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May 31, 2023 at 9:20 pm #145731Anonymous
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@smiley @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 sooo glad y’all love it!!! oh, and I meant bittersweet because this is the end of the of them as adorable teens/kiddos, but still, I love it!!!🥰🥰🥰
@euodia-vision @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-hAnd I have 2 more chapters
Chapter 54
Maria slipped another pancake onto Pietro’s plate. “Alright, that’s enough for you, mister. You won’t have any room for the bacon Uncle Phil is cooking if you eat any more.”
Pietro laughed and dove into his seventh pancake.
Someone certainly had an appetite today.
He did every day, but today…he was extra hungry.
Phil stepped into the dining room. “I come bearing bacon!”
Everyone laughed and got a bit of bacon. Maria and Phil both sat down after serving everyone, and everyone continued to dive into their food, talking and laughing.
A doorbell rang the minute after everyone finished eating.
Nick stood. “I wonder who that could be.”
Maria stood.
She had a feeling she knew who it was.
They all walked into the living room, and Nick opened the front door. “Pierce.”
“Nick, the kids are coming back with me. Where are they?”
Maria saw Nick’s fists clenched. “Not happening, Pierce.”
“You’ll lose this fight, Nick.”
Maria walked over to the front door. She gave Pierce a smile he didn’t deserve. “Mr. Pierce, is there something you need?”
“You know what I need.” Pierce snarled. “And you must give the kids back. They are supposed to stay at the orphanage now.”
Nick slowly stepped outside, Maria nodded at Phil and went outside, and soon, everyone went outside.
“This home isn’t safe, Nick.”
“Is this really the home that’s unsafe, Pierce? Because by my knowledge, all of the kids were just fine when they left three days ago. But oh, surprise, surprise, Steve now has a few bruises on him, and I’m sure the others do too. How do you explain that, Pierce?”
“Kids have accidents, Nick,” Pierce smirked, “they’re often very clumsy.”
“Clumsy? That’s what you blame their bruises on? It’s a lame excuse, Pierce, and a very unbelievable one.”
“The kids are coming with me, Nick. This minute.”
“No we’re not.”
Everyone turned to face Tony.
Maria raised an eyebrow. “Tony, what are you-?”
“We’re not going with you, Pierce. There’s no way we’re going back to the orphanage, ever.”
Pierce’s eyes flared with anger. “Hold your tongue, Tony. Now.”
“You’re not in charge of me. Besides,” Tony pulled out his phone, “I have proof of what you’ve done. Photo and video evidence of what you’ve done to hurt us.”
“What are you trying to prove, Tony?” Pierce asked, crossing his arms.
Tony shrugged and smirked. “I don’t have to prove anything. I have the proof. So, let us stay with Nick and leave us alone, and I won’t send these pics to my friend Rhodey. His dad is a judge, you know.”
“You will do no such thing.” Pierce snarled, taking a step towards Tony.
“Oh, look at this…” Tony held up his phone and grinned, “Rhodey’s number. I’m about to send him the pictures and video…”
“You will not.” Pierce said. “Give me the phone.”
“Not happening,” Tony shook his head, “it’s too late Pierce, I’m sending them.”
Pierce almost got to Tony, but Vision wrapped his arms around Tony and floated up into the air.
Tony laughed. “Try and get me now, Pierce.”
Pierce stared up at him for a long moment. He turned to Nick, eyes shooting daggers. “Fine, Nicholas, you win for now. But I’ll be back, and next time, I’ll have the arrest warrants for all three of you and more of the law with me.”
Nick grinned and waved. “Good riddance Pierce, see you later.”
Pierce got into his car and drove away.
Vision slowly sank down and set Tony on the driveway.
Tony smirked and walked up the driveway towards them.
“Tony…how did you get those photos and video?” Bruce asked, raising an eyebrow.
Tony shrugged. “Good at hiding and watching and be quiet, I guess. Recorded it and stuff. Also, maybe I lied a bit…” Tony grinned, “because I already sent Rhodey the evidence.”
Maria blinked a couple times. “And Rhodey’s dad is a judge…”
Tony nodded. “That’s right.”
“That means Pierce can be prosecuted…” Natasha whispered.
Bucky nodded, holding onto Becca’s hand, smiling. “That’s right.”
Nick smiled from ear to ear. “Which means our family is safe.”
Maria smiled. “Sure is.”
They all hugged, laughed, and cheered.
~*~
The big wooden doors of the courthouse slammed open, and they all walked down the steps, laughter mingling with the air of winter, suits and dresses flapping in the wind.
All of the kids from Pierce’s orphanage had found good families that would care for them, Pierce’s orphanage was shut down, and Pierce was being taken to prison for various crimes.
And most important of all, all of the kids were completely and fully in Nick’s custody.
Phil looked around at all of the kids as they all walked down the steps and smiled. “Now that we’ve gotten this done, how should we celebrate? It’s a little cold for our usual victory ice cream.”
“Hot chocolate!” Peter cried, up on top of Tony’s shoulders.
Maria laughed and nodded. “Hot chocolate sounds delicious.”
Bruce nodded. “Let’s do it!”
They all got to the closest coffee shop, which was serving hot chocolate in the cold winter months, and Nick got everyone a cup.
They pushed a couple of tables together and all sat around it, drinking hot cocoa, talking, and laughing.
They were family.
And Nick couldn’t be more grateful for the family they had; the family they made.
Their family was back together.
Their family was safe.
Their family was beautiful.
Their family was complete.
For now at least.
Epilogue
Pans clattered together in the kitchen. “Phil, where is the cake pan again!?”
Phil walked into the room, carrying a box of party decorations. “It should be in that drawer, I thought.”
“Found it.”
Phil chuckled. It was right in front of her, she just hadn’t seen it yet. He slowly shook his head. “Typical Maria,” he teased.
Maria shot him a playful glare.
Nick walked into the kitchen, setting down a small box on the kitchen counter. “Can any of us believe this day has come already?”
Phil slowly shook his head, unable to believe the reality of any of it. “Not one bit. How could Peter be turning sixteen already? It seems impossible.”
“They’ve all grown up so fast.” Maria whispered; eyes partially brimmed with tears.
Nick nodded in agreement. “For sure.”
“Hey Dad, how’s the banner look?”
Nick turned around to face Steve, who had poked his head into the kitchen, slicking back his blonde hair with his hand, smiling. He’d become a good, strong young man at twenty-five, a natural born leader and a gentleman, dating Peggy Carter ever since high school.
Nick nodded. “It looks great. Good job helping him, Tony.”
Tony grinned. Still ever the same Tony, just twenty-seven instead of seventeen, now having started a company, Fury Industries, and married to Pepper with an almost one year old little girl, Morgan.
“Uncle Phil, I think Peter’s almost here!” Pietro cried, rushing into the room, and the others all quickly followed behind him.
Pietro and Wanda, both twenty-one, both working to gain an income and maybe prepare for college maybe one day.
Becca, eighteen, pursuing a degree in education so she could be a teacher.
Bruce, twenty-three, pursuing a doctorate in medical college.
Natasha, twenty-four, teaching dance and ballet at a local dance school as an instructor.
Cint, twenty-five, married to Laura who was carrying their first child, with a dream to start a farm one day and becoming a professional archer.
Bucky, twenty-six, working at a local home for abused and neglected kids and teens.
Sam, twenty-seven, working for a flying degree from the American Air Force academy so he could become a pilot.
Loki, twenty-eight, who was pursuing a degree in acting.
Thor, thirty, with his wife, Jane, and two twin boys, Ean and Ethan, who had their father’s lightning abilities.
And then Peter, who hadn’t arrived yet, just now turning sixteen, who was dating MJ, who he had known since first grade, and still in high school, but with big dreams on his mind and a whole life ahead of him.
Life was good.
Life was perfect.
The door opened; everyone hid.
Peter flicked on a light switch. “Uh, hello? Anyone-“
Everyone jumped out at once. “Surprise!”
Peter grinned. “Guys, you shouldn’t have!”
A beep sounded.
Nick turned and pressed a button on the kitchen counter.
An alarm. A villain attack.
Nick turned to all of them, his family, his kids. “Suit up.”
They all rushed off.
Nick pressed another button, and a screen showed up. A silhouette of a man showed. The man chuckled. “You will never stop me, Nicholas J. Fury. I am unstoppable…and your team is no match for me.”
Nick turned to see that everyone had already quickly suited up into their superhero uniforms, and he smiled.
He slowly turned back to the screen and grinned. “Except that’s where you’re wrong, Punk, we’re not a team…”
Steve held his shield, and everyone stood posed and ready. “Avenger Family,” he grinned, “…Assemble.”
Fury turned to face and grinned at the silhouette once more. “We’re a family.”
The End…
May 31, 2023 at 9:34 pm #145733@freedomwriter76
Awwww Rhodey saves the day Yay!!! what a great way to bring him in
But I’m really sad that they’re all grown up ):):
If you write a sequel will it be about their kids or will you fill in the gap years? (I’m voting for the gap years XD)
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-ThorneMay 31, 2023 at 9:35 pm #145734@FREEDOMWRITER76
You could not have wrapped it up better 😭😭😭😭💖
That was just so good!!
Aww them being such a family?! And it’s all just too perfect. 🥰
Bucky’s job? That’s so sweet 😭😭
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
May 31, 2023 at 10:07 pm #145735@freedomwriter76 😭 SOB THEY AREN’T BABIES ANYMORE?!?!
AGH MY BABY PETERRRR 😭….
im so glad they’re happy but….
sigh… I’ll really miss my baby Peter. I want more of him and big bro Tony….
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebMay 31, 2023 at 10:19 pm #145738sigh… I’ll really miss my baby Peter. I want more of him and big bro Tony….
I know right? XD I’ll miss my Wanda and Vis XD *me wiping away a tear* they grow up so fast XD
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-ThorneJune 1, 2023 at 1:53 pm #145773@freedomwriter76 AHHHH THEIR JOBS EEEEEEEEEEEEE
I LOVE IT!!!!!
oh and my brother’s name is Ethan too lol
I need more of this.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
June 1, 2023 at 1:59 pm #145775Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings Awww, thank y’all so much!!!! I’m so happy y’all love this!!!! 🥰🥰🥰
And yes, it’s sad to see the little ones go, but trust me, the sequel will be good too!!! <3
June 1, 2023 at 2:05 pm #145777@freedomwriter76
And yes, it’s sad to see the little ones go, but trust me, the sequel will be good too!!! <3
*me crying in the corner* I know but it still makes me really sad. Wanda and Vision better be a thing (I’m not sure how ethical it is to date a robot, but I think it would be sweet XD)
And under no circumstances can anyone die!! XD I couldn’t stand that
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-ThorneJune 1, 2023 at 2:10 pm #145780@freedomwriter76
*cries* I just read like 6 chapters in 10 minutes, and GIRL I LOVED THEM!!!!! I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, the epilogue and all of their jobs, and AH IT’S WONDERFUL BUT I’M SAD IT’S OVER!❤😭
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
June 1, 2023 at 3:41 pm #145849@freedomwriter76
GIRLLL!!!! THAT WAS SUCH A GOOD WAY TO END IT UGHHH 😭😭😭💖🥰 LOVE IT SO MUCH!!! But I’m gonna miss little Peter…and Tony and Steve and Bucky and Nat and Bruce and Pietro…Just all of them 😭😭💖🥰
And I LOVE the last line. They’re a family 🥰
#HugRikerSquad
June 1, 2023 at 6:33 pm #145854Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@euodia-vision @lightoverdarkness6 Ahh, thank y’all so much!!!! 💖💖💖💖💖
I know it’s sad, but I’m also so happy to see it come to a happy conclusion 🥰🥰
June 5, 2023 at 4:21 pm #146439Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @smiley @godlyfantasy12 @euodia-vision @lightoverdarkness6 @elishavet-pidyon
Y’all…I have a surprise!!!!!!!!! 😁😄😊🤩❤️
The sequel has started!!!!❤️❤️
Chapter 1
Laughter sounded. “Woah, I almost fell off!”
“I still beat you, Peter!”
“Only cause I almost fell off!”
He chuckled quietly and walked over to the staircase. “Pietro, Peter, there isn’t a reason to fight.”
Peter grinned brightly with a gap-toothed smile, a tooth missing from his front, bottom row. “Uncle Phil! You should ride down the banister!” He pointed, his always awry brown hair falling into his face.
Phil chuckled and slowly shook his head. “I don’t know about that. I’m too old for that, you know.”
Pietro laughed. “Uncle Phil, you’re not that old! You’re old, but you’re not that old!”
“Pietro!” Wanda cried, walking into the room, trailed by Vision, hands on her hips.
It was a position she had seemed to have begun to favor as time passed by.
Pietro copied her, putting his hands on his hips. “What!? He is old, he just said he was, he’s just not SUPER old!”
Peter laughed and nodded. “Yeah, not really, really old!”
“What’s all this about Uncle Phil being really old?”
“Hey now, watch how you say that, Mister.” Phil teased, turning to face Steve as he entered the room.
Steve laughed, slicking back his bright blonde hair. “Alright, what did I miss?”
Pietro, Peter, and Wanda all launched into the story.
Phil chuckled, listening. He glanced at Steve, who listened with patience and with a smile.
Steve, who was already taller than Phil, Maria, and as tall as Nick. The only one who had Steve beat was Thor, and only by an inch.
“Everyone, dinner’s ready!”
Phil smiled. “Come on, let’s go eat some dinner.”
“Yay!” Peter cried, taking Phil’s hand, and beginning to skip away, Phil following close behind.
Pietro, Steve, Wanda, and Vision followed close behind. Vision didn’t eat, but he enjoyed sitting at the table with everyone else.
“So, now you know what happened!?” Pietro asked Steve, walking beside him.
Steve laughed and slowly shook his head. “Not really. I heard three different stories at once…and honestly, I don’t know if I heard any of them.”
“For shame, Steve, for shame.” Pietro playfully scolded.
Steve laughed and tousled Pietro’s hair before rushing away.
“HEY!” Pietro cried, chasing after him into the dining room.
Phil laughed. He walked into the dining room just as Pietro jumped into a chair. “I beat you, Steve, I beat you!”
“You’re wild.” Tony said with a roll of his eyes, but he smiled as he set silverware on the table.
“Tony! You’re back!” Peter hugged Tony.
“Woah, not like I left for a week.” Tony hugged Peter back after setting down the final fork. “Did you have fun at school?”
“Uh huh! We went to a science museum today! Did you have fun Tony!?”
Tony chuckled. “Work’s not exactly fun, Peter, but sure, it was enjoyable, yeah.”
“No fun at work? I never want to work then!” Pietro cried.
Phil laughed. “You have to work if you want to earn money, kiddo.”
Pietro tapped his chin. “I guess you’re right…hmm, maybe I’ll just find fun work. Maybe I could work at a Zoo.”
“Maybe, maybe Pietro. But are we sure you don’t belong in a zoo?” Bucky asked with a wink, walking into the room, setting a potholder in the middle of the long dining room table, Becca trailing right behind him.
“I think he’s right, Pietro…” Sam said, tapping his chin, setting down a pot on the potholder Bucky had put down.
Natasha, Bruce, Clint, Loki, Steve, Tony, and even Thor nodded in agreement, and Wanda and Peter laughed.
Pietro stuck out his tongue. “You guys are the worst.”
“What about me being the worst?” Nick asked with a smile, walking into the dining room.
Maria shook her head, clicking her tongue. “We all already knew you were the worst, Nick.”
Phil laughed.
Yes, life was good.
Two years had quickly passed since they’d finally and officially adopted all of the kids.
Two years since Pierce had been put in prison.
All of the kids had grown up so fast.
And life was good.
Very good.
June 5, 2023 at 4:47 pm #146440@freedomwriter76
WHAT YAYYYYYYY
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
June 5, 2023 at 4:52 pm #146443Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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June 5, 2023 at 4:52 pm #146444@freedomwriter76
Eeeeeeeehhhhhhh I love it XD
Wands and Peter Yayyyyy I needed more of thrm
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