AveryTheExplodey

@jonas

So, with Marcurious’ concern that Ottoline will want revenge, maybe you could put that in later, the next time they see each other. It seems odd that Marcurious, while he is suffering from the effects of poison and surrounded by his captors, is worried that a fellow prisoner might attack him. He doesn’t even have to notice her, given the…

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@whalekeeper

It’s just when you spend all your time learning to understand other people, you forget to develop your own sense of self, you know? It doesn’t come as easy.

That’s me when I’ve been writing for too long…

@whalekeeper

BrUH I knOw I look sweet and gentle on the outside, but you ain’t seen my stupid side.

😂😂😂 I feel that, lol

Boys are….boys.

@jonas

Although, would that really be the top of his concerns when he sees Ottoline? Both of them are in prison and she’s only part-Azer, so it doesn’t quite seem logical that he would be legitimately worried about her trying to get revenge. It’s a funny reaction, but it relies a lot on the reader connecting all the dots.

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@rae

lol. A RP is short for role play.

@lightoverdarkness6

tysm!!!! <3

@savannah_grace2009 @jonas

Yeah, I didn’t think about it much. I assumed that Ottoline was there simply to scare Marcurious, and to scare her by witnessing his pain. It is a bit of a weird moment though because he assumes that Ottoline was there to torture him, but then we see him just being tortured from her perspective. It’s not that this scene…[Read more]

@jonas

okay, i’ll keep that in mind.

In the past two years he had:

• Managed to offend the entire branch of Azers. Let’s just say it involved some dirty words, nearly poisoning their president with a bit of Blue Death leaves (how was he supposed to know they were poisonous?), and a bomb. He was now on the run from blood thirsty Azers bent on r…

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@jonas

Oh, sorry. I guess I didn’t make that clear.

No, the Pythonos just injected Marcurious with a poison to take away his powers (not permanently, just as long as he recieves the medication), and they made Ottoline watch so that she would fear them, but also because they don’t like to wait so they wanted her ready to take his place to…[Read more]

@jonas

Okay, so in his “list of accomplishments” it says that he managed to offend the entire branch of Azers (he’s really good at offending people), and their all out to get revenge. So he’s scared the Ottoline heard about what he did.

Usually when he says, well, I’m dead, that’s just his catch phrase, so he normally doesn’t die, but comes…[Read more]

@grcr

Thanks XD

@acancello @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer @esther-c

I will not allow this RP to die!!!!

haha

who wants to write the next RP?

@grcr

Why are yours so good??? I’m jealous, lol

@grcr

okay! I think i’ve used that a couple times for towns and rivers and such.

@jonas

Whimsy is definitely one of most intriguing shards. I’m very interested in seeing what he/she is like.

Imagine the vessel is just the most dull character ever😂 That would be some interesting irony!

I’m guessing there is some pattern in the Shards, and whatever it is you could probably display it with that chart. The numbers might not be par…

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@jonas

Interesting. Part of me wants to believe that Whimsy is secretly Hoid, but we already know that’s not the case, although I wouldn’t rule Hoid out as secretly being Adonulsium. Anyway, yeah, a 16-gon, or rather a regular 16-gon I should say, or you can say Hexadecagon, but that system of naming gets redundant really fast, and most just use…[Read more]

@grcr

Where do you come up with all these cool names?

@esther-c

If you print it out/read it out loud to someone, it helps a lot with forcing yourself to read the whole thing instead of just skimming over it because you know what happens. It also helps with finding mistakes and sentences that could go more smoothly.

(I know you probably won’t want to read your WHOLE BOOK out loud, trust me, your…[Read more]

@freedomwriter 76

I love it! I wish I was that good at making mood boards for villains… Here’s mine

@freedomwriter76

WHY ARE ALL YOUR BOARDS SO SADDD lol