AveryTheExplodey

@grcr

Praying!! 🙏

@ellette-giselle

Lolol. 🤣 I know, it’s cool, isn’t it?

@ellette-giselle

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Julian, Leon, and Ian. I also liked Albee. For some reason, Ian and Albee seemed really well developed, even though we didn’t get to see them for very long. Otherwise, mostly Julian and Leon, since I know them the best.

~ Were there any character…

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@ellette-giselle

No worries! I get it. I just wondered.

@linus-smallprint

(Another thought, the priests think Leon is dead from what I know. I don’t know if they ever learned that the arrow did not hit him. But this person wrote the letter directly to Leon.)

Ohh, good point!

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, it’s kind of overused, but it does make plots interesting.

Sounds good!

By the way, did you see the next chapter of TCOH?

@ellette-giselle

That’s funny! 😆 Yeah, I had no idea this was the last section, but then… once I read it, I was like, okay, that kind of works. But it was definitely a shock.

(For a reader with an actual copy of the book, it wouldn’t be, cause you’d get to see how many pages left. We’re kind of reading blindly on here. XD)

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@ellette-giselle

The END????

I feel like Marius and Prince Dietrich will come back. The way you left it, it does sound like an eyewitness saw their deaths, but… Why would you have cut the scene off so soon? It feels unfinished. If you didn’t intend that, maybe you should make it clearer that they did die.

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@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @koshka @whalekeeper @theshadow @keilah-h @theducktator

New chapter on the doc. 😉

Also, TCoH reached 50k on Saturday!! 🥳

@ellette-giselle

Oh yeah. Pretty crazy.

Okay, I gotcha. Maybe rewording it would make the sentence more clear?

“I need to take my boots off,” Julian moaned. “But I can’t get up.”

@ellette-giselle

Wow. That was a great speech!

I like the section. Didn’t really see much except for this, which was confusing…

“I can’t get up,” Julian moaned. “I need to take my boots off.”

But yeah, great job overall! Things are really getting interesting!

@theshadow

Hm, tags seem to be working kind of weird. Our names are not in blue, but I still got an email. 🤔

Absolutely! That seems like it would work great. Let me know when you send out the link!

@linus-smallprint

XD No worries. Seems like it worked pretty well!

@ellette-giselle

*shakes head at you*

Oh yeah, emperor, not king.

Uh oh… poor Dietrich.

@ellette-giselle

Still sad. 🥺

For now.

Yeah, yeah, yeah.

Probably. I don’t know what the king (and everyone else at the palace) is going to do once they hear of this… 😬

@ellette-giselle

Second favorite. Julian’s first. 😉 (Ian was up there too, but you got rid of him… 😢)

I wasn’t sure… I thought he was going to get a lashing. Again.

@ellette-giselle

Ooh boy. This was a powerful section. Good job.

But Leon knew they had now made enemies.

Nothing would ever be the same.

Dun dun dun……. 🫣

@theducktator

Praying!! 🙏

@ellette-giselle

Yeah… I guess I typed your name in your tag a lot before the Cadwicks. I don’t know. It just surprised me 😝

@ellette-giselle

Yep xD

Oh, wow! Cool!

For some reason, my phone just recommended me to type “Cadwicks” … 😂😂 Lol. Who knows why.

@ellette-giselle

No! But just watch him. XD

I wasn’t expecting there to be a twist like that.

Yeah… 😅😬

It looked really cool! It must have taken a long time to write out all the stuff on the pages. Did you design the website or have someone else help?