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    SeekJustice
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      @jenwriter17

      Yes, he’s very adorable 😀

      No (i’d love to), I do ballets though, and I love those!

      I will neither confirm nor deny 😛 But it reminds me. I completely rewrote the prologue, and both Valtmy and Rochellaine have read a version of it, but I’m pretty sure you haven’t. Would you like to take a look?

      INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

      #78721
      Jenna Terese
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        @seekjustice

        Oh, yes ballet! That must’ve been what I was thinking of. 🙂 I used to do ballet too.

        😀 Hmm, I feel like I might have read a part you rewrote, may have been the prologue. But I’ll gladly take a look at it to check and make sure. 🙂

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        #78722
        SeekJustice
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          @jenwriter17

          Well, I’ve actually rewritten it since Valtmy and Rochellaine read it anyway, though I didn’t change it that much. So you can have another read of it, if you’d like. Tell me what you think (and also what you think of Jean’s new name?)

          https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T-tYVuU9CwMBJJgt4MIpkXj9fScSA3Z06DttCofZShk/edit?usp=sharing

          INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

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          Jenna Terese
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            @seekjustice

            WHAT YOU CHANGED JEAN’S NAME??? I’ll have to see about this… 😉 Reading it now…

            How is the third SFI book coming along? Are you just in the outlining/planning stage right now?

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            SeekJustice
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              @jenwriter17

              It’s *cough* coming along nicely…*whistles innocently and tries to escape*

              I’m hoping to write it in April anyway 😛

              INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

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              Jenna Terese
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                @seekjustice

                😀

                Well, I look forward to reading it in the future then. 😉

                I have to leave for a bit. I’m not sure if I’ll come back later or not. But I’ll finish reading your prologue and let you know what I think soon. 😉

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                SeekJustice
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                  @jenwriter17

                  Okay. I’ll talk to you in a bit then 😀


                  @rochellaine

                  Are you around this fine afternoon/night?

                  INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

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                  Rochellaine
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                    @seekjustice I’m finally here. 😛  Are you still anywhere around?

                    "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                    #78728
                    SeekJustice
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                      @rochellaine Yes I’m here! My family’s gone into town today, so I’m all by myself for a few glorious hours and I’m trying to get some editing done 😀

                      INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                      #78729
                      Rochellaine
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                        @seekjustice It’s time for family worship now.  I’ll be back in probably fifteen or twenty minutes, and then I should be able to be on for a while!

                        Finally we’ll get to talk! It’s been quite a bit. 😀

                        "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                        #78730
                        SeekJustice
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                          @rochellaine

                          I can’t wait 😀

                          it has been a while!

                          INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                          #78732
                          Rochellaine
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                            @seekjustice I’m back!

                            I tried to post a few minutes ago, but my computer wouldn’t load the page, so I have to start over.

                            How are you doing?  Is it still unreasonably hot in Australia? 😉

                            Are you working on anything in particular right now?

                            "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                            #78733
                            SeekJustice
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                              @rochellaine

                              I hate when that happens 😛

                              It’s been so hot all summer, but today it’s really cooled down. I don’t why, it’s just overcast and a bit rainy and weird. Australian weather for you.

                              I’m editing SFI!

                              INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                              #78734
                              Rochellaine
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                                @seekjustice

                                I guess that’s a nice change from the heat.  Though overcast days aren’t all that exciting.  Haha, we usually say that about Maryland weather, since we’re in the middle, not too cold and not too hot, so it’s often very random.

                                Great!  What sort of edits are you doing?  Are you going through chapter by chapter, or are you just randomly making changes?

                                Have you listened to the Mary Poppins Returns soundtrack yet? It’s on YouTube now.  My sister and I were about to listen to it today, but we’d only gotten to the second song when we were told it was time for lunch, and we didn’t get a chance to get back to it.  I’ve heard a few of the songs, though, and liked them immensely.

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                                #78735
                                SeekJustice
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                                  @rochellaine

                                  Well, we like rainy days here, but when it’s just overcast? No benefits of rain, and there’s no sun, so it’s all round loss.

                                  I’m making some changes, but I recently read an article which advocated for editing out of order in some cases, so I decided to try it.

                                  INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

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