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September 3, 2022 at 6:08 pm #116739Anonymous
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@queen_of_alvastia. *hugs both of y’all tight*
Gonna check out that song! 👍
(well…good job Girl, now I’m sad over Maddock and Kerwin 😭😭😭)
September 3, 2022 at 6:44 pm #116740@freedomwriter76 *just realized how much hugging I’ve done since I joined KP*
Yes! You should! *sadness*
(🙄🙄 Well so am I so….Kerwin, Maddock, join the group hug 😭😪)
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September 6, 2022 at 1:07 pm #116854@freedomwriter76 The prologue for Kerwin/Maddock’s story: (told you I might need him back earlier XD)
It was a city aflame. It was stars of sparks burning the sky.
And it was two boys caught in the middle of the fiery turbulence. Years would roll between them. A kingdom of fire would almost break one and set the other free. Heartache and hope, triumph and tragedy swirled together in a tale one brother would hand down through the generations.
And this is his story.
(ONE BROTHER. Yeah. Sorry)
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September 6, 2022 at 4:05 pm #116930oh
my
GOODNESS 🙀🤯😵
That is incredible!!! It looks like a real photo in greyscale, that is some magnificent detail! The lighting is so amazing, you have some serious talent! 🤩
And I getcha, that’s why I draw so many deer 😆 Until I can get out in the woods and hunt, I’ve just gotta admire them on paper.
What’s your favorite breed of horse? I don’t know many, but I love arabians. They’ve got the most elegant tails and legs.
Monsters creep
In the silent dark-deep
In the filling-eye hills
In the shriveled hand-keepSeptember 6, 2022 at 4:10 pm #116933Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. NOOOOOO!!!!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
*sniff* Goodbye. I need to go find the tissue fort. 👋😭
September 6, 2022 at 4:17 pm #116939@ava-blue *blushing now* Y’all are too sweet. (And, HEY, I still can’t draw people to save my life And I just LOVE YOURS!!! XD)
IKR? You do what you must.
Arabians…..*sigh of bliss* and the National Showhorse…or a paint…or IDK every horse out there… (technically I’m allowed to have my own horse I just have to finance it all myself XD 😜🙄)
@freedomwriter76 WAIT FOR MEEEEEE!!!! *trails you to the fort*
I’m still allowed right?
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September 6, 2022 at 4:25 pm #116950Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. Yes, you’re still allowed. (Even though you’re gonna kill Kerwin…😭😭😭) Follow me! *sobs*
September 6, 2022 at 4:26 pm #116952*runs after you* *collapses inside tissue fort*
Well you’re going to kill Fin AND Leon AND Adelaide
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September 6, 2022 at 4:27 pm #116954Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. *helps you up, still sobbing*
True, true. XD Fin, Leon, Aadelheide, Jennie, Neesh, Yoshua…needs we say more? 😉
September 6, 2022 at 4:30 pm #116958@freedomwriter76
*shock sets in*
six people….
*still in shock*
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September 6, 2022 at 4:34 pm #116962Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. Not all in one book, but in a trilogy…and that’s not even everyone… 😉
LISTEN, WAR TAKES A LOT OF LIVES!!!! *sobs*
September 6, 2022 at 4:35 pm #116965I know I know….war is devastating….
WAIT A TRILOGY!?!? That’s so cool!!!!!! *cheers up slightly again*
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September 6, 2022 at 4:43 pm #116967@freedomwriter76 I assume the tissue fort is a place to cry over charries
even though you’re the one killing them and you could let them live but that would be no fun to write so you do it anyways because writers are all masochists…? *follows you both*
@queen_of_alvastia Ooh! I love paints, they’re so pretty! I’m also an Appaloosa fan, because that’s what my best friend’s horse is (she’s a dappled white mare named Indigo)Monsters creep
In the silent dark-deep
In the filling-eye hills
In the shriveled hand-keepSeptember 6, 2022 at 4:45 pm #116970Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@queen_of_alvastia. YEP! A TRILOGY!!!! 😀
Here’s the plan for the book titles and MC’s.
The Trilogy: War and Redemption
Book 1: Freedom’s Fire (Leon and Riker
Book 2: Out of Love (Erich and Esther)
Book 3: Allies and Lies (Abelard, Ezra, Phillip, and Jamie)
September 6, 2022 at 4:45 pm #116971@ava-blue *welcomes you into the tissue box fort*
Really? Your friend has a horse? LUCKY!! Appaloosas are gorgeous….honestly any horse I have would make my biggest dream come true lol
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