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    Rochellaine
    @rochellaine
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      @seekjustice Oh, yeah.ย  ๐Ÿ˜€ย  I forgot it was Sunday for you!

      Okay, the question is based on @jenwriter17 ‘s first chapter of her WIP which I just critiqued for her.ย  In it she kills a character, and I thought she didn’t have enough backstory for the killing to make reasonable sense.ย  But neither of us were sure about it, so since you’re an experienced character-killer, we thought we’d ask you what you think. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜€

      The link she posted in her topic requires you to request access, so I’m going to try posting a link here that you should be able to access immediately.ย  If you can’t access it, let me know.

      "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

      #68551
      SeekJustice
      @seekjustice
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        @rochellaine

        Yep, so I won’t be writing today, but I might be able to hang around for a little bit.

        Okay, I just requested access, but I can get into the one you posted. ๐Ÿ˜€

        Oh, and I meant to respond to you about 1776. I’ve heard of that one before, but I got it confused withย Hamilton. I guess because it’s about the same time period. I’ll definitely give it a listen.

        INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

        #68552
        Rochellaine
        @rochellaine
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          @seekjustice I actually won’t be hanging around much longer. ๐Ÿ™ย  I’ve got a pretty big law school assignment to write, and as much as I’d like to say being on Writers’ Corner helps me write, it’s more of a distraction. ๐Ÿ˜€ย  It helpsย remind me to write, I’ll give it that.ย  But just sitting down and deciding to write with no distractions is really what I need to do with this assignment.ย  So I’ll be on here a few times if you want to talk about Jen’s story, but once that’s over I’m going to get off.

          Ah, I see.ย  I don’t think the two are similar at all, though I don’t know much aboutย Hamilton.ย  I read a biography of Hamilton which I really enjoyed, but though I don’t remember the story of the musical, I read the synopsis once and didn’t like it at all.ย  I thinkย 1776 is very well done, though.

           

          "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

          #68553
          SeekJustice
          @seekjustice
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            @rochellaine

            Okay, cool ๐Ÿ˜€ Have fun with your law assignment!

            That’s all right then, because I’m not a Hamilton fan (I don’t really like rapping, so…it really had no chance).

            INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

            #68609
            Joy
            @dekreel
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              @seekjusticeย  @rochellaineย  @other-aussies-and/or-nightowls

              I’m here. Seeing if I can work in a bit of writing ๐Ÿ™‚

              You can pronounce it however you want.

              #68611
              Joy
              @dekreel
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                Okay, signing off.

                (I’m ALLLLLMOST done with the KPA!)

                You can pronounce it however you want.

                #68641
                Jenna Terese
                @jenwriter17
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                  @dekreel @warrenluther04 @dragon-snapper @skredder @rochellaine I’m writing for a bit ๐Ÿ™‚


                  @dekreel
                  Wow, you were up pretty late ๐Ÿ˜›

                  I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
                  www.jennaterese.com

                  #68647
                  WarrenLuther04
                  @warrenluther04
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                    @jenwriter17 I’m finally poking my head in here! ๐Ÿ™‚ *pokes head in, followed by body and tail* I’m writing for a tiny bit, then I have to go. But I might be on a little later today! ๐Ÿ™‚


                    @dekreel
                    WHAT? What happens when you finish the KPA???? *gasps*

                    Wow. You are either staying up really late or getting up really early! XD

                    • This reply was modified 6 years, 8 months ago by WarrenLuther04. Reason: Questioning Dekreel ๐Ÿ˜‰

                    Kapeefer 'Till We're Old and Grey!
                    ENFJ-T ... I think (haven't taken the quiz in awhile)

                    #68652
                    Jenna Terese
                    @jenwriter17
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                      @warrenluther04 Welcome to writer’s corner! ๐Ÿ˜€ what are you working on?

                      I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
                      www.jennaterese.com

                      #68653
                      WarrenLuther04
                      @warrenluther04
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                        @jenwriter17 Thanks! ๐Ÿ˜€ A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen Part 3. I’m in the second paragraph right now.

                        Kapeefer 'Till We're Old and Grey!
                        ENFJ-T ... I think (haven't taken the quiz in awhile)

                        #68654
                        WarrenLuther04
                        @warrenluther04
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                          Signing off for now, by the way. ๐Ÿ™‚

                          Kapeefer 'Till We're Old and Grey!
                          ENFJ-T ... I think (haven't taken the quiz in awhile)

                          #68656
                          Elizabeth
                          @that_writer_girl_99
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                            Who’s here? I’m here! Anyone else writing?

                            Writer. Dreamer. Sometimes blogger. MBTI mess. Lover of Jesus and books.

                            #68658
                            Jenna Terese
                            @jenwriter17
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                              @warrenluther04 awesome!

                              okay, bye! ๐Ÿ™‚


                              @that_writer_girl_99
                              I’m still on for a little bit more.

                              I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
                              www.jennaterese.com

                              #68661
                              Jenna Terese
                              @jenwriter17
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                                @that_writer_girl_99 sorry, but I have to got now. Have fun writing! ๐Ÿ™‚

                                I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
                                www.jennaterese.com

                                #68671
                                Skredder
                                @skredder
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                                  Hello! Anyone here? I am for a short while. At least until lunch is ready.

                                  "For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."

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