Allison

@liberty that must be weird.

imagine showing your dad that picture and saying “My online friend made a bad guy who has your name.”

Don’t do that lol

@ellette-giselle

Wow. Aladdin vibes.

Wowwww that is a humungous post 👀

guys how do you spell humungous?????

@theducktator

Don’t worry, I added it!!

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks so much girl!!

@theshadow

Thank you! I really appreciate it!!

@youthreegirls @keilah-h @grcr @smiley

Sorry for dropping off the face of the earth there for a little bit! I was still editing I just forgot to post, lol! So here’s a chapter dump for y’all!! (I apologize if I’…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

*huffs, sits down to wait patiently for next section* Fine then.

@rae

Aw yeahhh

We always had the best conversations hahaha

@beth-torres

I knowwww

I remember when Fire Face burned down the castle and just added so much more chaos hahaha

@linus-smallprint I’m a girl and I agree with you on that lol

@whalekeeper ^^

@loopylin @grcr @theducktator @esther-c whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @stephie @theshadow @ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009

Just sending out a reminder that tomorrow is the group call! 11 AM Eastern, 10 Central, 9 Mountain, and 8 Pacific time. Make sure either Ellette or I have your email!

@ellette-giselle

So now you stole a gun from me?

Well, it’s my world, so it’s my gun. And since I’m its author, I say it’s out of bullets. 😝

*makes another attempt to steal Leon and Rolf from you*

Okay. I feel like that wasn’t really clear . . . but then again, we did get a warning that the next town would be dark, so I guess that was it. I…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle makes sense. I still feel like something’s not right, but maybe I’m just looking for little tells you’ve put in your other stories when the main characters get captured/executed that aren’t there in this one, and that’s throwing me off.

So, no one would look twice at a dirty slave even when slavery has just been abolished?

@ellette-giselle

What… who gave you a gun, anyway? This is a medieval world. The best you should have is a sword.

@ellette-giselle

*inches closer to Leon and Rolf while you’re distracted*

@ellette-giselle

I’m not sure if this is what it is, but you said the Empire doesn’t take its own people to be slaves, yet there are two Imperials in the “care” (read as “horrific torture” lol) of a slave trader (that might not even be Imperial?) I feel like more people would ask questions, or at least be curious. The soldier that’s bribed into…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle yep!

Reading through it again, I realized most of my “improvements” were already there and I missed them, but there’s still something I can’t put my finger on that doesn’t make sense.

@ellette-giselle honestly hybridlore’s got a point. It happened as a result of their faith, yes, but it’s been long enough in the story that readers might not be paying attention to that. Also, no one’s brought up why they were captured. I’ll get into that more once I’m finished with math work so hold on a sec. I’m not against what’s about to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

True, but it’s not like, direct. Idk.