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May 26, 2023 at 3:29 pm #145287
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@keilah-h glad you think so!! đ
May 29, 2023 at 8:45 pm #145458@freedomwriter76
So I looked up on Google if Steve had any siblings and it turns out he had a brother!
but he wasn’t really mentioned that often and he was assumed to be dead because he didn’t fall into ice Now my mind has a thousand plots forming XD
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ââIsaiah⏠â43âŹ:â1âŹMay 30, 2023 at 12:03 pm #145491Anonymous
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@smiley oooh, cool!!! never heard of him having a brother before XD probably bc in the movies he doesn’t, and I don’t read the comics đ
May 30, 2023 at 12:07 pm #145492@freedomwriter76
Yeah XD they didn’t even give him a name
And he was only in one comic and it was just a flashback but well it got my mind thinking XD
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May 30, 2023 at 12:10 pm #145494@freedomwriter76
I know right?! But the fact that Bucky and Steve had younger siblings that we never hear about is kind of sad
I want to see them as older brothers!!! XD
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ââIsaiah⏠â43âŹ:â1âŹMay 30, 2023 at 12:15 pm #145496Anonymous
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@smiley (Bucky DID mention he had a sister in Falcon and The Winter Soldier, which implies that in the MCU, he still has a sister, and in the Smithsonian exhibit, it says that he’s the oldest of 4)
YESS, THEY WOULD MAKE SUCH AMAZING OLDER BROTHERS!!!!!!! đđ
May 30, 2023 at 12:19 pm #145497@freedomwriter76
WAIT WHAT?! I didn’t know that (But I haven’t seen Falcon and the Winter Soldier ) It’s hard for me because Steve is gone and I like Sam but he’s not Captain America (or at least not the Captain America I love)
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ââIsaiah⏠â43âŹ:â1âŹMay 30, 2023 at 12:26 pm #145500Anonymous
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@smiley Yeahhh, really cool!!!! (Bucky said it when he was on a date with a girl, it was funny, they just played Battleships đđ)
yea, i get that, but the show was SOOOO GOOD!!!! đđ
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Chapter 48
Nick paced back and forth in the hospital hallway.
Tonyâs heart issue had been terrifying, and this was just as terrifying.
âMr. Fury?â
He turned to face a nurse, dread and worry lacing his features, making him look so much older than he really was. âYes?â
âI came to tell you that youâre free to come see your two sons now.â
âThank you,â Nick smiled, âitâs greatly appreciated.â
âYouâre welcome.â The woman replied with a soft smile, walking past him and entering another room.
Nick went to the room Steve and Sam were in and gently eased the door open.
Sam laid asleep on one bed, a red cast on his right arm, but Steve was sitting up in bed, wide awake.
âSteve, youâre not sleeping?â
Steve shrugged. âCanât. Uhm, Nick, what did they do for me?â
âThey made sure you didnât have a concussion. They were going to stitch the back of your head, butâŚit was healed by the time you got here.â
âThe serum.â Steve whispered, quietly, softly.
Nick nodded. âSometimes itâs a blessing.â
âAnd sometimes itâs a curse.â Steve sighed. âI donât know, NickâŚI tried to not fight Alec, but he messed with the others, and I justâŚâ
âYou hate bullies Steve, trust me, I understand,â Nick settled on the bed to sit beside Steve, âtrust me, I understand more than you know. I understand a lot more things than you know.â
âThor said you fought in war.â
Nick nodded. âI did.â
âThor said thatâs why you seemed very rough and calloused when he and Loki were first adopted.â
âYes,â Nick nodded again, âI was very callous back then. I felt like I had to be.â
âYou remember all of itâŚdonât you?â
Nick faced SteveâŚand saw understanding that pooled in the fifteen-year-oldâs blue eyes, understanding about things he shouldnât have understood at his age, yet did. Nick brushed a stray strand of blonde hair out of Steveâs eyes and off his forehead, putting it with the rest of his hair. âI do, but Iâve learned how to cope with it.â
Steve slowly nodded. ââŚIs that what happened to your eye?â
Nick nodded. âItâs why I was discharged. I didnât quite want to leave yetâŚbut it led me to coming home and adopting Thor and Loki, and if I had never done that,â Nick smiled, gently laying one of his hands on Steveâs cold cheek, âthen I never would have found and adopted all of you.â
âYouâre the first person who actually wanted us,â Steveâs gaze fell, âeveryone else heard about the chaos we made to escape bad foster homesâŚand eventually, no one even tried to take us in.â
Nick smiled. He gently raised Steveâs chin, making their eyes meet. âWell, thatâs where Iâm different,â he playfully tapped Steveâs nose, âI donât mind crazy. Iâve raised Thor and especially Loki, after all.â
Steve laughed, and Nick laughed with him.
âI guess weâre not too crazy compared to Loki.â
Nick laughed and shook his head. âNot one bit. He was always getting himself into troubleâŚalways getting scrapped up. He was quite literally the exact definition of trouble.â
Steveâs blue eyes lit with curiosity. âWhy did you adopt all of us, Nick? Isnât it a lot to take in ten kids at once?â
Nick slowly nodded. âYes,â he smiled gently, âbut I met all of you, I saw that you were all amazing kids, and I didnât want to leave any of you alone.â
Steve stared at him for a long momentâŚthen smiled and threw his arms around Nick and hugged him, tight, his cheek pressed against Nickâs black coat. âThanks Nick.â
Nick blinked.
It was the first time Steve had been the first one to start a hug.
It was the first time Steve was the one who started an embrace of any kind.
Nick slowly wrapped his arms around Steve, laying his chin on top of Steveâs headâŚand hugged Steve closer, hugged him tighter.
Because nothing in the world would ever make him let go.
Chapter 49
The gymnasium buzzed with activity. The Saturday science fair was going well and going strong.
There were students, teachers, faculty, parents, and full families that filled the entire space.
Bruce didnât know if he had ever seen a gymnasium so packed.
âHey Bruce, can you hand me that cord?â Tony asked, sporting an excited grin.
Bruce nodded and handed him the cord.
Heâd decided to go on ahead and help Tony with his project. He truly didnât have any ideas, or time, for his own, but at least he was helping Tony.
Even if he didnât entirely agree with making the robot.
âTony?â
âMmm?â Tony mumbled, attaching the cord to something on the robot frame.
âAre you sure this is really a good idea? I justâŚI donât knowâŚwhat if this ends up a lot worse than Vision did?â
âCome on, Bruce, donât worry, itâll be fine. Hey, Nick,â Tony waved, âwhat do you think so far?â
Nick walked over, trailed by Peter, who was holding his hand, who seemed excited by all the science things. Nick smiled and nodded. âIt looks good, Tony. Did you make sure it doesnât have any bugs?â
âIâm certain weâre safe, Nick. Peter, what do you think?â
Peterâs brown eyes widened. âIt looks SO COOL!â
Nick chuckled and gently tousled Peterâs hair. âCome on, letâs leave Tony and Bruce to their robot. What do you want to look at next?â
Peter pointed at something, jumping up and down, and Nick followed after him to another table.
Bruce smiled. He was always so excited, always so energetic, always seemed to be soâŚhappy.
He turned his attention back to the robot. âWeâre about done, arenât we Tony?â
âYep, just a couple more minutes.â
âWow. That looks amazing.â
Tony almost fell off the stool he was standing on.
âTony!â Bruce cried, grabbing onto him, keeping him from falling.
âI didnât think I had the power to knock you over with just my words,â Pepper teased, âbut thatâs one interesting superpower to have.â
âAh, Pepper, oh, uhm, hey.â Tony greeted, slicking back his black hair, grinning wildly, cheeks flushed a faint pink.
Bruce pushed up his glasses and stepped aside so Tony could get off the stool.
Pepper gave Tony a smile, brushing a strand of her red hair behind her ear. âIt looks really good, Tony. What do you want your robot to do?â
âSave the world, maybe, one day, who knows,â Tony smiled, âbut I named him Ultron.â
âThatâs an interesting name. Cool though.â Pepper smiled. âSo, I was wondering, Iâve talked about you, and my parents and sister really want to meet you. So, yeahâŚwould you maybe like to come over Monday night for dinner? Momâs planning on making some roast beef or something and potatoes.â
Tonyâs flushed cheeks went darker. âUhmâŚyeah, Iâd love to do that. Iâll have to ask my Dad about it.â
Bruce turned to face Tony, raising an eyebrow, pushing up his glasses. Did he hear him right? Did he just call NickâŚDad?
That was a first.
Pepper smiled. âGreat. Let me know. I hope Iâll see you there.â She dropped Tony a wink over her shoulder before walking away to join her friends.
Tony smiled, and slowly faced Bruce.
Bruce gave him a teasing grin.
Tony shoved him, making Bruce laugh. Tony rolled his eyes, but a grin formed on his face, cheeks still flushed a faint pink. âOh, shut up.â
~*~
The judges would be at Tonyâs table any minute.
Tony and Bruce had worked so hard for the robot to get finished in time, and they both waited, excited, especially Tony.
Maria faced them both with a smile. âYou two have worked so hard for this. Iâm sure the judges will love it.â
Bruce nodded and smiled softly, pushing up his glasses. âI hope so.â
âOh, come on Bruce,â Tony playfully poked his brotherâs side, âof course theyâll love it. No one can build a better robot than Tony and Bruce Fury.â
Bruce chuckled.
Maria turned and gave a wave, showing the others where they were.
Phil, Nick, and all the other kids got through the crowd and came over. She gave Phil a quick kiss on the cheek. âThe judges are almost to this table. You all came close to missing it.â
âBut we didnât,â Phil winked, âbesides, Peter had to stop to say hi to his friends from school, Ned and MJ.â
âWas that fun, Peter?â
Peter nodded enthusiastically. âUh huh! Theyâre my best friends forever, Auntie Maria!â
Maria smiled. âOf course. Do you three play a lot during recess?â
âYeah!â Peter popped a lollipop in his mouth.
âDid you get me one? No?â Tony playfully pouted.
Peter giggled and faced Tony with a smile. âWe got you one!â
âItâs probably best if you donât have a lollipop in your mouth when the judges come over, though, so maybe youâll have to wait.â Phil noted.
Tony nodded. âYeahâŚthatâd probably be bad. Me and Bruce can have a sucker in a minute. Hey, here comes the judges!â
Xavier, the principal, the science teacher, Beast, and the school nurse, Jean Gray, were the three judges.
Xavier raised an eyebrow. âAnd what do we have here?â
âHere, sirs, maâam, we have a robot, Ultron, made with AI technology, strong metal, and my own personal programming. My brother Bruce here helped out with a lot of it.â
âWhat does it do?â Beast asked, adjusting his glasses.
âLet me show you. Iâm hoping heâll be able to help keep the world safe one day.â Tony pressed a button. âAnd his name is Ultron.â
The robotâs eyes slowly turned red, and he slowly straightened and stood up straight. He rubbed his metal head and spoke, his voice low and rough. âWhere am I?â
Jean Gray raised an eyebrow. âIt can talk too?â
âSure can,â Bruce looked up at Ultron, âitâs okay. Youâre at a science fair. Me and Tony hereâŚwe made you.â
âUghâŚ,â Ultron stepped forward, âI need to get out of here.â He looked around the room. âHumans.â He muttered.
âUh, hey, Ultron, you good?â Tony asked, raising an eyebrow.
Ultronâs metal boots turned on, and he launched himself up into the air.
He was about to go rogue.
Maria turned. âEveryone, get down!â
She quickly grabbed the closest kid, Wanda, and dove underneath a table, her arms wrapped tight around her, protecting her with the table and with her body.
There were a few sounds of destruction. A few cries from young children.
And thenâŚsilence.
Maria slowly crawled out from underneath the table. âWhat happened?â
Tony came out from where he and Bruce were hiding underneath their table. âI-I donât knowâŚI guess I didnât work out all the bugs.â
âOh, please let Ultron not destroy anything,â Â Maria thought, still holding Wanda tight.
She could only hope that no one would get hurt.
Chapter 50
A few months quickly passed. Vision had thankfully found Ultron and destroyed him. Samâs arm had healed back perfectly. Tony and Pepper were even officially dating.
Life was good.
Natasha adjusted the flowers in Beccaâs braided hair. âThere. All done.â
Becca smiled and twirled, her light pink dress fanning around her. âIâm so happy! Wait, what do I do again?â
âYou and me get to hold the flower baskets and throw flower petals onto the path in front of Maria,â Wanda explained with a smile, âbut we have to try to keep it on the path.â
Becca nodded enthusiastically. âOkay!â
Natasha smiled and went over to Maria, who was having her hair fixed by Pepperâs mom and Jane Foster. âHey Maria?â
âYes Natasha? What do you need?â Maria asked softly, patiently, and Natasha saw her smile in the mirror.
âI guess youâre really excited about this, huh?â
âOf course. Me and Phil have known each other for so long, and I truly love him,â Maria smiled, âbut of course, what makes both of us the happiest is having all of you around.â
Pepperâs mom faced Natasha with a smile. âSheâs an absolutely beautiful bridesmaid, Maria. You, Phil, and Nick have good reasons to be happy for all of these kids.â
Maria turned and faced Natasha with a warm smile. âThe prettiest.â
Natasha smiled and turned to see some of her friends. âHey, Pepper, Peggy, Laura, Kate,â Kate was a next-door neighbor girl, aged only 12, that Clint had become friends with recently, âare all of you ready?â
âSure are,â Peggy smiled, âand ready as soon as everyone else is.â
âWell,â Maria stood, finally done getting ready, âit will be time soon. So, flower girls, bridesmaidsâŚletâs do this.â
~*~
âYouâre not too nervous, are you?â
Phil turned to Nick with a small smile. âWhy would I be? Me and Maria have known each other for many years, besides, I love her. What could go wrong?â
âThe cake could fall and get destroyed.â Bruce noted.
âYou could fall into the chocolate fountain.â Tony added with a laugh.
Sam nodded. âYou could trip when you try to put the ring on Mariaâs hand.â
âYou could get punch all over you at the reception.â Bucky mused.
âYour pants could fall down!â Pietro cried through fits of laughter.
âYou could lose the rings.â Loki added.
âOr you could step on Mariaâs toes when you dance.â Steve said with a grin.
Phil stared at all of them for a long moment. He chuckled and turned to face a mirror. He playfully rolled his eyes. âWow, you kids certainly know how to make a guy feel less nervous.â
Everyone laughed, and Phil couldnât help but smile.
Nick squeezed his shoulder. âEverything will go just fine, donât worry.â
Tony crouched to fix Peterâs bowtie. âYeah Phil, weâre just joking around.â
âYeah! Weâre just being silly, Uncle Phil!â Pietro cried, grinning.
Phil tousled his hair. âI know, kiddo. Trust me, I know youâre all just joking.â
âNick, I need some help.â Bucky mused, trying to fix his tie.
Nick chuckled and walked over. âLet me help you with that.â
Phil watched Nick fix Buckyâs tie, and he smiled.
All of the kids were beginning to get better about opening up. Steveâs therapy was going amazing, and everyone was getting better about letting Nick, Maria, and himself in.
They were improving immensely.
And Phil couldnât be more grateful for having these kids in his life.
May 30, 2023 at 5:20 pm #145591@freedomwriter76
Eeeeeehhhhh I love it XD it’s amazing and Ned, MJ, and Kate!!!! Yay!!!!!!!
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ââIsaiah⏠â43âŹ:â1âŹMay 30, 2023 at 5:28 pm #145593Anonymous
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@smiley AHHH, I’M SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT!!!!!! TYSM!!!!! đđđ
the next chapters are gonna be…AHEM…rough đ đ
May 30, 2023 at 6:14 pm #145594ROUGH?! WHAT DO U MEAN ROUGH?!? FOR WHO?!?
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i have been able to keep this a secret for so long even tho i’ve wanted to spoil time and time again XD
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@godlyfantasy12 @euodia-vision @smiley @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-hChapter 51
Life was going amazing. The kids were adjusting well, and opening up about things.
Phil and Maria had their wonderful honeymoon and were back, and life was back to complete normal.
Life was good.
Yes, everything was going well.
Nick waited in the waiting room of the therapistâs office for Steve, reading a newspaper.
Thankfully, Vision had finally disappeared from the headlinesâŚheâd been on the headlines for a couple of months, ever since he destroyed Ultron.
The door opened and Steve stepped out of the therapistâs office with a big smile. âHey Nick, Iâm done now.â
âGreat,â Nick set down the newspaper, âthen how about we head home? I let Phil borrow the car, so we may have to walk. Thank you, Dr. Raynor.â Nick thanked, thanking the therapist.
She smiled and waved. âSee you Thursday, Steve.â
Steve gave her a smile. âSee you then.â
Nick led Steve outside. âAlright Steve, you want to head straight home, or do you want to do something fun?â
Steve shrugged and smiled. âI donât know, maybe we couldâŚhey Nick, thereâs Phil.â He pointed.
Sure enough, Phil was pulling up to the office in the car. The windows rolled down. âNick, you need to come home.â
Distress laced Philâs features.
That wasnât good. That wasnât good at all. âPhil, whatâs wrong?â
âItâs Pierce. Heâs at the house.â
Nick turned to face Steve, who had tensed, though not as bad as he used to, just at the mention of Pierceâs name. He gently squeezed Steveâs shoulder. âWhat does he want?â
âHe claims the house is unsafeâŚhe came with Police, Nick. We need to get home. Maria called me and let me know.â
Oh no.
No, no, no. Please no.
âSteve, get in the back, please. Alright Phil, letâs get moving.â
Nick got into the passenger seat, Steve got in the backseat, and after they were buckled, Phil started the car and got it moving.
Nick could only hope that he was wrong.
âPierce, what is the meaning of this?â Nick demanded the moment he stepped out of the car, letting the car door slam behind him.
Pierce turned around with a grin. âThis home is unsafe, Nick. You have weapons and a destructive robot. This is no place for kids.â
âTheyâve been fine this entire time and weâve had no problems with safety.â
âMaybe the building isnât the only thing that could harm them.â
Fury blazed inside of Nick. Pierce was trying to blame them for things he had actually been the one to commit.
âSteve, go inside with the others please.â Nick said quietly, stepping forward to stand close to Pierce.
They stood only mere inches apart.
âYou canât stop me Nick,â Pierce grinned, âI have the law on my side.â He motioned to the police heâd brought with him.
âYou canât do this, Pierce.â
âI can do whatever I want. Stand in the way, and all three of you, Thor, and Loki will all be arrested. Youâre all eighteen and older, and you can and will be arrested if you stand in the way and refuse to comply with what the police want.â
âYouâre evil, Pierce. I canât believe I ever called you my friend.â
Pierce smirked, shrugged, and walked away. âPoor judgement on your part, Nick. Simply poor judgement. I already asked Maria to make sure each kid has a bag. Theyâre going, Nick.â
Nick roughly grabbed his arm. âYouâre not taking them away.â He snarled.
Pierce pulled away and grinned. âYou canât win this fight, Nick.â He walked away.
Nick turned around.
Tears brimmed Philâs eyes.
They couldnât stand down.
But what choice did they have?
If they fought, theyâd be arrested and the kids would still be taken awayâŚand Nick would never be able to get them back, not with an arrest on his permanent record.
He walked up to and walked into the house.
Wanda clung to Vision. âI donât want to leave.â
Vision crouched down and hugged her tight, closing his eyes.
He and Wanda had become almost inseparable.
Pietro ran past Nick to jump at Phil. âUncle PhilâŚI donât wanna go.â
Phil got down and hugged Pietro. âI donât want any of you to go, Pietro, but-â Philâs voice broke and tears coursed down his cheeks.
Maria was crouched near the floor, her arms around both Becca and Peter. Tears coursed down her cheeks in droves, and Becca and Peter cried too.
Nick felt his own tears threaten, and before he could stop themâŚthey fell.
Bruce and Sam went to Phil and hugged him too. Natasha and Bucky went to Maria.
Steve, Clint, and Tony came to Nick. Nick wrapped his arms around them, kissing the top of their heads. âI canât let this happen.â
âYou donât have a choice, NickâŚitâll be okay.â Tony whispered, but his voice shook.
Nick held them tighter.
Thor and Loki came over and hugged too.
âWeâre running out of time. Itâs time to go.â
Nick opened his eyes and turned to face Pierce, who stood in the doorway to the home. Pierce nodded. âItâs time to go.â
Tony and Steve slowly pulled away from Nick.
âI donât wanna go, Auntie Maria! I donât wanna.â Peter whined, still clinging to Maria even as she stood, tears coursing down his rounded cheeks in droves.
Pietro wouldnât let go of Phil either. âIâm not going anywhere, Uncle Phil! Iâm not! Never!!!â
Becca sobbed and went to Bucky, who lifted her into his arms, into his embrace, holding her tight, comforting her even as his own tears coursed down his cheeks.
Wanda slowly let go of Vision, but tears coursed down her cheeks. âI donât want to go, VisionâŚâ
âI donât want you to go either.â Vision whispered, squeezing her hand.
âItâs time to go.â Pierce repeated, stepping outside.
âPierce, Sam and Tony are almost eighteen.â Maria pointed out.
Pierce stepped back into the house. ââŚTheyâre not eighteen yet, Maria,â Pierce snapped, âand that means they still have to come.â
âBesides,â Tony pried Peter from Maria and held him in his arms, âwe canât leave each other. Weâre family.â
More tears coursed down Nickâs cheeks. Clint finally, carefully, pried Pietro from Phil, and holding Pietroâs hand, went outside.
They all walked outside.
âTheir bags are already in the van I brought,â Pierce nodded towards it, âso say your final goodbyes.â
The goodbyes were heartfelt, heartbreaking, but quick. Long goodbyes would be too painful, too hard.
Nick pulled away from his hug with Sam.
Everyone was in the van except for Steve.
âSteven,â Pierce tapped the van, âitâs time to go.â
Steve ran at Nick and threw his arms around Nickâs neck.
Nick blinked a couple times. He slowly wrapped his arms around Steve. âSteve?â
Steve hugged him tighter, his tears wetting Nickâs coat. âThank you, DadâŚfor everything.â
Steve pulled away from the hug, smiled through his tears, and went into the van.
The door closed, Pierce got into the driverâs seat.
Through vision blurred by tears, Nick saw the van pull out of the driveway and leaveâŚdriving awayâŚfar, far awayâŚfarther than anything else had ever gone.
Taking away the kids.
Taking away his kids.
Nick stumbled and sank against the front door of the house.
And he sobbed.
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