AveryTheExplodey

@kyronthearcanin

Sounds good to me👍😅🤣

@freedomwriter76

Thanks! Hmm, I could color it to look more floral🤔

@felicity

Thank you! Yeah, a lot of people are saying water related things, waves, sharks, stingray, I could maybe try changing it to increase that vibe, it might also work as coral. Excellent question, believe it or not, with a…[Read more]

@esther-c

That looks really cool!! 😄

Whatever it is… 😂 Maybe it’s a flower??? Idk. XD

Thanks! It could be a flower of some kind😂

@otherworldlyhistorian

Someone else told me it looks like shark teeth, not the first thing that came to my mind🤣

@gwyndalf-the-wise

Hmmm it reminds be of a blurred s. Or chain links, vaguely. Or a braid.

Yeah, I was…[Read more]

@gwyndalf-the-wise

I think the dye is green, is he going to look like he fell in Dagobah swamp water again? It was me, thanks lol!

@awsumfaith

😮🤣

@otherworldlyhistorian @esther-c @kyronthearcanin @mineralizedwritings @felicity @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone-else

Happy Easter y’all!!! I just made this random thing, not sure what it is, but it looks cool, what do y’all think?

@esther-c

Happy Easter!!!

This is a time to remember Him, what He did for us, and indeed how He rose again! I love how you quoted that scripture specifically, because my sisters sang a duet of RISEN, such a beautiful song to remember Him! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xCQsK1t9EKY

@felicity

(No I didn’t forget about this, 🙂 I just had a busy week.)

(No worries, I feel ya😆)

(Ok! Though we will differ, and I’m going to state what I believe and why, I will try to be as respectful as possible. You’re right. I can’t speak for everyone, but the reason why it’s such a big point to me is because its pretty much what my whole Chr…

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@kyronthearcanin

Sorry I took so long to respond to this.

So at this point you’ve basically displayed plainly that she’s the shifter. Though you said that she was shifting reality, but it looks more like it’s only illusionary magic, convincing one individual at a time of what reality is, without that actually being reality. Perhaps that is only…[Read more]

Readers:

So what happens next?

Writer:

… Want to know about this random dish of food I made up for the world that I promise is completely relevant?

@awsumfaith

Looks cool! I don’t think I can make any meaningful critiques or suggestions yet, because you’ve given very little. I would second Kathleen’s comment though, but you have full authority over how you name things. If it helps, I like making languages for my worlds, and come up with all my names from those.

@esther-c

(I wouldn’t know what to ask. 😂)

Sorry, did I make any sense, or did I sound like I was blabbering gibberish?🤣

Is the donut edible??

(Hmm, to ask if the donut is edible could actually be an interesting question. If it can be eaten, then that means that one must be able to exist outside of the fundamental domain, meaning the shape of t…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Makes sense to me, names are hard🤣

@kyronthearcanin

Very interesting! Is Kyrah different from Kirah?

@esther-c

(I actually asked this question earlier to Historian in the deceptive form of): Do we live on a potato, a donut, or a pringle?

(This is kind of a joke in topology and physics describing Euclidean and non Euclidean geometries, though that’s not all of them. I could also describe it entirely in donut form for fun, like a donut hole, a…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Looking good! I don’t think your alluding to the idea of Brycen being one of the chosen here, other than the fact that the the story is told from the perspective of the other two chosen. And using the description of draconic for Tali would further increase suspicions that she’s the dragonborn, that being now two implied…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Haha, lol! Yeah, It makes sense that Amara would be the dragonborn because of Jade, but it seemed very likely that you were alluding to Tali, because only dragons were seen, then suddenly a human, thus, that human must be draconic in some way. I think I would personally prefer the latter if I was writing this, but I think it…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Interesting, I’m really liking this so far! So a few questions I feel are becoming relevant to the story as a whole:

Are the dragons inherently evil, or are they simply a corrupt nation? What is their motives in invading Illura?

I was going to ask about who the dragonborn was, but then reading through some previous messages, I…[Read more]

@felicity

(No problem. Honestly I knew we’d differ here, (so maybe it’s my fault) especially in the question of whether or not Jesus is God, which is really important to me. I’d love to have a friendly discussion about it if you’re comfortable. If you’d rather not, I respect that too!) (AHHH. I almost forgot to put parenthesis around that. 😅…

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@she-is-a-pirate

Welcome to KP! I’m TheArcaneAxiom. I like math, searching for divine fundamental truth, and implementing that in my writing. I enjoy sci fi/fantasy and my WIP consists of a little bit of both.

Questions:

If pirates is your thing, do you like the more modern dramatized picture, or do you like to study actual history about…[Read more]

@esther-c

I love it!!! I haven’t read WingFeather, nor have I ever gotten into fan-fiction, but I could tell why you wanted to give the context to the song, it’s very beautiful. I don’t really have any criticisms, but you mentioned realism, and I would say that this has far more of a romanticized vibe, but in a really good and emotionally…[Read more]