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March 24, 2018 at 10:50 pm #68548
@seekjustice Oh, yeah.ย ๐ย I forgot it was Sunday for you!
Okay, the question is based on @jenwriter17 ‘s first chapter of her WIP which I just critiqued for her.ย In it she kills a character, and I thought she didn’t have enough backstory for the killing to make reasonable sense.ย But neither of us were sure about it, so since you’re an experienced character-killer, we thought we’d ask you what you think. ๐ ๐
The link she posted in her topic requires you to request access, so I’m going to try posting a link here that you should be able to access immediately.ย If you can’t access it, let me know.
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March 24, 2018 at 11:00 pm #68551Yep, so I won’t be writing today, but I might be able to hang around for a little bit.
Okay, I just requested access, but I can get into the one you posted. ๐
Oh, and I meant to respond to you about 1776. I’ve heard of that one before, but I got it confused withย Hamilton. I guess because it’s about the same time period. I’ll definitely give it a listen.
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March 24, 2018 at 11:12 pm #68552@seekjustice I actually won’t be hanging around much longer. ๐ย I’ve got a pretty big law school assignment to write, and as much as I’d like to say being on Writers’ Corner helps me write, it’s more of a distraction. ๐ย It helpsย remind me to write, I’ll give it that.ย But just sitting down and deciding to write with no distractions is really what I need to do with this assignment.ย So I’ll be on here a few times if you want to talk about Jen’s story, but once that’s over I’m going to get off.
Ah, I see.ย I don’t think the two are similar at all, though I don’t know much aboutย Hamilton.ย I read a biography of Hamilton which I really enjoyed, but though I don’t remember the story of the musical, I read the synopsis once and didn’t like it at all.ย I thinkย 1776 is very well done, though.
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March 24, 2018 at 11:27 pm #68553Okay, cool ๐ Have fun with your law assignment!
That’s all right then, because I’m not a Hamilton fan (I don’t really like rapping, so…it really had no chance).
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March 26, 2018 at 1:29 am #68609@seekjusticeย @rochellaineย @other-aussies-and/or-nightowls
I’m here. Seeing if I can work in a bit of writing ๐
You can pronounce it however you want.
March 26, 2018 at 2:28 am #68611Okay, signing off.
(I’m ALLLLLMOST done with the KPA!)
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March 26, 2018 at 11:51 am #68641@dekreel @warrenluther04 @dragon-snapper @skredder @rochellaine I’m writing for a bit ๐
@dekreel Wow, you were up pretty late ๐I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
www.jennaterese.comMarch 26, 2018 at 12:11 pm #68647@jenwriter17 I’m finally poking my head in here! ๐ *pokes head in, followed by body and tail* I’m writing for a tiny bit, then I have to go. But I might be on a little later today! ๐
@dekreel WHAT? What happens when you finish the KPA???? *gasps*Wow. You are either staying up really late or getting up really early! XD
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ENFJ-T ... I think (haven't taken the quiz in awhile)March 26, 2018 at 12:17 pm #68652@warrenluther04 Welcome to writer’s corner! ๐ what are you working on?
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www.jennaterese.comMarch 26, 2018 at 12:22 pm #68653@jenwriter17 Thanks! ๐ A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen Part 3. I’m in the second paragraph right now.
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ENFJ-T ... I think (haven't taken the quiz in awhile)March 26, 2018 at 12:23 pm #68654Signing off for now, by the way. ๐
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ENFJ-T ... I think (haven't taken the quiz in awhile)March 26, 2018 at 12:25 pm #68656Who’s here? I’m here! Anyone else writing?
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March 26, 2018 at 12:30 pm #68658@warrenluther04 awesome!
okay, bye! ๐
@that_writer_girl_99 I’m still on for a little bit more.I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
www.jennaterese.comMarch 26, 2018 at 12:44 pm #68661@that_writer_girl_99 sorry, but I have to got now. Have fun writing! ๐
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www.jennaterese.comMarch 26, 2018 at 1:35 pm #68671Hello! Anyone here? I am for a short while. At least until lunch is ready.
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