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@highscribeofaetherium

I agree…it did get a little info dumpy lol

Again it isn’t edited…and the details about Andromeda are mostly in the prologue and will be revealed little by little in later chapters (if everything stays according to plan hahaha!)

@keilah-h

I know…me too…I feel like when I started it when she was little, it felt…[Read more]

I don’t know how many snowballs I even have…but here’s 161 words:

She didn’t want to wake up.

Closing her eyes, turning her face into her pillow and pulling the blanket over her head, she desperately wanted this to be a dream, wanted to go back to sleep and pretend nothing was wrong.

But Aubrielle persisted, the worry and unease in her voice c…

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@ellette-giselle @grcr

Okay thank you guys!!! <33

OH and I need some chapter title ideas for this section as well!

@esther-c

(tagging some other peoples too) @ellette-giselle @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else

Okay….

I have come to a decision lol

I’m keeping the prologue the same, but I’m tweaking a few things with the beginning.

Here’s the new first chapter (it opens when Sef is sixteen years old) Don’t worry, I’m going to edit it and…[Read more]

@theducktator

Oh I forgot I posted that lol

you’re fine!

@theshadow

oh my goodness

girl

that was literally amazing

I’m like speechless

@esther-c

I have no idea lol

ummmmmm where was the last time we RP’d???

@theshadow

Well, people who choose to live apart from God on earth are kind of living a personal hell, right?

Right, it’s self-inflicted. It’s choosing to be something lesser than you could be, which leads to sorrow.

How can someone get to the point where having the ultimate good would be worse for them than hell?

Because of who they chose to be.…[Read more]

@theshadow

That is true, he did have that point in between after the betrayal and before his death to repent. I guess we’ll never really know for sure why God allows us to go to hell. After all, as Judith said in her book, not even humans can a know for sure what is on other humans hearts, let alone the God of the Universes’ mind. Maybe people tha…

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*saves snowballs*

Throws two at @esther-c and @whaley

To everyone who threw snow at me:

I haven’t been on here in a hot second, sorry everyone!!!! Ahhh….

I actually did a TON of editing today, and I’m so obsessed with my writing!

I’m not going to post the part I worked on on KP, just because I feel like it could be too dark for some people (Idk though…) I promise it’s not super dark, but a…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

WHAT

GIRL

Your writing is so good!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHH!

Love this movement, protect Adolin! I’m on the final stretch of Rhythm, and I’m not worried about it, but you really never know with Sanderson, he’s really good at things like that. He’s killed favorite characters before, but it’s generally still fulfilling when he does, like with LightSong.

@theshadow

It doesn’t make sense really, after all these people are the ones facing hardships daily, wouldn’t it make the most sense to turn on whatever religion and god they believe in?

Very true, this is something we see repeatedly. Those who go through the worst in life often end up being the most drawn towards God. Part of it is because the…[Read more]

@theshadow

Why not just let us live in communion with Him in ignorance? I’m probably 100% wrong about this, but I think living in ignorance would be better than many actively rejecting God and being separated from Him.

I’ll give my best classical response, then my personally preferred answer.

Essentially as you’ve already said, there is victory a…[Read more]

@esther-c @rae @ellette-giselle

OMCCCC

I’m so sorryyyy I totally forgot about this!

Ahhh

Ruth, you can totally RP first!!

@the_lost_journal

Hiiiii!

So basically you just compile a bunch of photos and quotes that describe your character. Everyone does it differently and there’s no right or wrong way to do it!

I’d suggest creating a Canva account (go to canva.com and sign up, it’s free!) and you can do really cool things with Canva, though there are other platforms…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Being forced to be active on KP and make progress on my writing? I can’t tell if I should be mad or grateful, lol!

@grcr

Awww girlyyy I’m sorryyy <3 I care about you so much and if you ever need to talk to someone I’m here for you <3

I’ll be praying!