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May 30, 2023 at 7:43 pm #145602
@freedomwriter76
Awwwww I love it so muchhhh!!!! 💖💖💖💖
i have been able to keep this a secret for so long even tho i’ve wanted to spoil time and time again XD
😲🫣 Oh gosh…But I know that feeling XD It’s hard not to spill a plot twist isn’t it?! XD
And I echo Godly.
WHAT HAPPENS??!! Is everyone ok?? Don’t hurt anyone too badly please 🥺
#HugRikerSquad
May 30, 2023 at 7:46 pm #145603@freedomwriter76
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*Sobs*
NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! THE BABIESSSSS!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭
PEIRCE!!!! 😡😡😡😡😡
#HugRikerSquad
May 30, 2023 at 7:55 pm #145604@freedomwriter76 SCREEEEEE NOOOOOOOOOO!!! WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN TO THEM?!?! IS HE GOING TO HURT THEM?!?!
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebMay 30, 2023 at 8:20 pm #145607@freedomwriter76
Noooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! If I were Thor or Loki I would have punched Peirce no matter the risk XD
Wanda and Vision nooooo!!!! My heart is breaking
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneMay 30, 2023 at 8:53 pm #145610Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Awwwww I love it so muchhhh!!!! 💖💖💖💖
Awwww, tysm!!!! ❤️❤️❤️
😲🫣 Oh gosh…But I know that feeling XD It’s hard not to spill a plot twist isn’t it?! XD
And I echo Godly.
WHAT HAPPENS??!! Is everyone ok?? Don’t hurt anyone too badly please 🥺
Very hard 😂😂
i meannnnnnnnn, it won’t be too badly
*Sobs*
*offers you fresh baked cookies*
NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! THE BABIESSSSS!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭
PEIRCE!!!! 😡😡😡😡😡
I knowwwwwwwwwww 😭😭😭
yesssssss….😤😡😠
SCREEEEEE NOOOOOOOOOO!!! WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN TO THEM?!?! IS HE GOING TO HURT THEM?!?!
Uhhhhhhh…i guess you’ll find out????
Noooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! If I were Thor or Loki I would have punched Peirce no matter the risk XD
😂😂😂😂 probably me too…XD
Wanda and Vision nooooo!!!! My heart is breaking
*sobs* 😭💔
May 30, 2023 at 9:14 pm #145611@freedomwriter76
YOU MENACE!! NOT THE CHILDRENNNN!!!
Om but in all seriousness i’m very curious to see where this goes…
I’m going to make a prediction lol, now that the kids have had a taste of love they are going to know enough to not let bad guy (lol) be bad? I just wanna see him get beat up ngl
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
May 31, 2023 at 10:08 am #145627Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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YOU MENACE!! NOT THE CHILDRENNNN!!!
IKR!? What a jerk 😠
Om but in all seriousness i’m very curious to see where this goes…
Heheeeee, you and me both XD
I’m going to make a prediction lol, now that the kids have had a taste of love they are going to know enough to not let bad guy (lol) be bad?
Maybeeeeeeee, maybe not 😏 I’m keeping my lips zipped up tight🤐
I just wanna see him get beat up ngl
😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
May 31, 2023 at 4:07 pm #145695@freedomwriter76 Awww no! Pierce, you are so mean…..They’re just kids, ok???
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
May 31, 2023 at 4:10 pm #145700Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h Ikr? 😭😤
May 31, 2023 at 4:14 pm #145707@freedomwriter76 PLEEEEEEAAAASE let them go back! I need more avenger-sibling cute overload interactions…..
XD XD XD
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
May 31, 2023 at 4:21 pm #145713Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h we’ll see what happens…😏
May 31, 2023 at 5:04 pm #145722Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings
I have more chapters!!!
After this, there will probably only be 2-3 chapters left…bittersweet, but I’m also happy to be seeing this story finally come to a conclusion 💖
i also love Bucky so much XD
Chapter 52
He stared blankly at the cracked ceiling above him, moonlight faintly streaming through the curtained windows.
Steve shifted on the rough mattress, uncomfortable and unable to sleep. He quietly hissed when he landed, uncomfortably, on a fresh bruise. He sat up, knowing that after hours of futile trying, he wasn’t going to sleep.
He turned, and saw Tony, wide awake, watching him. “Tony, you should be asleep.”
“So should you, but you’re not,” Tony sat up and raised an eyebrow, “can’t sleep?”
Steve nodded. “Yeah, you?”
“Same. And it didn’t help that Peter wouldn’t fall asleep for a few hours…he’s finally asleep now.” Tony whispered, motioning to an almost motionless Peter, who slept beside him on the bed.
There were dozens of beds in the rooms. Steve didn’t even know if he could count them all.
“I want to go home.”
Tony nodded, knees rising to his chest. “Me too.”
The door to the room opened and Bucky stepped in, slicking back his shoulder-length brown hair, a large gun at his side. He set it down beside the door and pulled off the mask covering his face.
“Bucky, where were you?” Tony asked, raising an eyebrow.
“On a mission, what do you think? Where’s Becca?”
“Asleep,” Steve bit his lip, “but she wouldn’t sleep for a while…always asking where you were. She’s asleep now; Natasha’s with her.”
Bucky nodded, a bit of tenseness releasing from his body. “Good. Glad she’s asleep. Hey, I’ll be back in a few minutes.”
Tony crossed his arms, getting off the bed, carefully, to make sure Peter didn’t wake. “Where are you going now?”
“I need to go talk to someone. I’ll be back in a bit. You two should really get some sleep. Oh,” Bucky reached into his pocket, “and Steve, take this.”
Steve caught the thing Bucky threw at him. He took a closer look at it. “A key? Bucky, what-?”
“Shh. Hide it under my pillow. I’ll be back soon.”
Bucky grabbed the gun he had put down and left the room, the door softly closing behind him.
Steve twirled the key in his hands, the moonlight reflecting off the snow outside reflecting onto the metal.
It had snowed under the cover of darkness, and it was already high.
Steve got off his bed, went to Bucky’s, and slipped the key underneath his pillow.
“What’s that key for?”
“I don’t know, Tony…I really don’t.”
“Tony…” Peter whimpered, stirring and awaking.
Tony got back onto the bed and gently brushed hair off of Peter’s forehead. “Hey Peter…you need to go back to sleep, buddy.”
Peter grabbed Tony’s arm, hugging it like he would a teddy bear. “I wanna go home Tony.”
“I know, Peter…me too.”
Peter’s bright brown eyes filled with tears. “I miss Daddy and Uncle Phil and Auntie Maria and Thor and Loki.”
Steve saw tears brim Tony’s eyes. Tony cleared his throat and slowly nodded. “I know, Peter…I miss all of them too.”
Steve felt his own set of tears threaten, but he didn’t let them fall.
The door opened again, and Bucky stepped inside.
“I hid it under your pillow.”
Bucky grinned. “Thanks Steve. Now, why don’t you go to sleep?”
Steve shook his head. “Can’t.”
Bucky pulled out the key underneath his bed. “…Maybe that’s a good thing.” He turned around and gave Steve a wink. “Because I think I’m gonna need you for something. Tony, can you start waking the others?”
“Peter won’t let go,” Tony whispered, but looked over at Peter, “hey Peter, hey buddy, you wanna help me wake up the others real quick?”
Peter nodded sleepily.
He and Tony began waking up the others.
Steve faced Bucky, raising an eyebrow. “What are you up to, Buck?”
Bucky grinned, holding up the key. “I’m getting us out of here.”
Chapter 53
Natasha rubbed the sleep from her eyes, sitting on the floor with the others, all of them keeping their voices down to whispers.
“There’s only two people guarding. Clint’s going to distract one of them with his bow and arrow,” Bucky nodded towards Clint, “and the other one…Wanda, we’ll need you to put him to sleep.”
“I-I still can’t control my powers all the way.”
“Come on, sis, you got this,” Pietro said, smiled, “and besides, if it doesn’t work, Tony can just knock him out or something, can’t you Tony?”
Tony smirked. “Sure. It’ll be easy.”
Bucky nodded. “I’ll hold onto the key to the front door, and I’ll be the first one to the door and the last one out of it. We have to be as quiet as possible, else they might catch us.”
Natasha raised an eyebrow. “Where did you get the key?”
Bucky’s smirk told her everything she needed to know.
Well, at least Bucky used his thievery for good.
“Everyone understand the plan?”
Steve nodded. “I think we’ve all got it, Bucky. We can’t fail.”
Bruce shook his head. “Right. We have to get out of here.”
Clint stood. “Alright then…let’s do this.”
They all went to the door.
Tony grabbed the door handle. “Three…two…one!” He whispered, and gently creaked the door open.
There was a man posted just across the hall from their room. “Hey, what are you-!?” A red swirl surrounded the man’s head, he sighed happily, and slowly collapsed to the floor, asleep.
Pietro and Wanda high-fived.
Bucky slipped out of the room. “Come on guys, the next guard is by the front door.
They all raced down the hall as quiet as humanly possible.
Natasha stayed right with the others, but something just felt…odd.
As if they were being watched.
She quickly pushed her way forward, grabbed a knife off of Bucky’s side, and threw it at the security camera watching them.
The cameras were new.
Sam quietly whistled. “Nice shot Natasha.”
“Thanks,” she handed Bucky back his knife, “thank goodness these have come in handy multiple times.”
Bucky chuckled.
They all hid behind a pillar, only inches from the front door.
Clint plucked an arrow from the quiver on his back. Nick had made the bow and arrow for him, knowing how much he liked archery, and Natasha was glad, especially in this moment, that Clint had a bow and arrow of his own.
He pulled the arrow back, closed one eye to get a better aim, and launched the arrow towards the kitchen, which was to the right of the front door.
The man at the door ran towards the kitchen.
“Now!” Steve cried, and Bucky rushed to the door. He quickly unlocked it with the key and quietly opened it, and he motioned the others along.
Natasha grabbed both Wanda and Pietro’s hands and pulled them both outside with her. Steve came right behind her, Becca holding his hand.
Sam, Bruce, and Clint followed right behind.
That left only Bucky, Tony, and Peter.
“Guys!” Bruce hissed, urging them to come.
Another voice sounded. “HEY, where are you kids-!?”
“No, meanie, leave us alone!” Peter screamed, jumping out of Tony’s arms, shooting his webbing at the man’s face.
Webbing covered his face and he cursed, trying to pull it off…only for his hands to get stuck too.
“This is our chance!” Bucky cried.
Tony scooped Peter back up. “Nice save, kiddo.”
Tony, Peter, and Bucky rushed outside.
Bucky closed the front door behind them.
Natasha nodded. “Let’s go home.”
~*~
Nick paced back and forth across the floor in the living room, unable to sleep.
Truth be told, none of them could sleep.
Not Nick, or Phil, or Maria, or even Thor and Loki for that matter. And, well, Vision never slept…he didn’t need to.
None of had slept at all in the three days that the kids had been gone.
Nick sank onto the couch beside Thor, who was trying to comfort his brother. He covered his face. “What do we do…?”
“I can go knock Pierce into the next century.” Thor muttered, anger lacing his features.
“I don’t think violence is the answer here.” Phil whispered, tear streaks on his cheeks.
Maria nodded in agreement. “Yes. I don’t think that’s the best course of action right now…it’d only make us look worse.”
“I believe Phil and Maria are right.” Vision put in.
“We didn’t even do anything he accused us of, and he took them all away!” Loki sobbed.
Thor rubbed his brother’s back, concern in his blue eyes.
Several knocks sounded on the front door.
“Who would be coming at this hour?” Nick asked, raising an eyebrow.
“I don’t know,” Vision stood from where he was sitting on the couch, “but I will fight someone if I have to.”
He left to go to the front door, and everyone else stood to follow him.
The door opened.
“Vision!”
A voice, feminine, young, familiar.
Nick rushed to the front door, the others all behind him.
And they were almost barreled over by a small sea of kids…their kids.
Tears blurred Nick’s vision, and he pulled the closest two, Steve and Bruce, into his embrace. “Oh, you’re back…you’re back.” He kissed the tops of their heads.
“How did you get back home?” Thor asked, Clint in his embrace.
“We escaped, thanks to Bucky stealing a key,” Tony hugged Peter tighter, “and this kiddo here saved all of us.”
Phil took both Tony and Peter into his arms. “We’re just so glad you’re all okay…and that Peter was the hero of the day.”
Peter giggled and wrapped his arms around Phil’s neck. “I love you, Uncle Phil.”
Phil hugged him back. “I love you too, Peter.”
The next several hours were lost in a mess of love, of words and of tears.
Everything was lost in the wonderful, beautiful mess known as family.
May 31, 2023 at 5:24 pm #145723@freedomwriter76
eeeeeeeeeehhhhh I love it XD they escaped (but is it really that easy? or is there more XD)
And Wanda was able to use her powers!!! Go Wanda!!
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneMay 31, 2023 at 5:25 pm #145724@freedomwriter76
Loved that! I’m so glads I got to start reading this before it comes to a end!
“Come on, sis, you got this,” Pietro said, smiled, “and besides, if it doesn’t work, Tony can just knock him out or something, can’t you Tony?”
XD
Also peters save was so hilarious and unexpected.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
May 31, 2023 at 7:18 pm #145728@freedomwriter76 AHHH YAY!!!! But I’m so scared cuz u said it’s bittersweet….GAH!!! And what will Pierce do now?!?!
and Peter’s save was so cute. He’s a big boy now 🥰
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