AveryTheExplodey

@linus-smallprint

Awesome! Thanks so much for reading it! I’m looking forward to hearing what you think of the rest of it.

Good point, I hadn’t noticed that, but it totally makes sense. I’m planning to rewrite the first chapter anyway, so I’ll try to take that into account when I do.

Wow, that’s terrible. That kind of thing hasn’t happened to…[Read more]

@theducktator

Yeah . . . @kathleenramm You okay?

@esther-c

Yayyy!!! The moodboards look great!! 😊

@ellette-giselle

Really? Aw I’m so glad!!! <333

@ellette-giselle

Aww I’m so sorry

I can imagine how you feel even if I don’t know what it’s like…and even though I won’t ever feel what you feel, that makes me so sad

Ahhh I get it

I’m sorry (I feel like I’ve said that a million times *cries*)

@ellette-giselle

Umm, it’s a lot worse than rudeness. They can be pretty cruel.

Yeah, that’s what I meant, I just couldn’t think of the right word XD

I didn’t mean to sound like I was brushing you off…I know I’m using more mild words but that’s not really what I mean if that makes sense.

and shutting down isn’t an option when you’re the oldes…

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@ellette-giselle

Awww I’m sorry🥺😕😭

I can’t say I relate, but I can understand how hard that must be!!!

When people bother me like that or I’m in a situation like that I tend to just shut down, go to my room and not come out unless absolutely necessary lol

People drain me so bad XDXD

But yeah, just hearing about that is stressing me out…I…[Read more]

@ellette

hey…y’all are right next door to me XDXD

@ellette-giselle

Oh noooo

Girl I don’t even know what to say

I actually might cry..that hurts my heart 🥺🥺💜

I’m so sorry…

That’s horrible

Okay don’t feel bad…you have a right to be very very upset hahaha

If you ever need to vent PLEASE don’t hesitate to email me!!! I might not have the words to help but I can listen and pray for you!!!…[Read more]

@ESTHER-C
YESSS YOU RESURRECTED THIS WIP

I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR FOREVER TO READ IT

TAG ME

or else

@ellette-giselle

Oh nooo girly I’m sorry!!!! If you need to talk I’m here!!!

@whalekeeper

This sounds like a lot of fun! I’m sure you would do great. I’m game if everyone else is!

@liberty

Here it is!!!

Wind spiraled frozen fractals and reddened Lainey’s cold-kissed nose.

Every breath crystalized in frozen puffs, and she wrapped her arms around herself, shivering.

The sun sunk beneath the houses across the street, bathing the neighborhood in amber light, and Lainey hugged her knees to her chest as she watched the s…

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@theshadow

It looks so much better! I love that we got to see their family now. I feel like I know the characters so much better already.

@elishavet-pidyon

I love that soo much!! That was always so sad to me. I didn’t know C. S. Lewis told everyone what happened to her afterward!

You should totally write it!!

@theshadow

I would love to see it!

@theducktator

Lol. Everything looks better with an ellipse.

I’ll watch that. 

@linus-smallprint

Awesome! I approved it.

@liberty

I’m going to be able to submit something!!!!!!!

Also, one thing I just thought of; we don’t really care about the characters’ families since we haven’t met them yet. Maybe it would be a good idea to lengthen the first chapter by showing Jack and Elina getting home and seeing their parents and siblings.