Home Page › Forums › Fiction Writing › General Writing Discussions › WIP scenes
- This topic has 86 replies, 7 voices, and was last updated 2 years, 1 month ago by Heaven Franklin.
-
AuthorPosts
-
August 31, 2022 at 5:15 pm #116486
smh things we’ll never understand. XD
August 31, 2022 at 5:28 pm #116487@anatra23 I am technologically impaired….XD
🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
September 1, 2022 at 3:55 pm #116597W O W
No joke, that sounded like it was out of a book (and a very good book, at that)
I love your writing style! I am astounded by both your ability to write dialogue and your ability to include that many spaces in a single post. Bravo!!! 🥳🎉👏
Monsters creep
In the silent dark-deep
In the filling-eye hills
In the shriveled hand-keepSeptember 2, 2022 at 9:47 am #116633@ava-blue *hides in embarrassment*
THANK YOU! I probably set a record with my crazy spaces…. *winks*
I’ve been going back and finding early scenes from my WIP to work on rewriting instead of working on my current problem of how to create an escape for 2 slaves and do a potential death scene for one of my minor charries…..
*comes out of hiding*
By the way, do you still draw people’s charries?
🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
September 2, 2022 at 4:43 pm #116675@queen_of_alvastia Yes, I still draw characters! Just a heads-up, I’ll be starting school this Monday so if you’d like me to draw a charrie (or more, if you like) now’s the perfect time! 👈😎👈
And I wish you luck with your writing dilemma 🧐 I also tend to write all these menial little scenes and details rather than figuring out the big problems with my story XD
Monsters creep
In the silent dark-deep
In the filling-eye hills
In the shriveled hand-keepSeptember 2, 2022 at 4:53 pm #116677@ava-blue YAY!!
*running through my charrie roster*
Alright guys, it’s picture time. Who wants one?
Verity: *jumping in the air clutching her arm as she waves it frantically* ME!! ME!! PLEASE TELL HER I WANT ONE!!!
Me: Okay, Vers, just calm down, I asked everyone –
Verity: BUT I WANT ONE SOOO BAD!
Me: Alright, hang on. I’ll put you in. I need one more. C’mon, guys, let’s have some volunteers.
Verity: I VOLUNTEER TREVYN!!!
Trevyn: Hey, wait, no, Verity…
Payton: *off to one side* I volunteer everyone here but me.
Verity: I want to volunteer everyone too!!! Let’s do it like this: GROUP HUG!!!
Payton: Eeeewwww! You’re the author! Tell her to stop! I think I’m suffocating!
Me: This was a bad idea…. *sigh*
Okay. I’ll go with, well, Verity, obviously, and probably Kerwin.
Hang on, let me grab their profiles…
*rummages around*
Verity: *shoves a paper at me* Here. IT’S MINE SO I GET A PICTURE!!
Girl. You’re crazy.
🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
September 2, 2022 at 4:54 pm #116678Verity
Age: young girl…. maybe 7? 8? IDK ages are so hard for me
Hair color: Dark red, long, straight
Eye color: Bright blue (think aquamarine)
Personality: She has a bit of a temper (Trevyn calls her spitfire, but he’s the only one who can get away with that…) She will say exactly what she thinks (except on her faith) and will defend her friends at all costs.
🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
September 2, 2022 at 5:02 pm #116679Kerwin:
Age: IDK 35? Whatever….
Eye Color: Blue gray
Hair: Blonde. VERY light blonde. Maybe slightly wavy.
Height: Tall
Personality: Loyal, can be stubborn, not afraid to share his opinion. His personality is a WIP at the moment XD
Occupation: Soldier. (medieval-ish if you need that info)
(I forgot to mention that Verity is small for her age, this petite little redhead with a ton of energy.)
IDK what all info you need, so if there’s anything else you want/need to know feel free to ask! 🙂
🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
September 2, 2022 at 5:08 pm #116681@queen_of_alvastia that little scene was not only hilarious but ALSO very helpful for figuring out how to draw them 😀 Would you like me to draw them separately or in a pose together? Also, what style would you like me to draw them in? Lemme know if you want examples of what I can do 🙂
Since Verity’s a little girl, it’d probably be easiest to draw her in a more animated style (if that’s alright with you 😉 )
She sounds adorable, I love crazy little kids lol.. probably because I live in a house full of them.
And Kerwin sounds so cool! It’s funny, I just drew a character for someone else that had the same hair and eyes but lots of freckles.
By the way, I love the names! 😉
Monsters creep
In the silent dark-deep
In the filling-eye hills
In the shriveled hand-keepSeptember 2, 2022 at 5:16 pm #116682@ava-blue XD Verity likes to run away with my scenes….
Maybe separately….
Oh wait: here’s a pose if you want XD
Kerwin calmly hands me his paper.
Kerwin: You said you wanted this for my picture right?
Verity: *leaves group hug* YOU’RE GETTING ONE TOO!?!?!
*tackle-hugs him*
Kerwin: “Ummm has this kid gone crazy?”
*resigns himself to his fate*
LOL Aw! I think Verity in an animated style would be SO CUTE! *happy sigh*
If you did have any examples on hand, that would be great!
Thank you! Oooh….wondering if I should add freckles to Kerwin…..hmmm….
🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
September 2, 2022 at 5:26 pm #116684OOH. EXAMPLE TIME
Here’s my cartoony style! It’s fun for very expressive poses, such as thus ~~>
(Just an FYI, all these examples are a few months old so I’ve improved since then.)
Monsters creep
In the silent dark-deep
In the filling-eye hills
In the shriveled hand-keepSeptember 2, 2022 at 5:29 pm #116686I guess I’d just call this my cute style? It’s just very soft and squishy and fun to draw. (btw, this is my character Ilwyn in his human form, he’s normally sort of elfish)
Monsters creep
In the silent dark-deep
In the filling-eye hills
In the shriveled hand-keepSeptember 2, 2022 at 5:31 pm #116687@ava-blue YAY! EXAMPLE TIME!! *bounces around with Verity* we both love examples! XD I can see Verity in the cartoon style but then I saw the other one…
SO CUTE!
*i need to hug him*
*sigh*
Decisions are my nemesis…okay, it’s not that bad XD
🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
September 2, 2022 at 5:31 pm #116688Here’s Bronwen showing off my realistic style. Since drawing this I’ve improved how I draw necks so that they aren’t as toothpick-ish. This style is super great.. iiif I get it right. I’m new to drawing more realistic portraits so the quality can be kinda hit-or-miss, but I can usually draw guys pretty well in this style.
Monsters creep
In the silent dark-deep
In the filling-eye hills
In the shriveled hand-keepSeptember 2, 2022 at 5:34 pm #116689@ava-blue By the way, girl, I am loving these people! I can’t draw a person to save my life. Well,, if I ACTUALLY had to save my life. Like IDK if some artistic robber was holding me at gunpoint, I could probably do a stick figure and hope he thinks it’s good enough…..
SO I have a great respect for people who can draw, well, other people! XD
🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
-
AuthorPosts
- You must be logged in to reply to this topic.