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@keilah-h AWW, i’m so glad you like it!!!! 💖💖💖
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Awww this is so cute! 🥰
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AWWWWWW, the babiesssss, they’re so cute. 😍 I loved them playing I Spy. 😂
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
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@hybridlore @euodia-vision aww, thx y’all!!! 🥰🥰😘 Yesssss, they’re adorable!!! 😍😍
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I’m rewriting the Avengers Family AU Fic
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I missed the young Avengers so much, and it honestly is already looking better, cleaner, etc.
AND a couple things have changed, in that all of the kids’ stories will be told rather than just some of them, AND they begin by being fostered, bc the adoption process takes a while and I totally ignored that in the first fic😂
anyways, long story short, some things will be changing, but I am soooo HAPPY to be rewriting this fic, and I can already see that the story is going to be so much better.
Anywho, I have the first chapter finished!!!
So here we are…”An Avenger Family”…rewritten.
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Chapter 1
Nick Fury was, to some, considered a fool. To others, he was a complete idiot.
“Create a group of enhanced kids and all we’ll have is a disaster on our hands” people repeated, over and over again when he even suggested the idea. But if Nick knew anything, he knew that it was possible…and it wasn’t crazy.
Okay, so maybe it was a little crazy.
“How many kids are you looking for?”
Alexander Pierce’s question pulled Nick out of his thoughts, and he faced his old friend with a small smile. “As many as I can find.”
“Enhanced kids?”
“If you have any.”
“Of course, I do…and others. Wait just one minute.” Pierce replied, using the phone on his desk.
A phone dinged.
Nick checked his phone and smiled. Just his friend, Phil Coulson, asking how it was going. ‘Good’ Nick sent back.
This was his dream…creating a team of enhanced kids who could convince the world that powers weren’t bad and those with them were worth no less than those without.
Pierce faced Nick once more. “Alright. They’re on their way.”
Within mere minutes, footsteps pounded against the floor, and Nick stood. He instantly took a step back. He hadn’t expected so many.
“Ah, you’re all here. This is Nick Fury, an old friend of mine. He is looking for kids to foster and eventually, maybe adopt. He will speak to each of you separately, so wait your turn. When he speaks with you, be polite and-“
“Why do you have an eyepatch?” A young boy with white hair asked, pointing at Nick’s left eye. Odd for a kid to have white hair.
“Pietro, what did I just say?”
The boy’s gaze fell and he hung his head, but not before Nick saw tears fill his eyes. Poor kid.
“To be polite. Sorry sir.”
Nick smiled. “There’s nothing wrong with asking questions. In fact, I encourage questions, alright Pietro?”
The boy’s gaze rose, and he gave Nick a smile. “Okay!”
Nick chuckled.
“Alright Nick, we can start with the youngest and work our way up. You can choose which ones you want to foster, or if you chose to foster none, that’s fine as well.”
Nick nodded and turned to the one whom he presumed to be the youngest. “I’ll speak to them myself, Pierce. I will ask for their names.”
Pierce shrugged. “Suit yourself.”
Nick bent to get down to the small boy’s eye-level. The boy smiled, his freckles showing and his messy brown hair complimenting the front tooth missing from his top row of teeth. Nick smiled. “Hello there.”
“Hi…”
“What’s your name?”
“Peter.”
“And how old are you, Peter?”
“Six and a half!”
“Wow. You’re such a big boy.”
Peter giggled. “Yeah, I am!”
Nick smiled. Such a cute kid.
The next kid, who he presumed to be the second youngest, a young girl with light brown hair, bright blue eyes, and practically bouncing with excitement smiled from ear to ear. “Hi!!”
Nick chuckled. “Well, well, well, someone has some energy. What’s your name?”
“I’m Becca, and I’m eight, and that’s my big brother Bucky!” Becca cried, pointing at a boy further down the line of kids.
“I see. What is your favorite color, Becca?”
“Pink! I love the color pink!”
Nick moved onto Pietro, the next kid in line, who stood beside a girl that looked a lot like him other than hair color.
“And you two are?”
“I’m Pietro. I’m eleven!”
“And you?”
The girl smiled shyly, holding Pietro’s hand, and partially hiding her face behind her brother. “…Wanda. I-I’m…eleven.”
Opposites. One boisterous, one shy. “Twins?”
Pietro nodded several times. “Yep!”
“Love that.” Nick replied softly.
Nick moved onto the next kid with curly black hair, dark brown eyes, and who wore glasses that kept slipping down his nose. “What’s your name?”
“Bruce.”
“And how old are you, Bruce?”
“Thirteen.”
“What do you enjoy?”
“Hmm…science and math. Especially anatomy and other medical science. I really like anatomy and immunology and chemistry and…sorry.”
Nick smiled and gently squeezed Bruce’s shoulder. “No need to apologize. You sound very passionate, Bruce. Do you think you’ll be a doctor one day?”
Bruce grinned. “Maybe. I know I want to.”
“I’m sure you will be one day.” Nick replied with a small smile.
He moved onto the next kid, the final girl out of the group of boys. She stood still and ready as soon as Nick faced her, almost like a soldier.
Odd.
“I’m Natasha. I’m fourteen.”
Nick rose an eyebrow. “You seem older than that, Natasha.”
“You have to do what you must.” She replied simply, brushing a strand of red hair out of her eyes.
“I suppose you do.” Nick whispered. He moved on. “And what’s your name?”
The brunette flashed him a grin. “I’m Clint, I’m fifteen, and Natasha there is my best friend. I like to do archery, but no one will let me use my bow and arrow inside even though the arrows have suction cups on the ends.”
“It could still hurt someone.” Pierce insisted with a scowl.
Nick turned his attention back to Clint and smiled. “So, you’re good with a bow and arrow?”
“You said it, sir, not me.” Clint replied with a wink.
Nick laughed. What a response. He seemed like a great kid.
Nick turned to the next kid, a blonde with muscles Nick had never seen on a kid before. He had to be at least seventeen or even eighteen, but then it wouldn’t make sense for him to still be at the orphanage. “And you?”
“Steve. I’m…fifteen.”
He hadn’t expected that. “Do you work out a lot, Steve?”
Steve’s gaze rose; his blue eyes met Nick’s dark brown. “…Yeah.”
The hesitation was a little…concerning. But it wasn’t Nick’s place to ask questions that personal. So, he smiled and moved onto the next kid.
The one who Becca had pointed at moments before stood still and silent. Questions raged in Nick’s mind. The kid had muscles almost like Steve’s, a brunette with blue eyes like Clint, but with a left arm that created more questions than anything else.
Why did he have a metal arm?
“And your name?”
“James. Sixteen.”
Nick nodded. Asking about the arm would be another personal question, and he didn’t wish to make any of the kids uncomfortable.
So he moved on. Again.
“You two…same age?”
“Yessir.” The first boy, with short black hair, dark brown eyes, and dark skin like Nick’s, replied.
“Your name?”
“Sam. I’m seventeen.”
“And you?”
The other teen smirked. With dark brown eyes and styled black hair, it was almost obvious that the final kid had been in a home much better off than the others once. “Tony, and I’m seventeen too.”
Nick smiled. “Nice to meet all of you.” He turned to face Pierce. That was all of them.
Eleven kids. They all seemed nice and every last one of them were special. “Are any of them related other than the ones who already said so?”
Pierce shook his head. “No. Other than Pietro and Wanda and James and Rebecca, none of them are related. You can come back tomorrow if you like or talk to the kids some more and decide which ones you want to bring home today.”
Nick looked around at all of the kids still standing in line.
Peter. Becca. Pietro. Wanda. Bruce. Natasha. Clint. Steve. James. Sam. Tony.
Eleven kids.
Nick wasn’t going to be back tomorrow.
“Actually, Pierce, I’ve already made my decision.”
@freedomwriter76
*gasps*
*reads*
*jumps up and down*
*calms down*
Yayyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can’t wait, and I completely understand rewriting it (I feel like I always love a fanfic and then I reread it and think about it a ton and I’m like nooooo I have to rewrite this XD)
Also I love that Becca came earlier
And Wanda and Pietro (I do not pick favorites, I just enjoy reading some kids more than others LOL)
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@smiley EEEEEEEEEEE
I’M SO HAPPY YOU’RE EXCITED ABOUT IT!!!!!!!!!!
Yesssss, I wanted to rewrite it so badddddd, and I love it so muchhhhhhhh😍😍😍😍
Yesss, I wanted her to be in the beginning this time, haha!
Ohhh, of course not…LOL XD
And I really love adding the foster element, in that they’re not adopted yet, bc I have ideas for that…their fear of being rejected again, things like that, etc.
AND
one of the kids’ parents may show up and want his son back👀
(“Instant Family” was totally some of the inspiration behind rewriting this fic…that movie, Miley…it is just…🩷🩷😭🥹)
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And I really love adding the foster element, in that they’re not adopted yet, bc I have ideas for that…their fear of being rejected again, things like that, etc.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww *cries*
Poor kids
one of the kids’ parents may show up and want his son back👀
Wait… is it Clint, I feel like he’s the only one wone who would fit
My curiosity is peaked
(“Instant Family” was totally some of the inspiration behind rewriting this fic…that movie, Miley…it is just…🩷🩷😭🥹)
I want to see that movie, my youth group leader recommended it to me cause I was telling her about my interest in being a foster parents someday
Found families are some of the best stories
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I knowww, the babies😭
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Yes, it’s Clint.
And I have this scene Idea in my head where he’s practically begging Nick and the others to adopt him, to let him stay, bc he doesn’t want to go back to his Dad😭😭
and then Nick, Phil, and Maria have to tell him that if the courts give his father custody, there’s nothing they can do…
and I teared up just thinking about it
*sobs*
Yeah, it’s really good. (some parts I don’t agree with and it has some pretty rough cussing at times, but it’s good regardless. very accurate depiction of what it’s really like to be a foster parent)
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Clint!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOO!!!!
I will most likely cry when you write that scene
Also yeah my leader told me to talk to my parents before I watch cause of the cussing and stuff, but it is defiantly on my movie watch list
Which is a really long list
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@smiley There are a lot of good movies out there, lol!😂
I knowwwwww; I’m almost certain I’ll cry😭 I’m actually about to write the scene when they first find out that his father is wanting Clint back, to be put in the fic eventually
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Awwwwww… I hope you can make it
Also uh… so I’m bored in the car so I’ve been thinking about several things but then I remembered setting from agent Carter that you could use for Natasha
The show shows more details about the res room and one of them is that they handcuff the girls to their bed posts every night, so in the show on of the widows as a grown up and no longer in the red room still handcuffs herself because she’s so use to sleeping with her hands handcuffed
It’s a really sad detail but I thought maybe Natasha would do that
Just an idea no need to use it if you don’t want to
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@smiley I’ll power through😂
UGHHHHHH, I love and hate that idea at the same timeeeee!!! 😭😭
alright, I think I’m gonna use it
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I JUST THOUGHT OF SOMETHING ELSE!!!
SO, Clint is going to be the one who shares a bedroom with Natasha, and he does something he did at the orphanage even at the house…
…he knows Natasha handcuffs herself to the bed bc it makes her feel safe and she thinks it will keep everyone else safe and just bc she’s used to it…
…and so, to make her feel even safer…
Clint sleeps on the floor right beside her bed🥹🩷😭
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and both of them keep that hidden from Nick, Phil, and Maria, mostly by keeping their bedroom door closed and locked and Natasha hides the handcuffs
but I’m thinking Maria finds them, and Maria ends up being the first one Natasha opens up to
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