AveryTheExplodey

…inhale really hard. The magic is also capable of…

imprinting the memories of one individual on a photograph, onto another individual by looking at said photograph. Some Hypnotographers have even…

@savannah_grace2009

I’m sorry you’re dealing with that right now. As for what your mentor has said, I don’t agree with all of what he said, but I don’t disagree either. He could have been a little kinder, and perhaps given more positive feedback and advice along with what he said, but he did make some good pointers. Some of the things he pointed…[Read more]

@jonas

Did your mentor give you any suggestions? Because I think that it’s not good to only give negative feedback without any positive feedback or suggestions on how to fix the negative feedback.

That’s what gets a little frustrating with him. He finds flaws, and he tells me what they are but never tells me exactly how to fix them. If he doe…[Read more]

@jonas

Oh my gosh I love those!!!! I think my favorite is the one where “snake walks in”. Or “Ellis when Flaz starts talking”. Or when Zahlin talks. Those ones made me laugh XD

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom

Okay. You ever get that feeling where you want to grab your laptop and delete everything you’ve ever written and chuck it across the room?

yeah. That’s the mood I’m in.

I got an email today from a mentor that read my writing. He gives good advice…but often leaves me with a feeling of hopelessness for my WIP. Right…[Read more]

….lose their sense of smell, therefore they become immune to said scent…

…only grows in the jungle of…

Palazan. This cucumber allows the Hypnotographer to…

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Yeah, I’ve been trying to reel everything back to the actual magic system every time, but it keeps escaping topic. I guess that’s what is inevitable with such a system, lol!

@jonas

Sorry, I have to go. I might be on tomorrow. Bye!

@jonas

I know! I’m so sad I missed the line about “swiss cheese” lol that was great

And Flaz is hilarious, how he drives every person he meets insane!

@jonas

Wow! Thanks, that helps a lot XD

Sorry guys, I haven’t been on a ton. I’ve been really, really busy!

Can someone give me a quick recap?

I know she’s in a corner, but what exactly do I need to give her POV on?

@jonas @acancello @esther-c @rae @freedomwriter76 @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h

WHAT IS GOING ON?? I am confuzzled

can someone give me a recap, lol

Where is Ottoline? What do I need to write her doing?

Sorry, I’ve been really busy with volleyball tournaments and haven’t had time to be on.

Can someone help me XD

@scripter-of-kingdoms

Hi Kads! Welcome back to KP!

I’m the Arcane Axiom, I love math, searching for divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I read/write sci-fi/fantasy, and my current project is a universe I’m working on with my sister called the Septrum.

Questions!

Do you lean towards hard or soft worldbuilding? (hard mea…[Read more]

…hate humanity and…

produce a distinct silent but deadly odor fueled by said hatred. Only Hypontographers can get around this by…

…in the fields of…

Breakwind Valley. To train said Sniffer Cow, one must use hypnographic power on them. That way, they forget their…

…Cotton candy herb which grows in depths of the caves of…

Caramel Caverns. The Caverns have an inherent connection to the headaches caused by Hypnotography because…

…a milkshake containing extract of…

an anti hypnotic herb known as…

The only drawback is…it leaves painful headaches for the “victim”…