AveryTheExplodey

@aranel

No problem, I love explaining my story to people! (And I have been wanting to read Dune for months now, is it any good?)

I can recommend the first book to anyone with the time, but it really depends on what you want after that. The first book is much more of a hero’s journey with clear good and evil, but after that, the books become…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I agree with Min and Jonas on everything they said. Resolve of the character will balance the unresolved political structure. However there’s still a lot of things you could do to end it differently. For one thing, most dystopias almost never talk about what happens after they take down the government. They need to reestablish…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

yeah, if you don’t get to it that’s totally fine!

@savannah_grace2009

If you check out the link I posted earlier, I’ve added some more chapters. Tell me what you think! (Sorry if I’m bugging you by asking you to read EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER, but you seem to have an eye for problems and plot holes, so I really appreciate your advice. Feel free to tell me when it gets old, lol.)

I might have a cha…[Read more]

Sorry, I’ve been offline for the past day or two.

@jonas

Both look cool, but I like the second better. The first one was your profile pic before right? Maybe it goes against the design, but some color might help? You could just tint the gray parts blue or some other color.

Yeah, it was my profile picture for a while, it’s one of my favorite…[Read more]

@rae

“All right, all right already. I’ve got a headache and I’m seeing kinda double and I feel weird in that I’m concerned on winning a war and you’re concerned about what I should be concerned about.”

“Well this is worrying.” …

Haha that’s funny

@rae

Thanks so much, girl! (Lately I’ve been second guessing myself, lol)

If you want to read the whole thing, here’s the link:

https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ

(Of course you don’t have to if you don’t want to, haha)

@grcr

This one is my favorite of the two you posted! I love it!

@esther-c

Okay, sounds cool!

Ok, Marcurious sounds like a really cool character. 😁

I love him <3 he’s one of my favorites

@mineralizedwritings

Okay, I’ll have to read them! I’ll add them to the list, haha.

@esther-c

No, go ahead! 🙂

@esther-c

What’s the plot of you WIP? I remember you talking a little about Ev and Ami, but I love them so much I want to know everything about them, lol. If you post the first book on KP (or anything else about your charries), can you tag me?

@esther-c

Here’s the next chapter:

Marcurious was fighting to stay conscious.

The poison had the world swirling dizzily around him, and the ceiling became the floor as the room was inverted. He was barely aware of the Traitor sitting at a large computer typing obnoxiously.

His eyelids closed halfway.

No! Have to stay…..awake…..

Just bef…

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@grcr

There’s really no do’s and don’ts for mood boards. So you’re fine! yours looks cool!

@grcr @esther-c

Here’s another one:

@grcr

Thanks!

@esther-c @grcr

My favorite one I’ve made so far! It’s for one of my MC’s.

@rae

I’m not really sure what your question is, lol. But I like your writing, I think it’s fine how you have it.

@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore

Do you want me to post the next one? (since I left off on a cliffhanger)