AveryTheExplodey

@esther-c

I also hope I didn’t come across as rude or brushing you off…I really do appreciate your thoughts because that means I need to work on foreshadowing! And explaining my book to others helps me flesh out my thoughts a little more! Thank you so much! <3

@esther-c

Ok, so the biggest thing I noticed was the lack of hope throughout the story. The characters seemed to think about death a lot and were put through a lot of physical pain. There’s nothing inherently wrong with that, but it needs to be balanced out with hope. When I got to read those Lilitu/Sef memories from when they were little, that w…

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@ellette-giselle

That makes sense! Jsyk, you don’t have to participate in everything, but they do offer a lot of different challenges and things for people who can do them. I didn’t even make my goal last time (embarrassingly so xD) because of school and homework. But I still had a ton of fun! It’s okay if you can’t do it, though. I underst…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yay!! The camp opens this Wednesday, but it doesn’t officially start until March 1.

@ellette-giselle

h ttps://kingsdaughterswritingcamp.com/

I did it last year for the first time in November and liked it a lot. Everyone sets a goal for the month, and spends the rest of the months cheering each other on, sharing excerpts from their WIPs, and doing challenges. Esther and I should be in the Chickadee tent this year, so if you’re i…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Technically I borrowed them from King’s Daughters Writing Camp. But yes xD

By the way, that’s starting soon. You should sign up for it! It’s like CWW but for a whole month. And only for girls. @esther-c and I should be doing it.

@ellette-giselle

Ahhh. Forgot about the double-rethrow rule. XD

@ellette-giselle

*sputters, wipes snow off face*

How . . . what . . . where did you get all those snowballs? XD

*strides off and makes a mental note to finish math so I can start writing*

@ellette-giselle

HYBRIDLORE!! I’ve missed you!!! (even though we’ve still be talking while I was gone. XD)

XD Same here, haha!

@ellette-giselle

YAYYY!!! This section looks good! I’m interested to see what will happen after they leave the city. Poor Roland. But Julian has a good reaction to him.

So glad you’re back!!

@stephie

Yay!!!!

@stephie

You’re so welcome xD

@highscribeofaetherium Awesome!! 😝

@everybody I’m starting to be a little scared of retaliation… What have I done? XD

@ellette-giselle

Oh, good xD

@liberty

Yay!

@ellette-giselle

Okay, phew. It’s hard to tell when people are actually mad or just teasing on here. 😜

@whalekeeper

I always feel so embarrassed when people ask for my email, because it’s such a bad address name. My dad convinced me to use it when I was twelve, and I haven’t gotten a new address since. 😅

I like it! It’s fitting for a writer. Also, props to you, because I used to be obsessed with making new emails and switching out my address &#x…

@esther-c

I hope you can!! I would love to see you there!

@theducktator

Aw, okay! Hopefully you can still make it!

@ellette-giselle

Fair enough. I wasn’t completely serious—there’s no time limit on the snowballs, so you can do them whenever.

Gotcha. I’ll keep praying that everything gets worked out.

@theducktator Yay!!

@everybody Ellette is going to be our official setter-upper, so if she already has your email, you’re good to go. If not, make sure to tag her in a status update and post it so she can add you. 😊

@esther-c

Hehe. *doesn’t even know how many snowballs I have*