AveryTheExplodey

@ellette-giselle

Wow. That was a great speech!

I like the section. Didn’t really see much except for this, which was confusing…

“I can’t get up,” Julian moaned. “I need to take my boots off.”

But yeah, great job overall! Things are really getting interesting!

@theshadow

Hm, tags seem to be working kind of weird. Our names are not in blue, but I still got an email. 🤔

Absolutely! That seems like it would work great. Let me know when you send out the link!

@linus-smallprint

XD No worries. Seems like it worked pretty well!

@ellette-giselle

*shakes head at you*

Oh yeah, emperor, not king.

Uh oh… poor Dietrich.

@ellette-giselle

Still sad. 🥺

For now.

Yeah, yeah, yeah.

Probably. I don’t know what the king (and everyone else at the palace) is going to do once they hear of this… 😬

@ellette-giselle

Second favorite. Julian’s first. 😉 (Ian was up there too, but you got rid of him… 😢)

I wasn’t sure… I thought he was going to get a lashing. Again.

@ellette-giselle

Ooh boy. This was a powerful section. Good job.

But Leon knew they had now made enemies.

Nothing would ever be the same.

Dun dun dun……. 🫣

@theducktator

Praying!! 🙏

@ellette-giselle

Yeah… I guess I typed your name in your tag a lot before the Cadwicks. I don’t know. It just surprised me 😝

@ellette-giselle

Yep xD

Oh, wow! Cool!

For some reason, my phone just recommended me to type “Cadwicks” … 😂😂 Lol. Who knows why.

@ellette-giselle

No! But just watch him. XD

I wasn’t expecting there to be a twist like that.

Yeah… 😅😬

It looked really cool! It must have taken a long time to write out all the stuff on the pages. Did you design the website or have someone else help?

@ellette-giselle

Great section!! 🥰 I liked the Wilhelm-actually-Prince-Deitrich twist. Pretty cool that he’s now a Christian… but it’s going to be very dangerous.

By the way, congrats on the publishing house! The website looks great!

@linus-smallprint

No problem, it just confused me and I wondered if I was misunderstanding.

Okay, that makes more sense. Lol! That’s really weird.

Yeah, I’m trying not to spoil anything, but it seems like it will still work… possibly. I’m not sure if the glitch on the page (with the mysterious text box) is the best way to go, but it will do…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

“If you look at the code before, you will see the two dashes and the arrow indicating the end of a comment. . .”

I’m looking for this, but I can’t find it in the HTML box before the comment you left. I did, however, see this: class=”mt-2″ placeholder=””> –> directly below the comment. Is that what you were referring to?

So if…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, I gotcha. But it did catch me off guard.

I feel like he won’t … but I could be wrong. And if he betrayed them, he probably wouldn’t come back.

@ellette-giselle

The new section looks good too! It did confuse me when, in the letter, they mentioned that Jews were not better than Greeks. This seems kind of out of place in your fantasy world. Maybe cut that sentence, or you could put, Ardentans are not greater than those of the Empire? Or something like  that.

Anyway, good job! I’m ro…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

The new section looks good. Sorry, I was at co-op and then had a lot of notifs when I got back so it was a little overwhelming.

Whatever happened to the prince. . . *shudders* Creepy. Hopefully Leon and Julian will get to talk to him soon.

@whalekeeper

That’s terrible. Praying!! 🙏

@ellette-giselle

Also, I am dying for a protective older brother moment somewhere. 😂

I’ll see if I can put that in there somewhere… I’m sure there’ll be an opportunity. 😉😊

Liam totally counts, I just forgot him. 😢

@theshadow

Great!

Also… don’t hurt Everett please!!

Lol. Three of them want me to make him suffer 🤨 My plan hasn’t changed, though. There are challenges ahead, but more for Sara and Cole. And Alec.

@ellette-giselle

*smiles and nods* yes, put those characters through the fire, and we’ll see on the other side who were the true ones, and who wer…

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