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Allison and
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Allison replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Thanks for doing that 🙂 Now it looks a lot better!
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Allison started the topic Alliterations?? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I was researching for writing tips and saw that people say you should not use Alliterations? My main charcters name is ” Shauna Sarah Smith”, I really like the sound of her name, but should I change it? Why shouldent we use alliterations? Thanks!
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Allison replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@kyronthearcanin @janellebelovedpig @godlyfantasy12 @starshiness @mineralizedwritings
Oooooh! This story is getting really good! I dont know how to add on though…. Does anyone else? Here it is so far!
One bright sunny day, I watched a girl leap over a rotten log and land with a splash in a muddy puddle. She was beautiful,daring and braver tha…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 7 months ago
@janellebelovedpig @starshiness @elanor @felicity
Wow! I have read all your poems and I love them so much! I am sorry I haven’t been on so long, but now i can be on more often! I haven’t written any poetry lately, but I have had a few ideas!
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Allison posted an update 1 year, 7 months ago
@esther-c @euodia-vision @felicity @freedomwriter76 @janellebelovedpig @booksbyjayna @landric @lightoverdarkness6 @sarahsmile
Hi everyone! Im officially back on Kingdom Pen! We now have internet and I can be on here more often! I missed you all and cant wait to see what you all have written! Our family move went amazing and im so thankful to be…[Read more]
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That’s great! We’re so glad to have you back!! 🙂
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Welcome back!! So glad the move went well for y’all! 😄
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glad you’re back!
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Allison posted an update 1 year, 7 months ago
@janellebelovedpig @ esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @euodia-vision
I am soooooo sorry about not being on KP! Our new house has no internet and it is really hard to find someone who will service where we are. My trip went amazing and so did the move! I love my new house! Already some friends are planing to visit! I miss you all so much on…[Read more]-
So glad the move went well!! No worries about not being on. We miss you!😁
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Hopefully you get internet soon! I’m glad your settling in nicely!
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Allison posted a new activity comment 1 year, 7 months ago
Hi! I’m soooooooo sorry that it took me so long to respond. We have no internet at our new house and we are getting it in a bit longer than a week. KP doesn’t work very well on my phone at all, so I’ll try to be on in a week! I miss you all!
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Allison replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin
Sorry, I messed up everyone’s names 🙂
I really like “In too deep” but we can think of more if you want 🙂
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Allison replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin
I really dont know how it should go yet 😀 But heres the whole story together. It might help anyone create another piece 🙂 What should we call it? Or should we wait till its finished. We can start thinking of names now!
One bright sunny day, I watched a gir…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 7 months ago
@felicity@starshiness@elanor
Those are all amazing! They each are so beautiful and they paint a picture and are meaningful! If you have any more, please share! 🙂
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Allison posted an update 1 year, 7 months ago
@esther-c @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings @landric @booksbyjayna @landric
Hi! Im not going to be on KP to much this week. We are driving cross country and getting to our stops pretty late. Ill be on as often as I can, but it might take me a while to reply!-
Alrighty! Have fun! 🙂
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Alright! 🙂 Hope you have fun!! 😀
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Enjoy your trip!
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How was your trip?
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Hi! I’m soooooooo sorry that it took me so long to respond. We have no internet at our new house and we are getting it in a bit longer than a week. KP doesn’t work very well on my phone at all, so I’ll try to be on in a week! I miss you all!
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Allison replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 7 months ago
Yes, please share it! I would love to read it!
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Allison replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 8 months ago
Those poems you wrote are amazing!! I would share some of mine, but I have them all saved to my moms computer which we packed away. I like to write about nature, people and basically everything! My most recent poem was for my neighbors, when they moved I gave it to them and they cried. It was all about how much of an impact…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
No, you didn’t do wrong, you can write as much as you’d like! 🙂
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Allison started the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 8 months ago
@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @euodia-vision @janellebelovedpig @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkeness6
I was just wondering if anyone on KP still write poetry and/or haiku’s? I was wondering if you wanted to talk about them, share them and critique them for each other! Just let me know!
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Allison started the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @kyrothearcain @janellebelovedpig @landric @booksbyjayna @euodia-vision @everyone who wants to join!
I made up a fun game that we all can play! So its crazy easy… Step one, im going to post a sentence, paragraph, huge piece etc of unfinished work. Then one of you are going to add the next piece…[Read more]
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Allison posted an update 1 year, 8 months ago
@esther-c @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings @landric @booksbyjayna @landric
Thank you all for the prayers! The move has been going great! We leave in 5 days! Saying goodbye to everyone has been hard, but better because I know I will see them again. I just wanted to let you all know that I will be on…[Read more]-
You’re so welcome!! Aw, that’s great!! Okay sister! I’ll continue to pray for you and your family. No worries girl! I probably won’t be on much this week either. Talk to you then! ❤
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I’m glad it’s going well! I hope you have a blessed week!
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You’re so welcome!! I’m so glad everything’s going well for y’all! 😀 I’ll continue to keep you in my prayers! ❤️
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Praying hard for you!! I know this is difficult, but you know the Author of your story. Keep us updated! ❤️
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Allison replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
The next 2 chapters you wrote are amazing! I love how each chapter draws you in! Like @kyronthearcanin , I am excited to see where its heading!
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Allison replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I really like it! I really like the characters names and how they do seem real. I dont see any mistakes or anything wrong with it. (Reading on here is fine, I dont think you need a google doc. Are you posting more? 🙂
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