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@dragon-snapper Ack! Sometimes it’s like a knife they’re sticking into you:
“What do you mean, I wasn’t consistent?!”
“Well, in the last scene they drove here in a car, and now they’re walking back home.”
“Are you serious?” *runs to look it up* “Aaaah! How could I have done that?”(Fortunately, that one was a pretty easy fix, as all I had to do was change a couple of sentences about how they got in the car, but they pile up until it feels like the whole book is a big mess. 😀 )
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@rochellaine XD Plot holes. They’re everywhere. One is of a friend who’s completely nonchalant that his friend is probably dead. 😐 Oops.
“What do you mean he doesn’t care?”
“He doesn’t.”
“What? That’s ridiculous!” *looks it up* “Wow. He doesn’t care at all. That’s… awful.”☀ ☀ ☀ ENFP ☀ ☀ ☀
@dragon-snapper Oh, what an unfeeling character! 🙂 😀
*whoop* I think I’ve almost gotten past the bridge part and to the excitement! I do believe one of my characters is about to fall off a cliff.
@seekjustice Good morning Australia! Have you got that idea figured out for me today? (Don’t worry too much about it, though, since I’m working on my western right now instead of that story.)"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
@rochellaine Yay! cliffs!!!
Ooh, is it morning in Australia. They live in the future.
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@dragon-snapper Yup, they live in the future. It must be weird for @seekjustice to post a message and then realize I read it the day before she posted it! 😀 Time travel!
Oh, do you like cliffs? They’re very convenient dropping off points. 😮
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@rochellaine Haha! It’s so confusing. 😛
Yeaaasssss. Cliffhangers!!! ULTIMATE POWER! 😛
And I’m going to sign out now. I went through a half-a-book’s worth of comments, and now I need a break. Binge-editing. 😛 Good luck!
And I might be back later today to write; we’ll see. 😛
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@dragon-snapper Okay, goodbye! Do come back later and challenge me to a write-off. You’ll be sure to win, but I need the work. 😀
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I’m still here! Does anyone want to join me? Or am I “all alone wif my foughts?” *doubles over in laughter at a reference that no one but me understands* 😀
@dekreel @kaya-young @catwing @seekjustice @jenwriter17 @sam-kowalBobert’s bored and wants people to talk to, so take pity on him, please!
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@rochellaine I’m here! It’s great to be back…I’ve had a lot going on recently, so haven’t been able to get on and chat for a while. Let me grab a snack, and I’ll write with you!
@waterlily Hi there! Welcome back. Haha, I just got a snack too. What are you eating?
And of course, what are you writing?
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@rochellaine A cheese stick and a granola bar. And a blog post. You?
@waterlily I’m writing cheese and crackers and eating my western…
…I mean the other way around. 😀 Though that might actually be interesting.
Have you ever pushed someone off a cliff? I’m about to try it for the first time.
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@rochellaine Hmm, not really. But given the setting of my current WIP, I might very soon…
@waterlily Oh, what’s the setting?
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@rochellaine A city chiseled into a maze-like canyon in the middle of an arid wasteland. With a big mountain/mesa in the middle.
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