AbigailRose

@That_Writer_Girl_99 ha! 😀 I can get on board with that… *stands heroically on the verge of a deserted island with the wind streaming through her hair and her weird Jedi robes* May the force be with you. 😛 😉

Ahhhh… yes. Elemental fight scenes. *laughs* I can so relate. The MC of my WIP is also a fire Elemental, though not in the same way…[Read more]

@GracieGirl yep. And it’s usually the protagonist. *scowls*

Also, I named the character I chose her for… Ira Netzen. *grins* This poor girl is going to have such a split personality… 😛 XD

@That_Writer_Girl_99 well, any backstory you might want to fill in. Hints at the Warden’s involvement with the Elementals. (Which could also double as foreshadowing). Stories about the Catastrophes… little pieces of silence to fill in the things that Matthias knows, as a spy of the Warden, but isn’t allowed to tell the others. Just to deepen the…[Read more]

@GracieGirl NO! MINE. *snatches and glares*

XD Okay… I guess… *reluctantly gives her to you* Take care of her though… and if she acts weird on and off, don’t worry, because for me she’s a villain. :’D

@GracieGirl ah, yes. Homeschooling, as wonderful as it is, can definitely be stressful at times. I’ll be praying. 🙂

The nose too. If you’re brave enough to snarl at yourself in a mirror, notice how the nose humps in the middle and wrinkles at the bridge.

@Alia *chokes* Erm… haha… XD Well, don’t be afraid to draw it crooked and off center. Sometimes the impression is more important than accuracy. Also don’t overdraw the mouth— a few well-placed lines are better than the whole outline, which can sometimes look static and lifeless. As for snarls in particular… quick hint. More than half of a…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 she could approach Matthias about it… but it would be better, I think, if you did end up having the sparring scene, and as she’s walking in she overhears something, and then tries to get the info out of him while they’re sparring. His continued avoidance will only heighten her curiosity, giving you a great opportunity to get…[Read more]

Maybe this is a silly question, but can anyone tell me how to tag people other than typing out the username? Thanks!

Leigha stands slowly, & rather breathlessly, brushing fly-away blonde strands from her face. She extends her hand, to @anne-of-lothlorien “Thanks you & welcome! To be honest, I’m thankful we didn’t have to complete such an ‘epic entrance’. I’m Keleigha, but you can call me ‘Leigha’. Say, has anyone seen Katherine or Peace? I haven’t seen them…[Read more]

Leigha stands slowly, & rather breathlessly, brushing fly-away blonde strands from her face. She extends her hand, to @anne-of-lothlorein “Thanks you & welcome! To be honest, I’m thankful we didn’t have to complete such an ‘epic entrance’. I’m Keleigha, but you can call me ‘Leigha’. Say, has anyone seen Katherine or Peace? I haven’t seen them…[Read more]

Leigha stands slowly, & rather breathlessly, brushing fly-away blonde strands from her face. She extends her hand, to anne-of-lothlorein “Thanks you & welcome! To be honest, I’m thankful we didn’t have to complete such an ‘epic entrance’. I’m Keleigha, but you can call me ‘Leigha’. Say, has anyone seen Katherine or Peace? I haven’t seen them since…[Read more]

A small courier rabbit hops up to @stewie-plotter, drops a note at his feet. It reads, “@ceaseless-prayer sends her heartiest thanks, & some information she has stumbles across, which may be of some assistance in your quest. Unfortunately, @country-kar ‘s username was auto-corrected to @countryman, which may explain the trouble you may have had in…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 okay. That’s fine. It’s good to know your limits. We don’t want you burning out. 😉

Wellll… since you want to stick to Kara’s pov, maybe she could overhear some guards talking about what happened? Or perhaps she hears Matthias talking to a guard, receiving or giving a message from/to the Warden. This gives her suspicions…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 again, my apologies… *clears throat meekly* Telepathic dragon in the making here; I was practicing and got it wrong. *mysterious wink*

Moving on now.

No, you’re right. That’s not enough to drive an entire chapter. Unless something important happens in the sparring room, I would say cut it entirely. Writing is about change,…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 My apologies. That’s what would have gotten me stuck. XD
*ahem* How are you stuck?

@That_Writer_Girl_99 switch POVs.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 I’ll give him a shot. 🙂