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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
Riker was kneeling beside his father, white faced. His eyes. So like…
He should never have let this happen. Should never have let his instincts take over.
Never lost control.
Zlatan closed his eyes.
Zlatan, hey, stay here. Don’t get lost in your head.
Blink. Was that h…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
November
Riker had pulled away, leaving November feeling a bit cold, though he wasn’t about to say anything. He knelt by his father, pleading with him. November frowned in concern, his heart twisting in empathy. He could definitely understand where Riker was coming from.
What if it was R…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Mikkel
The man looked bad, but the only blood was bright, none of the dark kind Mikkel knew to look for.
He stepped away from Eva, his hands already digging out his kit.
“Riker, please lay him flat on his back.” He knelt beside him. “Does anyone have water? I’m almost out.”
The…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76
Jocelyn & Nyx
Nyx made his way off of Franz’s limp body, his fur covered in a blood that wasn’t his own. He hissed, even though the man was no longer conscious.
“Nyx!” Lyn’s voice made his ears twitch. He turned towards her as she approached slowly.
Everyone seemed a bit…shaken at Franz’s…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Mikkel
For a moment silence reigned.
Mikkel blinked.
“Poor fellow. Pity he underestimated his enemy.”
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon no he wouldn’t XD
*pulls Nyx into strangle hug as he squirms to get out of it.*
”LET ME GO!”
NEVER!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Also I have a feeling everyone else is gonna be like RIKER WE ARE SO SORRY and Nyx just gonna be like
PFFT I’M NOT 😎
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
So everyone is going at Franz now XD, so how bout we say it’s kinda free for all, and now Franz is unconscious on the ground, thx to all three guys (Zlatan, Nyx and Viktor XD)
and Arabella certainly have him a good talking to that’s for sure. She probably would’ve slapped him to if she’d…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 both are boys are wonderful! *proceeds to also envelope November in a hug*
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
White hot fury.
Freezing passion.
Smell of blood.
The world went red.
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He blinked. Franz was on the floor before him.
“I’m sorry.”
He was breathing, a large knot forming over his temple. Thank the Maker, he wasn’t killed.
Riker looker up his eyes wide.
“I’m sorry.”
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76
POOR RIKER 😭 FRANZ HOW DARE YOU!
Arabella
”NOVEMBER!” Ara screamed as the man raised his fist. November froze and Ara’s heart plummeted.
“No!” Riker moved, shielding November from the blow and taking it instead. Blood sprouted from his jaw and Ara gasped, tears streaming down her face.
Wa…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Why write clean? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 years, 1 month ago
@wilder-w
Let it shine
Let it shine
Let it shine!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 do u get off at 5?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 Franz can lash out at November btw it’s fine, I kinda figured he would
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
It’s fine! I like long ones, although I usually can’t write them.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Ik mine was rlly Long guys, sorry it’s cuz I put in that scene from my WIP
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
November
Novembee flinched violently at the first slap, feeling his own face sting. His eyes watered as a memory slipped in.
November’s fists clenched. “YOU COULD’VE HURT HER!” He cried, lunging for the journal. Riven raised his hands and with a swift motion, November was hurled into the flo…
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon
I KNOW!! He’s come so far…he has scars NO one knows about, besides the parents of the children those scars saved.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
If anyone else gets something in before me, ignore this please.
Zlatan
The man struck Riker.
Just like that.
This was not how a father should act.
This was like someone else Zlatan knew all to well.
He never felt himself moving. One moment he was standing behind Rikker. The next…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Thank you.
Oh dear. Crosshair and Zlatan. That may not work out well. Which it totally fine. XD
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