AveryTheExplodey

@rae

Awww girl I’m so sorry….

*hugs*

Praying for you!!!

I’m always here for you <333

@rae

Sef

She flinched at the sound of someone calling her name.

“Sef!” All at once, she was back in the never ending nightmare….doors slamming…glass breaking…

No. 

He’s not real. He can’t hurt you. 

“A-are you o-okay? Hurt?”

She blinked, trying to remember where she’d seen this boy before. Apparently, the boy knew a great deal ab…[Read more]

@esther-c

Aww I wish I had a friend like Lukas, he’s sooo sweet and adorable!!!!!!

Livia

Keep it together. 

She took a deep breath, and tried to keep her tone even, yet get it out quickly before she fell apart.

“In the middle of the night, I got a text from my mani that Lucian, my chauffer was waiting outside to take me home, so I had to…[Read more]

@grcr

Tysm!!!
He really is!!! <3

Girl, thanks for reading, like, everything I post of my WIP….it makes my day! (:

And you can always tag me when you post from your WIP!!!!!!!

@RAE

I LOVE YOUR SIGNATURE!! <3333 Tenz my poor boyyyyyy <3

Sef

“There’s a reason your mother left you, you know,” he hissed, as if reading her thoughts. Sef let out a whimper. “She didn’t love you,” his words slurred as he loomed over her. “You’re ugly, worthless, stupid…she’d rather be captive to the Pythonos than have you as a daughter!” Sef…[Read more]

@grcr (you’re welcomeeee) @esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @anyone-else-who-wishes-to-read

Dropping the second chapter!!!!

Cassian’s bare feet flew over the verdant carpet, effortlessly leaping over sticks and stones in his path.

In his small hands he held a branch, and he wielded it high as he pretended to gallop through the trees.

He was going t…

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@esther-c

Livia

She turned her head away. She would not let Lukas see her cry.

“So you know how I just kind of disappeared for a few days there?” she paused. “Apparently it’s only been a couple days here, but in my world it’s been two weeks.”

Another silent tear slipped out of her eye, and she tried to hide behind the curtain of her blue hair.

@loopylin

Okay, narnia it is!!! lol

thanks for letting me know!

@esther-c

I kind of scrolled back to page 307 in hopes of finding more Lukas and Livia scenes…and I came across this one.

And I kind of let myself imagine that Xandro wasn’t a horse, but a human.

So as you read this, just imagine that Xandro’s a person…

And then she felt a familiar warmth on the back of her neck.

“Xandro!” she turned aro…

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@esther-c

I’m going to be casually stalking your profile until you write a Lukas RP….*maniacal laughter*

@esther-c

Okay…I’m just gonna pretend that she had to leave the school for a family emergency to go back home, so she just now got back before the dance.

Livia

Liv gazed out the window, the familiar buildings already beginning to trigger memories. There was the mall where she and Lukas had hung out all day, the street where they’d taken…[Read more]

@esther-c

Can I put Liv back in here???

@rae

hehehe

where should i reintroduce Sef?

@linus-smallprint

It did not bother me as much in Tress. This was because she never liked lying and she eventually got to a point where she decided not to lie anymore (right after she became captain). I recall her lying at all after that. John, on the other hand, seems proud of his ability to lie and does it without a thought.

True. I need to…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Great review. This is pretty much what I expected. It’s interesting that you brought up the lying thing, since Tress kinda did that as well, where as her character got more mature, she was more and more willing to bend the rules of what she thought were hard lines of right and wrong.

My personal rating is probably 3 to maybe 4…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Sorry I haven’t gotten back to you, I’ve been really busy, and unfortunately am going to continue to be busy for a while. I’ll say a few quick things here though.

I should mention here that this backstory is going to be quite vague and a bit mixed up when it appears in the story. Lots of this history is lost to mythologies.…

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@theshadow

Simply think about why the character is the way they are. Are they a pessimist, simply lack humor, quick to anger, or perhaps they are solemn and ponderous? In what way are they serious, and what lead them to be that way. Are there insecurities that are being masked by a flat face? How does this character interact with others, and how…[Read more]

@rae

Hey, is it okay if I put Sef back in here??

@everyone

Has the dance happened yet??

Shoot I didn’t realize it made two of them…sorry!

@grcr

haha yeahhhh and thanks!!!