create electromagnetic fields, and the performer waves their hand around the antennas to manipulate pitch and volume.
Finding a theremin is hard because there…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
I’m reawakening this topic because I’m putting together a list of magic system questions for myself. (Felt like updating my world bible.) They will be posted here when I’m done!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 11 months, 2 weeks ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Nice to see you back! (Ha, I know I’ve already talked to you, but still. ;))
I’m not sure I’ll be able to commit to another full project right now, but I might pop in occasionally. So glad you were able to figure out some more stuff this time around, though!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle ok thanks!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle I was just about to tell you I haven’t caught up in a while. Which chapter was the last one I commented on? I should be able to get to it today or tomorrow.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle you’re welcome. Mind if I take the meme to post on my youtube channel on the 4th? They might find it funny.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle PEAK MEME LOLLLLLLL
I love that.
now, to prevent Soldier from deciding the cookies are for him and eating them all (and getting sick afterward)
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Summer 2025 Project: The Ashen Star (Working Title) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Oh, thanks! I do have some people already signed up for feedback, but I won’t say no to more.
Access granted. There’s nothing there quite yet, but I’ll tag you when I get something posted.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Oh no. Praying!!
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
You’re not alone when it comes to getting easily distracted.
Should I write Farewell in first person?
Hmmm, can’t say. It seemed straightforward enough in third person from what I remember.
I finished all the short stories, but I didn’t give you feedback for all of them I’m afraid. 😅
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