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September 17, 2022 at 3:00 pm #117674Anonymous
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@queen_of_alvastia. TREVYNNNNNNN!!!!!! đđđ
Alright, Iâm kidnapping Trevyn. đ
Iâll hide him somewhere other than the castle, cause weâre renting that together. Youâll never find him!
TREVYN, IâM COMING!!!!!! đđđđââïž
September 17, 2022 at 3:06 pm #117676@freedomwriter76 NOOOO!!! *grabs Trevyn and hugs him tight* HEâS MY BABY!! You canât take him!! đđđ
I will search to the ends of the earth to find him if I must! XD
(If it makes you feel any better, Iâm not writing his story until I finish my WIP and then finish Kerwin & Maddockâs story. So for now, he is safe with Jayden in the Character Castle! đ„°đ„°)
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September 17, 2022 at 4:16 pm #117683@freedomwriter76 I should never have gotten started looking on Pintrest b/c now I canât stop finding pictures of my favorite charries! Agh!!
He he I typed in âmedieval little girl character inspiration red hairâ and Iâm like, oh Verity! Oh there she is again! And again!! Yeah so I love herâŠ.Iâm probably gonna have a file thatâs just a bunch of Verity pics XD
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September 17, 2022 at 6:07 pm #117688Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. I know!!!! Character inspo is just total procrastination. XD XD XD
TOO BADDD!!!!! IâM KIDNAPPING HIM, HE NEEDS TO BE SAFE!!!! đđ„°
GOOD LUCK TRYING TO FIND HIM!!!! You never willâŠmwahahahaha. đđđ
(Yes, Jayden will keep him safe! đ)
September 17, 2022 at 7:18 pm #117697@freedomwriter76 Ugh it is!!! I now have several folders for all my charries XD XD
*stamps foot* NO!!! I added him to my #ProtectionSquad so I can take care of him right?
If I promise not to hurt him too much, can I have him back?
*mentally calculates who I can kidnap so we will have to do a hostage exchange* *glances in Jaydenâs direction*
(Yes he will! I just love the two of them together!! đđ)
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September 19, 2022 at 7:26 pm #117740Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. IKR!? đđđ
NEVER!!!!! *hugs Trevyn tight* TREVYN, IâLL KEEP YOU SAFEEEEE!!!!!! đđđđđđ
DONâT YOU DARE TAKE MY JAYDEN BABY AWAY FROM MEEEEEE!!!!!! *runs and grabs Jayden, hugging him tight* YOUâLL NEVER GET EITHER OF THEMMMMM!!!!! đđ
(I KNOWWWW!!!!!! They are so wonderful together!!!! đđ„°đđ *uses every love emoji in the known universe*)
September 20, 2022 at 9:06 am #117745@freedomwriter76 Itâs really fun thoughâŠ.
BUT TREVYNâS MY BABY!!! *sighs* So now apparently Iâm not responsible enough to be trusted with my own characters XD *hugs Trevyn now that youâve gone over to Jayden* *contemplates making my escape now* đ€đ€Ł
GIRL!? Do you really think I would hurt Jayden?  đđđ *sobs* *joins you in hugging Jayden*
*leaves to look at Jayden on the moodboard*
Nope. Never ever ever.
(OH MY GOODNESS! YESS!!!đâ€đ§Ąđ„°đđ€©đđđ You know whatâs gonna be sad? When they have to leave each other for their own trauma-filled worldsâŠ.. *cries my eyes out*)
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September 20, 2022 at 9:08 am #117746@freedomwriter76
Trevyn?!?!?
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September 20, 2022 at 9:10 am #117747versus Payton XD
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September 20, 2022 at 11:42 am #117755Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. OkayâŠyou can have himâŠbut donât hurt him too badly, okay? đ„°đ
NO! I JUST DONâT WANT YOU TO TAKE HIM FROM ME BECAUSE I WANT HIM!!!! *sobs and hugs Jayden tighter* đđ
HOW COULD SOMEONE HURT HIM!? I KNOW HIS BIRTH MOTHER (UGHâŠIâM TAKING HER DOWN!!!! WellâŠsheâs already diedâŠđ) DID, BUT HOW COULD SHE!?!? JAYDENâS SUCH A PRECIOUS BABY!!!!! đđđ
(NOOOO GIRLLLLLLL!!!!! DONâT MAKE ME SAD!!!!! đđ Love the new tag tho. đ)
And oh goodness. This is how I feel about Trevynâs: đđ And Paytonâs: đ€Łđ
September 20, 2022 at 12:12 pm #117762@freedomwriter76 Aww thank you!! *hugs my baby boi* Trust me, I really couldnât.Â
Apart from the fact that I gave him a really sad pastbut I wonât blind him, or kill him â and once he meets Verity and escapes (somehow? No clue how? Maybe he gets rescued by Verityâs family? IDK) hos life gets A LOT better, and you actually see him as more sweet shy than scared shy. (If that even made sense but I canât think of another way to describe it XD)And he opens up most around Verity and her famiilyâŠ.ahh! *squeezes Trevyn* đ„°đBUT I WANT HIM TOO!?!Â
wow we are actually fighting over him now. *eye roll* yeah, weâre so mature XDWHAT?! HOW DARE SHE!?! Oh my word, he must have been an adorable baby!!! *sobs forever* *wishes Iâd been there to kidnap him then*
(well, I just made myself sad too â letâs just keep them together okay? THANK YOU!! I couldnât resist! Trevyn deserved it XD)
*sighs* yup, that basically sums them both up lol.
(And I loved Paytonâs personality so much that Iâm coming up with a new character for Kingdom of Fire â heâs gonna be like Payton only not annoying, just a cheeky, reckless, street-savvy orphan kid that Kerwin meets. Right now, he is nameless though XD)
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October 8, 2022 at 12:50 am #118851Hello, hello, hello!
It feels like it has been an eternity since the last time I was on here. Iâve just gotten bit by the fiction writing bug, so I figured I work on a story that I began in July. I just wanted to share a snippet and see what people thought of it. đ Just to warn you, itâs kind of long.
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Friday. Itâs been my favorite day of the week for as long as I can remember, especially the 4th Friday of each month, like today. My family and I always get pizza and milkshakes for dinner and then going bowling afterwards. However, the excitement about tonight was demolished when I went to last period: History.
âWell, the History presentation on a 19th century Historical figure will begin today and is due a month from now on April 20th,â Mr. Everett explained, while writing the dates on the chalkboard and then began passing out the assignment packets. âThese packets include the instructions for the assignment, but there is one little bit of information I left out. In order to get this assignment, you have to work in a group of 4.â
All of the students groaned, including myself. In all the group projects Iâve been a part of, Iâm always the one who ends up doing all the work while everyone else goofs off. My mom tells me I most likely scare them because Iâm âstubborn as a muleâ and can be bossy. I wouldnât go that far. I see it as a leader taking initiative to make sure that things get done and a student trying to protect her grade.
Anyway, the bell rang right when Mr. Everett said, âThe assigned groups are on our class bulletin board outside the door and donât forget to read pages 70-94 in your textbook. Have a great weekend!â
I scurried outside of the classroom, anxious to see who Iâd be working with.
Team 2 â
Rachel Langston, Evan Woods, Allen Boone, Liza Cunningham
I didnât know any of these people, except for Evan. He always pulled pranks on me since elementary school. Like one time, he âmade cookiesâ to give to me on my birthday but altered the recipe by putting in salt instead of sugar. Or the time he freaked me out by stuffing a rat in my backpack while it was sitting in the cubby. There are many more tales to tell, but Iâd rather not discuss them; at least he stopped when we started High School this year. But that aside, heâs the popular captain of the soccer team, too arrogant for his own good and such a ladiesâ man. Everywhere he goes, heâs the center of attention in some fashion, no matter whose around him.
Eye roll, I thought. This is going to be a long month.
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12:05 P.M., Cafeteria.
I had just stepped out of the cafeteria line with a plate of piping hot spaghetti with a sprinkle of Mexican blend cheese along with a slice of focaccia bread. My eyes darted to every single area of my surroundings as I tried to find my fellow teammates. Itâs so difficult when almost every table is for a specific group in the school, and I donât know who sits where because Iâm a little bit of a loner. Plus, I donât know what groups anyone in my team belongs to aside from Evan, and of course I didnât want to just walk right up to the jock table.
Right when I was about to give up and find a seat, I felt someone tap my shoulder.
âRachel,â the voice said, which belonged to a guy.
I turned around and facedâŠEvan. The one moment I had been dreading for the past 5 minutes. It seems as if heâs grown at least 7 more inches, his Havana brown hair now hangs right at his shoulders, and his typically charming smile thatâs always so annoying seemed more placid and sweeter. Um, not that I was noticing or anything.
âHave you found Liza and Allen? I would really like to start planning the project now so that we can start working on it over the weekend,â
Heâs actually taking initiative. I didnât know he had it in him. I thought. Then I heard some girls giggling somewhere behind us and wondered if he was trying to impress them. Though, that still doesnât keep me from being a little cold towards him.
âDo you see anyone with me? I have no idea what they even look like. Why donât you help me look, Mr. Hotshot?â
He kind of rolled his eyes and smirked at the same time.
We started walking towards the back of the cafeteria and found two students at a table. We assumed that it was Allen and Liza and decided to go with the hunch.
âAre you Allen Boone and Liza Cunningham?â I asked while sitting my tray on the table. I was starving.
âUh, yes,â Allen replied for the both of them. âWhat, um, do you need?â
âWeâre your teammates for the History presentation in Mr. Everettâs class. Letâs get started on planning, shall we? We havenât got all day and itâs due in a month,â I answered, in a somewhat snappy tone as I pulled out my packet.
I honestly didnât mean for it to come out that way, but I can tell that these people need a little order. Evan looked at me and with his eyes he asked, âWhatâs your problem?â I just glanced at him and continued to pull things out my backpack.
âHonestly, I think before we start, we should get to know each other a little. I mean, people do say that teams work better when they have a bond,â Evan piped up.
âSince when did you become so âwise?â I thought your brain was too consumed with soccer plays to know anything,â I shot back.
âAgh, Rachel, would you stop being such a pest? Weâre not going to get anything done if you stay moody the whole time.â
Right before I could say anything else, Allen inserted himself in the equation. âWeâre supposed to be all in this together. Why canât we try to become friends first to help break the ice? Itâs starting to feel a little like winter even though the weather outside says otherwise.â
Liza nodded in agreement, and then began to just stare off into space. I rolled my eyes and let out a loud sigh. Evan patted Allen on the shoulder.
âI think youâre onto to something, Allen. How about we reconvene after school and get some ice cream? Then, we can talk more about the project,â said the now apparently reasonable Evan.
I broke my plastic fork as I stuck it too hard in my spaghetti. I feel like Iâm going to explode on the inside. Since when was Evan accommodating and all about friendship? Something has changed, and itâs so annoying. Iâm starting to hate the new and improved Evan more than the old one.
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